private Torn: A Dr. Whooves RP

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

"you can believe me when i say it can do a lot of things! the only thing it cant do is open wooden doors for some reason though...." i say explaining the sonicscrew driver in a short way "so i mostly have the awesomest gadget in the universe....littereally..." she says bragging 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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All Derpy could do was just hug The Doctor's Clone. Even though he wasn't The Real Doctor, it was the only thing she could do. "Please...save him." Derpy said still crying hard.

 

Thunder Dash knelt beside Derpy. "We're all here for ya Derpy. We'll save The Doctor no matter what it takes." Thunder Dash proclaimed.  "Dawn!" He scolded. @

Edited November 22, 2013 by Thunder-Dash

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All Derpy could do was just hug The Doctor's Clone. Even though he wasn't The Real Doctor, it was the only thing she could do. "Please...save him." Derpy said still crying hard.

 

Thunder Dash knelt beside Derpy. "We're all here for ya Derpy. We'll save The Doctor no matter what it takes." Thunder Dash proclaimed.

 

The Doctor hugged Derpy back. "I will save him. And that is something you can be certain about." Said the Doctor in a soothing voice. The Doctor heard a beep from the detector, upon further examination, there seemed to be something in the immediate vicinity that would aid them in their quest. "Does anyone see anything odd?" Asked the Doctor, looking around.

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn wandered back towards the group "derpy..i may have been mean to you other times but.i just have to say...i'm sorry..now i know you know how i felt and feel right now....lonely....your waiting for a special pony to come back.and we are both doing that exact thing....we are waiting forthe doctor to come back,the real doctor" dawn whispered in derpys ear "im so sorry..." she said out loud leaving her to talk to thunder "thunder your doing the right thing keeping her close to you...we've met and what i've seen she can go a bit crazy...." dawn said to thunder calmly 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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Thunder Dash turned and heard the beep. "Hopefully that's something that we need..." Thunder Dash said to himself. He then turned to Dawn. "It's the only thing to do. Love can go a long way and Derpy needs every single ounce of it, to get though this, for this is very hard for her, since she's been with The Real Doctor in the past times." Thunder Dash explained.  

Edited November 22, 2013 by Thunder-Dash

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn was just about to go back to studying the junk yard when she heard thunders reply "derpy is a good mare, and she deserves to be with the doctor more then i ever did...." dawn says turning back to him "and right about now i'v remembered....its always like that random time where im reminded im not the only one to travel with him...." she explains sadly 

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The Doctor searched high and low for something that would relate to the Doctor and their current objective. And that's when he found it. A trench coat, laying on the ground. The Doctor picked it up and showed it to the rest of the group. "Adores this relate to anything?" Asked the Doctor.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"I don't know about that." Thunder Dash said as he studied the trench coat. He looked closer. "You may wanna keep that in a safe place. Who knows, The Real Doctor might've used it in the past times and just completely forgot about it and left it here." Thunder Dash supposed.  

[dragon4111 914]

((Okay seriously man chill with moving forward so quickly with the story line. let the character's talk and make developments. If you move the story along quickly there won't be any thing for other's to do. and post alittle slower will you?))

"Dawn needs to chill out. not everything will come to an end if we don't save this Doctor fellow," Draco said as he was starting to get annoyed at the others. "Yeah thanks for waiting for me arses. Instead of I don't know taking it slow and thinking things through?" Draco asked his nerves finally giving out. "You know ignoring me is fine but leaving someone behind really, I mean REALLY?"

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"I don't know about that." Thunder Dash said as he studied the trench coat. He looked closer. "You may wanna keep that in a safe place. Who knows, The Real Doctor might've used it in the past times and just completely forgot about it and left it here." Thunder Dash supposed.

 

The Doctor slipped the coat on. It fit him perfectly, which was a pleasant surprise. He felt odd in it, as if a memory of the real Doctor can to him. He saw what looked to be a barren land, with a blue box in the middle of it. The Doctor toyed with the idea that that is where the, or at least a, TARDIS was located.

