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Draco chuckled then said "Dawn eh beautiful name for a beautiful mare. Anyhow I will kill him then so you won't hate too," he said "I've done it before on bandits who wanted the packages I deliver to my customers," Draco said slightly and looks to her "Quite admirable of you Dawn but some ponies need to be put down,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

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The Doctor got up from his position as the sound of the piston pumping feet faded off into the gloom of the factory. The Doctor said to everypony present: "come on, this is our chance to get out of here!" He said as he made a run for the big door labeled "Exit".

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Thunder Dash followed behind as quickly as possible. "Come on everypony! Let's get outta here while we've got the chance!" Thunder Dash proclaimed with a steady gallop following the Doctor closely without losing pace. Derpy was still on his back holding on tightly.  

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"why is derpy on your back anyways? can she not walk or something???" dawn says puzzled "shes a regular mare!...or almost a regular mare" dawn says referring to derpys eyes "shes mostly normal though!" dawn continues "soooooo clone doctor or doctor or what ever....why weren't you affected by the 'darkness' that took over the real doctor? im sure some one has explained it but what ever!" dawn asks 

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Draco just sighed as Dawn just ignored him. Nothing new for him anyway.  He just walked towards Blaze slowly. Draco asked "So how did you end up in this crazy situation?" Draco asked  and then said "Hey that's mean of you she's normal," he said with a growl as his wings flared out in a rage towards Dawn.

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A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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(OOC: Derpy was supposed to be played by someone. As DM, I will take over her until that person comes into the RP)

 

"She's a little nervous that's all." Thunder Dash answered as he continued to walk. Thunder Dash thought about Dawn's question and could answer it right then and there. However, because he didn't want to appear rude, he decided to remain silent. 

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The Doctor used his sonic and opened the door with a clink of metal on metal. "We're out!" Shouted the Doctor in a triumphant cheer. "Now, let's get out of here and get some answers and anything else we'll need, I sense danger around and coming from all sides." Said the Doctor, running outside.

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dawn looks around " nothings here....i wonder why yours sensing it...because its not here!" dawn says cruelly joking "but really there's nothing here so why do you sense it?...."  dawn says in serious voice "but if so....what if there is...what could it be? who would put us in danger?" she says not quite aiming the question toward anyone 

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Thunder Dash followed The Doctor. "Great! Where to next? The past?" Thunder Dash asked as he walked slowly behind The Doctor. Derpy finally got off Thunder's back and walked right beside him. "I just hope we could find The Real Doctor." Derpy stated. "Don't worry Derpy, we will. We just have to trust his Clone." Thunder Dash answered.  

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The Doctor stepped outside and felt the warmth of daylight flow on him. "Ahh... Finally a little peace... For now." Said the Doctor, walking forward. "Hmm... Where, exactly, are we? I can plan a course once I know where we are." Stated the Doctor to everyone in the company.

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"alright im gonna answer a question all of us are asking..." dawn says pulling out a sonicscrew driver 'i've had past 'encounters' with the real doctor....normal or not for some reason the first time i met him he gave me this and never asked for it or about it, i think he just forgot!" she said said and scanned the area "we are north of cantorlot somehow....well thats intresting considering we have probobly only been traveling for a little bit..." dawn says confused and scans he area again "yep, it was right the first time right outside of cantorlot,north!" 

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Draco sighed as he had followed these crazy ponies. When they got to Canter lot somehow well that raised quite afew flags. But he began to think on how he use us that to his advantage in his job. "That is mighty handy isn't it?" Draco asked slightly as he heard what Dawn said. "Of course no pony wants an opinion here,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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"So where exactly are we heading to? We still need to find The Real Doctor, who's probably helping Discord wreak more havoc in the past..." Thunder Dash asked The Doctor's Clone. Derpy looked anxious. Thunder Dash turned to Derpy. "We'll find him, whaever it takes." Thunder Dash said in a soft voice to Derpy to comfort her. Derpy smiled a little.

 

Meanwhile The Real Doctor was trying hard to both fight Discord and the Dark Force's temptations.  

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"We need to head to the junkyard." Said the Doctor, "I may have a use for some certain things there." He added, looking around yet again. "And the sooner we get there, the sooner we'll save the real version of me, so let's go!" Shouted the Doctor, dashing toward the north.

