private Life after death 1-1

[Demonic Soulz 483]

((Pretty much...it will be interesting))

 

I raised the blade above my head and was about to strike the figure not noticing the one behind him. Meanwhile Equinox woke up and saw the portal disappeared. "Shit...he's dead" He said as he looked down at the ground. "Who was that" Equinox asked himself

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@, (good thing is, you do get to keep the item you hold in your hands when you die. I kept my laptop)

 

Before he could react, something was lodged in between his chest; and slowly the object was twisted. The figure refused to even look him in the eye as he died. Loo slowly started to fall towards the ground. 

 

(wanted more detail to hint at personality, but I got a call...)

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"D-damn" I fell to the ground and grabbed the figures leg but let go. "What do you have-" I bled out.

 

 

 

I opened my eyes and yawned. "Oh...just a dream...and im falling...wait, IM FALLLING" I said as slammed into the ground. "Ow..." I stood up but quickly came back down and looked at my self. "HOLY DISCORD IM A PONY" I yelled and looked around noticing I was in Everfree Forest. "That person...it...was a pony...but why would a pony be violent...I only caught a glimpse before I died...and now I am back alive as..." I looked at my flank and saw my cutie mark. "My Ponysona Flame Stryke...sweet" I opened my wings and flew up. "Okay flying is easy...now to head to equinoxs" I flew at a really high speed, fast enough to catch the attention of a certain pegasus and a few other ponies. I landed in front of the house and went inside. "HI GUYS" I said in a happy voice

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Danz noticed his friend coming through the doors, smiling and happy about something. "Oh hey Loo, back sooner than I expected...wait." 

 

Danz looked behind him, and saw Equinox mumbling to himself, he looked over to his friend. "uh, Loo... Weren't you suppose to come back out over there?"

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"Okay first off yes, second off, notice anything different about me" I flares my wings and took a stance. "I'm a bloody pegasus and I died...but I caught a glimpse of someone but all I could make out was a hoof" I explained as I thought of something. "I have an idea"

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I died

 

Danz looked at his friend with a shooked expression. "Wait, come again. You died! How. I thought Equi~... Oh, but your the figure... Ah..." He put a hoof over his mouth and coughed, hoping that his friend wouldn't realize he had a number of chances to stop this. "Ahem, please continue..."

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"Equinox is here but I was stabbed by somepony" I said as I heard a knock at the door. "Be right back" I went to open the door and saw a Cyan blue pegasus. "Sorry not buying anything at the moment" I said not taking a look at the pegasus before turning to Dan. "Why are you coughing so much" I asked him

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Danz looked away from Loo, he refused to make eye contact as he said, "No, reason... I have a cold..."

 

He turn back toward loo and motioned with his hooves for him to continue. "Please go on, also who was that at the door? It could have been important."

 

The abrupt way he slamed the door in the ponys face wasn't kind either. 

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"It was some cyan blue pegasus...that better not have been Rainbow Dash or I might have just pissed her off" I Said as re opened the door. "I am so sorry about that miss who are you exactly" I asked pretending not to know since it would be awkward if I knew thier name already

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@, (why not another one of my oc's, add more of your too if you want) 

 

The pony at the door rubbed his nose. It was sore from having the door slammed into it so harshly. Now that everyone could see him for more than the brief second from before. Danz and Loo could see a pony that was a darker shade of blue than cyan. He looked up at the two and said... "Ow... um... Hi."

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"I am so sorry for doing that you see I am still getting used to being here since most ponies that come to my house in Saddle Arabia want to sell me something my name is Flame Stryke who are you" I said in a nice tone. Equinox was still mumbling to himself 

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The pony stopped rubbing his nose and yawn, "The names Hack."

 

Danz scratched his head, thinking he remembered that name from before. "Hack, hack..."

 

The pony streched out his hoof, offering to the pony to shake, "Please to meet your door, er Pleased to meet you two." He looked at Danz and said, ​"Specially you."

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Great to know now I suggest you move out of the way before a certain pony behind you crashes into you" I said noticing a pony coming behind Hack. "Uh oh....DAN, EQUINOX HIDE ME" I yelled knowing who this pony is by the look of him from far away. "Because I don't want to meet this pegasus"

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Hack was a lot slower than your average pegasus, he looked back and watched as the pony got closer and closer to him. It was only when the pony was directly in front of him did he even do something that could classified as a reaction. "Wait..."

 

Danz leaped out the way.

