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Grell sighed "why would we lie about that snowstorm what do we have to gain we are going to Tartarus for celestias sake we have to get just one more pearl if you don't join us if you do which would be wise them we have to get two which means finding anthe" grell said Leif walked over to hawkeye " what about you my friend only one parent and and kind of special ability" Leif asked looking at the fire "I'm going to say your a demigod as well based on that" Leif pointed to the fire

 

"GAHHH!" Dead Eye shouted as he swatted at the fire. Then he realized something, "I'm not burning." He then put his hoof directly into the flame and watched as his hand caught fire.

 

"That's new." He said, staring at his hoof .

 

 

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(( I going to ask you you once I'm not trying to be rude but if you can't think of enough to fill the minimum don't post I'm tired of seeing filler every time you post))

Leif looked at him and smiked " I thought so well I wonder who you god or goddess is" Leif said

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(( I going to ask you you once I'm not trying to be rude but if you can't think of enough to fill the minimum don't post I'm tired of seeing filler every time you post)) Leif looked at him and smiked " I thought so well I wonder who you god or goddess is" Leif said S

 

 

Just then, a glowing symbol of a hammer and anvil appeared over Dead Eye's head and he looked up with a look of slight disdain.

 

"If i'm not mistaken, that is Hephaestus's symbol" He said as he finally put the fire out on his clothes and hand. "But why now?" he asked himself "Why would he claim me now? He didn't seem to give a damn before." 

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Leif smiled "well genome the gods and goddesses aren't allowed to have relationship with their kids" Leif said "anyways he may just know be claiming you because you've shown you have some of his power" Leif smiled "well will you be joining is till you reach camp half blood"

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"AH, DAMN IT! Cut it out with the cold already!" Dead Eye said to Snowstorm as he started to rub his hooves together again. Little did he know, his own body temperature was rising. soon enough his shoulder caught fire and yet he didn't notice, or burn.

 

 

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Snowstorm's anger was cut off when she saw what was happening to Dead Eye. The temperature went back to normal and she yelped. "Stop! You'll burn yourself!" She exclaimed, but nothing was happening to him. "Wait... What?" She asked, utterly confusifieded by this unexpected turn of events.

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Leif smiled "well genome the gods and goddesses aren't allowed to have relationship with their kids" Leif said "anyways he may just know be claiming you because you've shown you have some of his power" Leif smiled "well will you be joining is till you reach camp half blood"

 

 

 

Snowstorm's anger was cut off when she saw what was happening to Dead Eye. The temperature went back to normal and she yelped. "Stop! You'll burn yourself!" She exclaimed, but nothing was happening to him. "Wait... What?" She asked, utterly confusifieded by this unexpected turn of events.

 

 

Dead Eye thought for a moment, After the temperature went back to normal, "This camp, does it have supplies I can use?" He asked. At the very least, if things turn sour, he can take as much as he could and  hightail it out of there. He was a thief by trade after all. "And where is it anyway?" 

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Dead Eye thought for a moment, After the temperature went back to normal, "This camp, does it have supplies I can use?" He asked. At the very least, if things turn sour, he can take as much as he could and  hightail it out of there. He was a thief by trade after all. "And where is it anyway?" 

 

Snowstorm opened her mouth to say something, but closed it. There was something about his voice... It was off. She whispered to Grell and Leif. "There's something about his voice... I don't know if we should tell him. Take caution." She was as quiet as possible to ensure that Dead Eye couldn't hear her. 

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Grell smiled and whispered back "we can't speak the location we can only guide somepony close to it it's up to them to actually find it"

Leif looked at dead eye "nope no supplies what so ever" Leif lied and was very good at it it would be almost impossible to tell he was lying

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Grell smiled and whispered back "we can't speak the location we can only guide somepony close to it it's up to them to actually find it"

Leif looked at dead eye "nope no supplies what so ever" Leif lied and was very good at it it would be almost impossible to tell he was lying

Snowstorm deadpanned and looked at Leif. She whispered, "That. That is the worst attempt at lying I have ever heard." She quickly came up with a lie, since she was very good at it. "We don't really know whether there are supplies at the moment or not since we haven't made contact," she said, with no trace of sarcasm, no change in heart rate or anything of the sort. She was a very good lier. "But most likely, there are none and there will not be any for a while."

