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Bronyette

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Just made myself a cute Halloween avatar. <3 Tried out some new techniques.


Critiques and comments are welcome~!


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Made with ArtRage, lots of time, and my mouse.


I know it's a tad bit cropped to far, but I'm too tired to fix it now. Perhaps I will tomorrow. Edited by Bronyette
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You did this with a mouse! That's crazy!

 

As I nit pick at this, realize I'm very impressed by what you've managed to do with just a mouse.

 

Her ears are a bit too big and the hood makes it more immediately noticeable.

Her front legs seem like they should be a bit closer together.

The hoodie itself looks good but the texture on it seems very flat.

 

Other than that, it looks good. Practice, practice, practice my friend.

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You did this with a mouse! That's crazy!

 

As I nit pick at this, realize I'm very impressed by what you've managed to do with just a mouse.

 

Her ears are a bit too big and the hood makes it more immediately noticeable.

Her front legs seem like they should be a bit closer together.

The hoodie itself looks good but the texture on it seems very flat.

 

Other than that, it looks good. Practice, practice, practice my friend.

Thank you~ I do see what you mean with the legs, in the original sketch I did have them closer... Not sure why I changed that.

 

Also with the ears, I always draw the ears big, sort of a bad habit. But it's sort of my style, I might tweak it so it looks better though.

 

And I'll be sure to shade it, I had work today and got in a rush to get finished. :3

 

Thanks for the critique!

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