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"OUT OF THE WAY" A mares voice sounded as she pushed Hack out of the way before crashing and tackling me to the ground. "Finally found you" The mare said as I looked up at her. "Hello to you too Violet" I said as pushed her off me. "Okay so far we have figured out about nothing that happened so I'm heading to Canterlot to ask the princesses" I said. "But first...does anyone esle want to crash on in and talk" I asked

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Danz slowly stood back up and scratched his head. He stared at the pony that had tackled lo~ No, stryker to the ground. "Can I ask just who this is?"

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Hack slowly got back onto his feet, and turned towards the mare that had shoved him into a wall. " Well that's a friednly way to say hello... just who are you?"

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Danz scratched his head with his hoof again, "... Who are you too."

 

"Now that just hurts..."

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"First off its just Stryke and I prefer to be called Flame instead also this is my OC Violet Petals..." I said as Violet Petals smiled. "Hello everypony" She said as I pushed her off of me. "You...new pony must be Insomni Hack" I said as I was just guessing the name

 

 

"Also I know ponies can't be violent but I'm thinking that it may have been a changeling" I suggested

Edited November 30, 2013 by Motorloo

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Danz looked at Flame questioningly. Then stared at Violet. He walked past Hack who let out an annoyed grunt, and got a closer look at Violet. He poked her, ".. So you mean... She's a changeling or... I think ponies can be violent. Don't you remember Muddle before we left?"

 

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"I said whoever attacked us could have been a changeling but...there was two of them..." Flame looked sad, he wasn't going to see his family again, he wasn't going to be able to play his games, he was going to be alone in a land full of ponies. "The narrator sounds like a downer" Violet said trying to comfort Flame. "Well whatever I'm going to see if I can talk to Luna or Twilight about this" Flame said

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Sup looked up at what appeared to be nothing and said, "You know she is right, were not that bad... Well present excluded." Danz looked behind him, he didn't even know Sup could talk; more importantly talk about random nonsense.

 

He turned his attention back to Flame and said, good Idea. There bound to know some information... His eyes widened and Danz started dashing out the door towards Canterlot.

 

Hack was still mad that his creator was ignoring him, but after a moment. His eyes opened wide too, and he started to dash after Danz; but he only made it to the door when he tripped.  

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Flame started flying fast towards Canterlot and landed in front of the castle. Violet helped up Hack. "What is going on" She asked him

 

Flame passed the two guards ignoring them as he went up to the palace doors and knocked on them. "PRINCESS LUNA AND PRINCESS SUNBUTT" Flame yelled out. "I GOT A WORD WITH YOU"

 

(Dont forget about this)

Edited December 11, 2013 by Okami~Amaterasu

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@,(It's not so much forgetting. to have an rp you need a story further than everyone dies. -Danz Plots things-) 

 

Hack slowly got back onto his hooves and looked at Violet like she was crazy. "If this pony, changeling, whatever is out to kill those two and thier friends. What's to stop them from killing those who would want to help? Worse, I'd hate to become an expandable..." Hack continued to dash out the door.

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 "Why whoever could that be... Sunbutt?" Celesetia trotted over towards her palace door, wondering whom would address her in such a rude manor. She opened the door and wondered why she hadn't known sooner. Then again he did look different.

Edited December 12, 2013 by danzxc123

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"Hello to you too Princess" I said in a pissed tone. "I know you don't know me but listen...do you know of a portal to the human world by any chance" Flame asked as he tried his best to not make his wings of a flame. "Because two ponies killed me and one tried two but failed and got away...do you know anyone who would want to try and kill anyone Sunbutt" Flame asked.

 

 

 

Equinox sighed. "Here we go...he's going to get himself sent to the moon" Equinox said

 

((Thats why Flame is speaking to the princesses))

Edited December 12, 2013 by Okami~Amaterasu

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Princess Celestia started to close her castle doors. The rude, and clearly insane pony, was making no sense. If he had died why is he standing here, and she was sure that a portal to the human world would not have gone under her radar for so long. 

 

"I think you best take your concerns up with a light green lyricist in Ponyville. I have my duties to attend to."

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Danz made it to the castle doors as Celestia started to close it, and use S.U.P. to prop the door open for a few more moments. He was still huffing as he spoke to Flame. "I... guess I'm... Here just in time huh? Give me a moment."

Edited December 16, 2013 by Dreamless

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Flame was about to knock the doors right of it's hinges before he saw Dan. "Took your ass long enough to get here" Flame said sounding annoyed. "Also I'm not crazy and I'm being serious" Flame said. Equinox came up and sighed. "I'm sorry about this one Princess he's...stubborn and headstrong" Equinox said. "I am not" Flame retorted