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((Leif lies very well he has a very high bluff so his lie was I fact very believable))

Leif glanced at snowstorm then back to hawkeye

Grell whispered to her "he knows your lyin since you have already stated that you are trying to find the camp and have not Been there"

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((Leif lies very well he has a very high bluff so his lie was I fact very believable))

Leif glanced at snowstorm then back to hawkeye

Grell whispered to her "he knows your lyin since you have already stated that you are trying to find the camp and have not Been there"

((But the very wording of that lie is bad. You denied it one too many times. Using Whatsoever and Not at all is a sure tipoff to a lie.))

Snowstorm shook her head. "If I'm right, he should suspect that we were whispering about supplies," she whispered. "I've been in the business for a while."

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((Ah but what if that's my plan and good job btw always look at the wording))

Grell smiled "then I guess we should tell him the truth" grell said he looked to hawk eye "when we left camp they where rationing food and water that plus the time we've been gone and the monster attacks have most likely left the camp with nothing so if you don't mind time is of the essence" grell said

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((Ah but what if that's my plan and good job btw always look at the wording))

Grell smiled "then I guess we should tell him the truth" grell said he looked to hawk eye "when we left camp they where rationing food and water that plus the time we've been gone and the monster attacks have most likely left the camp with nothing so if you don't mind time is of the essence" grell said

((I write often, so I can formulate a good fake story for any occasion in an RP.))

Snowstorm was now very confused. Was he lying or was he telling the truth? She'd never been unable to tell between truth and lies before. This colt was good. Nevertheless, she hid her confusificationion.

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((Ah but what if that's my plan and good job btw always look at the wording)) Grell smiled "then I guess we should tell him the truth" grell said he looked to hawk eye "when we left camp they where rationing food and water that plus the time we've been gone and the monster attacks have most likely left the camp with nothing so if you don't mind time is of the essence" grell said

 

"Well then. It seems as though we're all going to Hell." Dead Eye said with a slight smirk at the double meaning. Then the train started to slow down. "Is this our stop?" He asked

 

 

 

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Edited February 10, 2014 by Black Mask

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"Well then. It seems as though we're all going to Hell." Dead Eye said with a slight smirk. Then the train started to slow down. "Is this our stop?" He asked

 

 

 

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((Fillers can be avoided by making your sentences more lively. Speak about how the train came to a screech or how the scenery out the panes started to slow down. Use adverbs with your verbs, find lively synonyms, etc. etc.. Also, it's called Tartarus in the show, not Hell.))

Snowstorm looked out the window as the scenery started to slow. "Could be," she said, absentmindedly. She had a different stop, as she had been going to Camp Halfblood, but it seemed that her destination had changed. "It isn't my original stop."

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Leif looked out the window "alright ponies let's move we got a pearl to recover and two more to locate" Leif said

Grell smiled and pulled out a pony skull and forced the jaw open a blade shot out if the mouth and a staff from the jaw forming a scythe "let's go" grell said his hoof began to twitch even more

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Leif looked out the window "alright ponies let's move we got a pearl to recover and two more to locate" Leif said

Grell smiled and pulled out a pony skull and forced the jaw open a blade shot out if the mouth and a staff from the jaw forming a scythe "let's go" grell said his hoof began to twitch even more

Snowstorm frowned. She had no weapon, no way of defending herself, except the temperature drop that she couldn't control and was detrimental to everypony except her, including allies. She was utterly useless, just dead weight. "I don't have any way to protect myself," she said. "I'm just dead weight." The fact that she had learned how to box to defend herself in case somepony fought physically back against her taunts had escaped her completely. Edited February 10, 2014 by whizzball1

