Sweetie Belle *Equestria girls*

[dedacct6 2,591]

Still trying to get better at drawing Equestria Girls. So i made Sweetie Belle as an adult because i had no better ideas.

 

 

 

 

*Lol idk why she is wearing gloves* Please reply and scale from 1/10 and don't be shy

Edited December 1, 2013 by Pelate

[ghostfacekiller39 23,860]

9/10

 

Dunno, man...I think it's great. The right (left?)...one to her side seems kinda placed in an awkward position. You have great form, and it's very clean, in my opinion

[DerpyWithFlowers 24]

9/10

 

You draw really good, but her left (our right) seems stiff, like she's forcing it their. But it looks really good!

[dedacct6 2,591]

9/10

 

You draw really good, but her left (our right) seems stiff, like she's forcing it their. But it looks really good!

Ah, I see. Well thank you for that.

9/10

 

Dunno, man...I think it's great. The right (left?)...one to her side seems kinda placed in an awkward position. You have great form, and it's very clean, in my opinion

Lol now that arm is beginning to bother me

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

6,5/10

Very close to the original style, for better or worse.

The clothing looks good, as does the face.

 

-hands are slightly different size

-one breast seems slightly lower than the other

-hair constantly touching your eyeball must be irritating, maybe set it a bit higher

-neck is better than before, but still a bit thick at the base

-shoes could be less pointy

 

Overall a good improvement, though I'd recommend you put your own spin on these rather than adhere 100% to the EQG style (first things to go  would be the tumor legs and the impossible far apart highs).

[Capt. Snuggle Gruff 101]

8/5

It's probably just me but she looks a bit to old to be Sweetie Belle.  Oh wait, you said you made her an adult, ok.

[dedacct6 2,591]

6,5/10

Very close to the original style, for better or worse.

The clothing looks good, as does the face.

 

-hands are slightly different size

-one breast seems slightly lower than the other

-hair constantly touching your eyeball must be irritating, maybe set it a bit higher

-neck is better than before, but still a bit thick at the base

-shoes could be less pointy

 

Overall a good improvement, though I'd recommend you put your own spin on these rather than adhere 100% to the EQG style (first things to go would be the tumor legs and the impossible far apart highs).

Mkay, got it! About art style. I will do that when I get the basics down, so then I'm not too far ahead of myself.