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

"welcome to the club!" dawn said sarcastically while still looking at the coat "it looks like something the doctor would wear i guess....but why would he leave it here? i mean its not like him to just drop things on the ground anyways so why drop a coat into a junkyard?" dawn asked 

"oh great, it fits perfectly what next a sonic screw driver in the pocket?!" dawn said joking looking at it "anyways you probboly shouldn't wear it just in case he put it here for a reason like the daleks or cyber me-ponies put a tracking device on or in it" dawn says almost saing some thing she shouldn't have said 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"Problem is, I don't know where the TARDIS is. Last place I saw it was close to the west side of the fabric of time. But I don't think it's still there. The Real Doctor is probably using it to get away, because of that pesky darkness that's controlling him." Thunder Dash supposed. Derpy was still a little upset about the absence of The Real Doctor and the Doctor's Clone.  

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

" i know what that means...TARDIS...heh" dawn brags "Time And Relative Dimensions In Space!" she brags some more"yeah i should shut up about that..." she says to herself "any ways its true, he probably did take it some where else because of the dark magic but, we can find it...i think" dawn says not being the most enthusiastic pony 

[dragon4111 914]

Draco just rolled his eyes as he followed the group. He turned his eyes away from Dawn and whistled slightly. "Well now two mares kissing. Now that will bring a smile to any ponies lips," he said as he continued to walk right into a lamp pole. "Ow that was not smart," he said rubbing his muzzle. "Yeah still think you ponies are crazy,"

Edited December 1, 2013 by dragon4111

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

"i am a bit crazy.....so you do have a point there.....although i have been doubting it from the instant you first said it..." dawn says thinking "and no that was not the smartest thing to do!" she says chuckling a little bit "and you don't have to roll your eyes..." she continues "i just noticed something.....i notice little things sometimes...." she says half to herself half to no one 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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Thunder let out a small snicker when Draco ran into the pole. "Okay, I think that's enough Dawn." He stated as he continued to walk. "I know you know a lot about this stuff, but you don't have to shove it in everypony's face now." He stated as he continued to follow the doctor.  

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn abruptly stopped and her vision went toward thunder but she said nothing just stood there for a while and let them pass her again before she spoke "yeah....alright..." she says quietly thinking more intensively "but.....that's..." she whispers to herself starting to walk slowly 

[dragon4111 914]

"Almost impossible not to brag about you're heritage?" Draco asked  whispering into her ear "Keep bragging about it my dear Dawn and you'll end up almost arrogant as Prince blueblood. I hate that guy but he does give me good business thnks to his arrogance," he said with a laugh.

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"Well," exclaimed the Doctor, "we don't need the TARDIS, we just need a TARDIS." Explained the Doctor. "Which means it doesn't even have to be a blue box, it just has to be able to go through time and space, quite simple really." Explained the Doctor, "Hopefully time doesn't collapse on us for doing it. See, ponies assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect, but really, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly, timey-wimey... Stuff." Said the Doctor.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Thunder Dash smiled when he heard "wibbly wobbly timey wimey" coming from The Doctor's mouth. He tried to hold in a laugh but giggled anyway. "I don't know why but that phrase always makes me giggle." Thunder Dash stated. "And that's good news to hear." He added. @@super2379,

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"Yes, that phrase amuses ponies." Said the Doctor. "And yes, that is ver good news. I could probably even construct a TARDIS, since I have ,y sonic screwdriver." Said the Doctor. "Say, do you happen to know where I could find an ordinary police box?" Inquired the Doctor

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

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"You would have to travel to one of several major cities. This includes Manehattan, Detrot, Baltimare and Los Pegasus. BUT, you may get lucky and find one in Ponyville." Thunder Dash stated trying to remember whether there was a phone booth in Ponyville. "Or maybe Canterlot. Most likely there will be one in Canterlot." Thunder Dash stated thinking aloud.  

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"As long as it is a location that is possible to get to by hoof, we should be fine." Said the Doctor. "Which one of these towns and cities would be the closest to our current location?" Inquired the Doctor. He turned and looked at their surroundings, hoping to see a town in the distance.

[Dawn Arethia Whooves 9]

dawn looks at them and replies "canterlot most likely, we are just out of its cities boundaries....i think" she starts thinking again "yes right outside of canterlot." She thinks out loud "maybe ponyville" she thinks out loud again confused " i'm not really sure because i'v never been here" she says still looking around 

[dragon4111 914]

Draco sighed and said "Congrats 'Doctor' are lost. No wait I know where we are," Draco looked around slowly as he recognized the architecture. "Yes I know where we are at my fellows. Welcome to New Colt City, home to the courier's guild and the most lovely ladies on Equestria besides miss Dawn here," Draco said.