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((Fillers can be avoided by making your sentences more lively. Speak about how the train came to a screech or how the scenery out the panes started to slow down. Use adverbs with your verbs, find lively synonyms, etc. etc.. Also, it's called Tartarus in the show, not Hell.)) Snowstorm looked out the window as the scenery started to slow. "Could be," she said, absentmindedly. She had a different stop, as she had been going to Camp Halfblood, but it seemed that her destination had changed. "It isn't my original stop."

 

 

Leif looked out the window "alright ponies let's move we got a pearl to recover and two more to locate" Leif said Grell smiled and pulled out a pony skull and forced the jaw open a blade shot out if the mouth and a staff from the jaw forming a scythe "let's go" grell said his hoof began to twitch even more

 

"It wasn't mine either" Dead Eye said as he looked out the window as well. "But it's now or never I guess" He then turned around to face Leif and Grell.

 

"Ok, I'm going with you." He said, "And hopefully this whole mission doesn't turn FUBAR on us. Where are we anyway?" 

 

 

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Edited February 10, 2014 by Black Mask

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"Washtub dc" Leif said he looked to snowstorm "don't worry panomma is your weapon" Leif said

"Panomma kon-ah" Leif said as he pointed to snowstorm "she knows All the commands that the guard use in four languages plus Druidic which you won't learn"

((I didn't make the name for this place it's horrid I know))

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"Washtub dc" Leif said he looked to snowstorm "don't worry panomma is your weapon" Leif said

"Panomma kon-ah" Leif said as he pointed to snowstorm "she knows All the commands that the guard use in four languages plus Druidic which you won't learn"

((I didn't make the name for this place it's horrid I know))

Snowstorm smiles. "I think I rather like Panomma," she says, looking at Panomma. She pets her a few times. At this point, she still doesn't remember her fighting skills. "What do you mean?" she asks Leif when he talks about the commands. "What kind of commands?"

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((Um, just fyi dead eye, your character is not at all synonymous with the values of Hepaestus. A thief that is skilled at archery doesnt really fit with him.))

"You know, as fascinating as this is, I'm starving. We should get some good rest and some food before we arrive. Who know what'll be waiting for us there."

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((Um, just fyi dead eye, your character is not at all synonymous with the values of Hepaestus. A thief that is skilled at archery doesnt really fit with him.)) "You know, as fascinating as this is, I'm starving. We should get some good rest and some food before we arrive. Who know what'll be waiting for us there."

 

((I'm going for the 'He was raised that way' type))

 

"I'm with him" Dead Eye said as he pointed at Silver, "We should get away from this train as well. It probably has our scent now. More will come if we don't move" He then exited the train and looked for the exit.

 

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Leif smiled "gomon" Leif said to panomma "like attack defend track chase things of that nature"Leif said as he got of the train

Grell followed his head twitching a lot "I'm with silver some food sounds nice" grell said "like maybe a crate of apples yeah apples"

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Leif smiled "gomon" Leif said to panomma "like attack defend track chase things of that nature"Leif said as he got of the train

Grell followed his head twitching a lot "I'm with silver some food sounds nice" grell said "like maybe a crate of apples yeah apples"

Snowstorm smiled. "Got it. Come, Panomma," she said, as she followed Grell, Leif Evergreen, Dead Eye, and Silver. "I am hungry too... That scare took a lot out of me. I have a craving for filet mignon," she said. Her tastes for fine food had not gone away even in all this scare.

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Leif liked at sniwbatrom and smiled "she's still loyal to me shell just obey unless it goes against what I have taught her or goes against a command I gave her" Leif said

Grell walked over to snowstorm his head twitching "I really want some apples" grell said

((sorry but meats arent ate by ponies))