My first fan art.

[Cyan Blue 946]

It's not the best (like the coloring), but I was proud of myself for doing it! I just "copied" a picture of derpy I found on the interwebz, here you go:

 

 

 

My handwriting sucks. 

[MLPRainbowDash 47]

 its acually really good for a first time and no your handwriting doesnt suck (your makes mine look like crap) but i hope you make more /)

[Wingnut 7,018]

LOL, I really like this. It's festive and timely with Halloween right around the corner. I hope she doesn't mind Kit Kats instead of muffins.

 

Nicely done.

[Derpyderpderp 65]

This is really good! The left eye (her right eye) looks a little bit too dark, but other than that is is perfect.

 

And trust me, my handwriting is worse than yours. Way worse... 

[LunasSubject 50]

I think it's really cute, and very seasonal! Also, Derpy <3. I just did my first fan art too and it's pretty exciting, eh? You should be proud

[dedacct6 2,591]

Very pretty for your first, and I wouldn't say your hand drawing sucks, I used to be worse, truthfully. But all I do is hand draw, so the thing about hand drawing is that you want the lines to be nice and smooth, and in this picture they seem to be shaky, which is common, I have that problem sometimes too. And the coloring, it could be a bit more thoroughly filled in around the body,

And the bags.

Hope this is useful to you, overall its a great drawing for your first, and remember that there's always room for improvement I hope to see more i the future