open Saving the Elements of Harmony

[Mr. Critical 434]

"Well, we got some time before we land back in Appleoosa. What do ya wanna do now?"
"Aaaaaaaaaa PA-"
No, pinkie. No parti- actually. I could go for some cheering up. Okay, we can have a party. Though the others probably won't be interested. Come on, I'll lead you to the ball room."

"You have a ball room?"
"I do now. I also have a library, but don't tell Twiligh that."

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Steel nodded "actually it corrupts the user if used for to long" steel said before they walked out to nap "and it has 72 Demond trapped inside it" steel laid his head down after left going back to sleep "let me know when were ready to get the necklace" steel siad

[OG Blaze 269]

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Blaze sleeped silently in his bed without making such as a peep while asleep, he awoke suddenly and licked his mouth, they were parched and he was very thirsty, "man I'm thirsty wheres the kitchen here?" Blaze wandered around until he walked past a ballroom with Critical and Pinkie in it, "Uhm whats.... whats going on here?"

Edited January 21, 2014 by Fiery WillPower

[Mr. Critical 434]

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Critical looked to Blaze who just came in.

"Well, believe it or not, that trip to Baltimare wasn't exactly the happiest time I've had. And Pinkie hasn't thrown a party in a while. And I could really use a pick-me-up right now."

"So Critical led me to this ballroom. Aparently he just made it."

[OG Blaze 269]

@Mr. Critical

 

"Wow, uhm I'm going to get some coffee first if you could tell me where the kitcen is that would be nice, um I think Twilight might appreciate this, she's a great dancer also, not sure if she's still tired though, but the music could wake her up just as much, so conflicted here, I'm gonna get some coffee then, put Clarent away, and come back, mmmmmkkkkkk?"

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Critical took the lamp shade off his head.

"Sure. Just go down the hall. The tardis will lead you to it. Just keep walking."
With that Blaze left the room, leaving Critical and his assistant.

"Okay, Pinkie. Time for a Cider drinking contest."
"Oh, you are on mister."

[OG Blaze 269]

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Blaze walked into the kitchen and poured himself a cup of coffee and paced back and fourth, "thought I wasn't going to fit in much here, but I'm starting to like it here, didn't really take Critical as a party animal, but I usually misjudge people a lot, Blaze walked past the ballroom to his room to put away Clarent when he spotted Critical chugging cider "wow, uh alright then" he went to his room placed Clarent down and went to wake Twilight,

"hey Twi... oh your awake?"
"Yeah I couldn't sleep much, anyway did you need something?"
"There's a party in the ballroom, I was wondering if you wanted to come, you were always a good dancer"
"hehe, I mean sure I guess"
Blaze lead Twilight to the ballroom 
"Hey everyone look who I brought"

[Mr. Critical 434]

"Twilight!"

The pink mare ran towards Twilight, wrapping her hooves in a big hug.

"Oh, its so good to see you. I'm so glad you're okay."

critical on the other hand was at a table setting up for his and Pinkies cider contest. He went across the large room to get a sufficient supply of the beverage. He had heard of Pinkies abnormal tolerance to Cider, so the playing field would be even for the both of them. However, Critical's supply will go from full to in the red after this one outing.

[OG Blaze 269]

"Hey Pinky it's been a while!, it's so nice to see a friendly pony, nice party you've thrown, you've always been one for party decorating Pinky"

"I' never took you as a partier Critical, what are you planning here?"
"Looks like a cider drinking contest to me"
"well sounds fun"

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Steel got up (( I've realized we don't have a healer in this group I'm debating on submitting another oc to fix that)) steel heard the party and sighed he had to walk past it to get a drink he wasn't big on party's or anything of the like he wasn't really a happy stallion

[OG Blaze 269]

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"Hey Steel, where you goin, the parties over here" Blaze realized the pony didn't have much happiness in his life, he felt bad for him in a way, he wondered what dark secrets foreshadowed his past, honestly Blaze didn't care much at the moment, he just wanted to forget about everything right now and enjoy the party

Edited January 21, 2014 by Fiery WillPower

[dashian500 194]

Steel looked at him "I'm going to get a drink of water and I know where the party is I don't want to party" steel said to blaze "I don't like parties so don't ask me to come to any... Ever because I'll always say no" steel said being sure to stress the fact he would never party

Edited January 21, 2014 by dashian500

[OG Blaze 269]

"Dang, that stallion needs to learn how to relax once in a while..."

"Who is that anyway?"

