Messy Applebloom

[dedacct6 2,591]

i messed up so friggen much! so i improvised for the awful smudges with the yellow so thank GOD this was the right character being Applebloom, I added dirt and mud. i don't know. not so proud of this one. also I WAS going to make a video of me drawing it sped up, but the quality of the recorded video was bad and i also JUST noticed the smudges and did over them and all that and it wasn't on camera so i deleted it, Besides It would take too much time to do anyways...
*that mud sploch on her face is the ONLY sploch that looks bad...dang markers!!!*

Hope YOU like it personally i don't... Please Reply and Scale From 1/10 and don't be shy

ChAo

[Batbrony 16,056]

I'm going to give this a solid 8/10; you may be upset with the colors, but personally aside from a few areas where they overlap I think they look just fine.  Don't be so hard on yourself, after all, you did draw this with markers and those bleed so easily that you should be proud this turned out as good as it did, especially considering you were drawing a character covered in mud.  Excellent work TheFlightlessPegasus; can't wait to see more from you soon!!! 

[Candy Blaze 119]

I rate it 9/10

Not only the pony anatomy looks great but the good old technique you used if you make a mistake, make something good from it.

I like the shading on her coat. It's really nice! And mud splotches aren't supposed to be neat. They're supposed to be that messy you silly filly

[Ultimate Fatal 776]

I like it. I give it an 8/10.

Trust me when I say this: You are going to be the toughest critic for your own art. I know from experience.

The only real problem I see is that her front leg looks very odd. Other than that it's amazing~!
Keep it up!

[dedacct6 2,591]

  On 2013-10-08 at 2:30 AM, Fatal said:

I like it. I give it an 8/10.

Trust me when I say this: You are going to be the toughest critic for your own art. I know from experience.

The only real problem I see is that her front leg looks very odd. Other than that it's amazing~!

Keep it up!

Well, that's me...i'm like that even in real life, i usually do it because i love criticizing things, so i criticize my own art to get better, but i guess i am a LITTLE hard on myself but i can't help it, it's my personality lol at least I'm not saying i suck . anyways thanks,thanks for replying. *also your profile pic is FRICKEN ADORABLE!!!!!*

[ReverseFaller 2,484]

Hey, that's pretty good! 

 

You drew Apple Bloom pretty much perfectly, and the mud is a nice touch too. It's a pretty cool drawing, in my opinion. 

[Malinter 3,064]

It looks nice. Only thing i can see is where here belly meets her leg, makes her look like she has no thigh. besides that 7/10 I think.

Edited October 8, 2013 by Nail Malinter

[dedacct6 2,591]

  On 2013-10-08 at 10:01 PM, Nail Malinter said:

It looks nice. Only thing i can see is where here belly meets her leg, makes her look like she has no thigh. besides that 7/10 I think.

I agree, I feel as I'd 7 is what I deserve, though the main thing I didn't like about this drawing was the fact that I really fudged up on the coloring and the body shape in a way, but I guess I can see what your trying to say about the leg and body...