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"it is quite handy and you can have an opinion.....sometimes......but other wise you can have an opinion!" dawn says "but really.....who DOESN'T want a sonic screwdriver? and i have one!" dawn says jokingly "and clone doctor you have no opinion whether i should have this or not...your probobly not wondering that but just to make sure!" dawn says happily explaining things that were useless 

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Thunder Dash sprinted after The Doctor and so did Derpy. "Let's hope the junkyard has what you need Doctor." Thunder Dash said as he kept up with him. "The hard thing is, the real version of you is in the past with Discord...and if Discord puts him in to his trance, we've got double the problems!" Thunder Dash declared. 

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Thunder Dash sprinted after The Doctor and so did Derpy. "Let's hope the junkyard has what you need Doctor." Thunder Dash said as he kept up with him. "The hard thing is, the real version of you is in the past with Discord...and if Discord puts him in to his trance, we've got double the problems!" Thunder Dash declared.

 

"Yes, quite." Quietly commented the Doctor, still dashing, until he approached a large mound of junk. "Plow, if my memory serves me well, it should be here... Aha!" Shouted the Doctor, holding aloft a small, box-like object, which emirates small and soft beeps from it.
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dawn sopped and stood jaw dropped and her eyes revealing sadness and worry "we can't let that happen.....EVER....EVEREVEREVER" she yells running back up to them " EVER" she growls "because that would be bad, very very very bad!" she says worried "why does he have to be so difficult?" she mutters to herself 

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"What's that thing?" Thunder Dash asked as he saw the thing that The Doctor's Clone was holding. Thunder Dash had never seen it before. Meanwhile Derpy had wandered off to look around. Suddenly there was a crash. "Huh?" What was that?" Thunder Dash asked as he looked around. He didn't see Derpy around. "Derpy!" He called out. He then found her in a hunk of metal. 

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"Well, allow me to explain." Said the Doctor. "This is my timey-wimey detector. It goes ding when there's stuff." Said the Doctor as the machine continued to ding. "When it does ding, it means something important to our current mission is near, allow me to set it to our mission." Said the Doctor, calibrating the instrument.

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"DARN IT DERPY!" dawn yelled from the other side of the junk yard she had also wandered off and had been looking for nothing important just looking around "ohhhh look! its a-a-a....THING!" she says  picking up a tire "i wonder where this came from...they dont drive cars here...." she thinks out loud 


"Well, allow me to explain." Said the Doctor. "This is my timey-wimey detector. It goes ding when there's stuff." Said the Doctor as the machine continued to ding. "When it does ding, it means something important to our current mission is near, allow me to set it to our mission." Said the Doctor, calibrating the instrument.

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Thunder Dash came from the back holding Derpy so she wouldn't get into anymore trouble. "Well hopefully we could find a lot of things with that gadget of yours." Thunder Dash stated as he still had Derpy in his hooves, who was squirming and trying to escape. 

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Thunder Dash came from the back holding Derpy so she wouldn't get into anymore trouble. "Well hopefully we could find a lot of things with that gadget of yours." Thunder Dash stated as he still had Derpy in his hooves, who was squirming and trying to escape.

 

The Doctor watched Darpy for a while. "May I try and calm her?" Asked The Doctor politely, kneeling to meet his face with that if Derpy's. "Derpy, I know I'm basically a carbon copy of my original self, a clone. But I beg to you to pull through and keep strong. We'll be okay, and the real Doctor who'll be, too." Said the Doctor.
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Derpy was shaking on all four of her hooves. She didn't know what to do or say when she heard the words "carbon copy." Tears began to well up in her eyes. There was no other choice for her. Right there, she broke down into tears and was almost wanting to run far from the place they were. @@super2379

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Derpy was shaking on all four of her hooves. She didn't know what to do or say when she heard the words "carbon copy." Tears began to well up in her eyes. There was no other choice for her. Right there, she broke down into tears and was almost wanting to run far from the place they were. @@super2379,

 

"Derpy, I am sorry, I am so, so sorry." Said the Doctor. "I'm sorry I'm not the real Doctor, but I'll comfort and be with you until the real Doctor returns." Said the Doctor sympathetically. "I really do hope you don't mind me being a temporary Doctor. I'll never be as good as the original, but by golly, I'll try." Said the Doctor.
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