"That's Steel, he's apart of the crew, he's pretty tough, but black hearted, I don't know why though"

Blaze was confused he'd never really seen a pony like him, someone who sincerely just didn't want to be happy, someone who neglected it

[dashian500 194]

Steel walked away and went to the kitchen getting a bottle of water he downed it and ate an apple he looked around and found some nuts "protein perfect" steel said as he ate them he grabbed two bottles of water and the nuts and started walking back d

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Pinkies hair went flat. Critical saw this and immediately ran towards her to comfort her. He knew heard the story of what happened last time from the parts dash was there for. And what he heard, Critical didn't want to see. He got to her, tears welling up in her eyes.

"H-H-He doesn't li-I-ike parties."
her lip was quivering a bit. Critical hated seeing other ponies cry. So in an act to calm her down. Critical gave her a hug, which took them both by surprise. A bitter and cynical stallion, comforted the party pony of equestrian.

Aw, how adorable

'Shut up Sun Stone.'

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Steel seen pinkies hair and rolled his eyes as he walked to the gym he walked over to the weights and began lifting he wanted to take advantage of the gym because it was far better them the old equipment he had at his house and he wanted to be fit he ate nuts as he worked

Edited January 21, 2014 by dashian500

[OG Blaze 269]

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"Wooooooooooaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh"

"Wooooooooooaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh"

It's fine all we need is four ponies to get this party started! Blaze went to the DJ stand and plugged his ipod into the speakers and blasted Doomsday by Nero, "Dis is my jam right here!"

Twilight twitched and looked at Blaze "You always did have a taste for weird music Blaze"

Blaze was trying to talk over the loud music "What can I say I'mma unique Stallion!"

Edited January 21, 2014 by Fiery WillPower

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Steel heard the loud music "reason number two on the list of why I hate parties" steel growled as he worked "hey uhh I can't remember your name sunstone? but I know you can hear me could you have them turn the music down" steel asked the ((I'm drawing blank on what it's called now sorry))

Edited January 21, 2014 by dashian500

[Mr. Critical 434]

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"You okay now Pinkie."
"Y-Yeah. I guess."

Critical got up, helping the party pony to her hooves.

"You still up for that cider contest.

"S-sure. But, we need somepony to help us keep score.

"I can help with that."
At that moment, Sun Stone appeared in her physical form with her light blue coat and brown mane.

"Lets get this thing started!"

The three walked over to the table Critical had set up

 

Edited January 21, 2014 by Mr. Critical

[OG Blaze 269]

"Yeah let's get this party started!" Blaze put the music a little bit louder "Chug Chug Chug Chug!" Blaze was seriously ready to see if Critical could stomache as much if not more cider than Pinkie Pie, Blaze though he did like cider he usually didn't a lot he got sick of it if he drank too much, he never let Applejack know that though, "Come on Pinkie Pie you got this!" Twilight was clapping her hooves together all the while cheering for Pinkie, "I think my moneys on Critical $10 dollars!" "pfft! you don't know Pinkie then, $20 on Pinkie pie!"

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Steel sighed and walked into the party "can you turn this music down" steel yelled over the music "I can hear it all the way on the gym" steel had some sweat in his brow form working out and munched in his nuts waiting for them to respond to him he watched them chug the cider -how distasteful- steel thought

[OG Blaze 269]

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"WHAT STEEL, DID YOU CHANGE YOUR MIND AND COME TO PARRRR-TAAYYY!?" Blaze didn't think that was what he came in here for but he wanted to play it off hopefully getting Steel into here and see everything he was missing out on. "Chug chug chug, come on Pinkie you can't lose I've got $20 dollars on you!" 

"I'm chugging as fast as I can Twilight!" Pinkie said while continuing to drink Cider"

Edited January 21, 2014 by Fiery WillPower

[Mr. Critical 434]

As the metaphorical night went on, Pinkie and Critical were neck in neck in their contest. Now on round twenty seven. Both not as intoxicated as you'd think at this point.

"wyaba crobgaga flbtaagba"

(Why can't you just admit defeat, madam Pinkie.)

"grba awawa krubartahga. agit *hic roga.

(When Pinkie is challenged there is no way she turns down)

Critical and Pinkie both down another mug of cider.

"Iogartj gtieabl. awerhhre ia adh gragoa."

(I must say, you are a worthy opponent.)
"eeyoou"

(Your praise is most appreciated)

[OG Blaze 269]

"My god.... I can't even understand them, wonder if they're even sick yet?, Twi can you translate that at all?

"I uh... I don't think that's a language, at least not one I've studied before...."

"I sincerely hoped that Critical isn't admitting defeat I got money riding on this cider chugging contest!"

Blaze hoped he had placed his trust in the right pony here, he didn't want to lose $10 "Come on Critical, kick it into high-gear!!!"

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Steel yelled again"turn the bucking music down or I'll turn it off" steel threatened steel wasn't amused by blaze and he didn't want to be around the party at all he just wanted them to turn the music down so he could work out he unlike most ponies cared about the strength of his enemy's

Edited January 21, 2014 by dashian500