adventure The Valor Chronicles

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Before I start this fanfic, I was helped out dearly by some of my friends who go by the names Kyle and Dakota. They both made two OC ponies in this. Also, thanks to every brony out there for the support and extra motivation. I feel I finally have a meaning to life. To entertain.

The Valor Chronicles

Storm Stopper crashed from the air. The relentless winds held her back from getting anywhere. The giant wind storm raged on as Storm Stopper struggled to prevent herself from getting hurt any further,. Any sudden movements would damage her wings so much, that she might just die.

Storm Stopper crashed through the roof, as Valor and MineStock rushed to help her. Storm Stopper strugged to get back on her hooves, as a huge tornado started to form around their house. They have worked so hard on their house three years ago, all that hard work put into losing everything.

You see, years ago, a devious mare that Valor had beaten in a tournament was so overwhelmed, she began to go insane. The mare killed their friend, Blockwin, and blamed it on a colt named Blade. Blade was a colt that had escaped MineStack once he saved Storm Stopper. This mare's name was Floor Burner. Floor Burner could burn the floor with just about anypony. Her skills with a blade are keen.

Valor helped Storm Stopper up. Winter teleported to Storm Stopper at her aid, and carried her friends through a teleporting system. Winter's skill with magic isn't too advanced yet, so she can only teleport to urban, arid areas. The place they teleported to, Valor couldn't believe her eyes. She was back in her home town.

Valor's parents abandoned her when she was little for unknown reasoning. Her old home was literally burned down, as well as four other buildings. They split up to check the four small cabins for dead bodies, loot, and survivors. After that, they had literally found NOTHING. Not a blood stain, not a piece of fabric, not evem some survivor signs.

There were only two building left, so two checked each. Nothing. Just an aroma of roses. It was, unbelievably, smelt just like Floor Burner's scent. Suddenly, lights went dim. Her friends were close outside. Valor braced herself as if she was about to be stabbed. She paced left and right, and noticed bright red eyes at corner of her eyes.

Floor Burner was sitting there laughing at her. "I thought we killed you!" Valor exclaimed. Floor Burner grunted. "You think?" Floor Burner said faintly. There was loud banging on the roof, as Valor's friends tried to get in. Floor Burner formed some flames, and carresed her blade in flames. She smiled evily.

She lunged as fast as she could at Valor, but at the same time, Storm Stopper fell through the roof, stabbed by Floor Burner. Valor gasped. Storm Stopper tried to speak, but instead let out a muted gurgle, which spewed out blood. The flame on knife has lit her insides on fire. "Motherfucker!" Floor Burner yelled. Floor Burner tried to pull the knife out of Storm Stopper, but not fast enough. Valor pulled the knife out herself.

Valor threw the knife at Floor Burner. She attempted to dodge, but her hoof was sprawled out. The knife nailed her hoof to the wall. She couldn't move. Floor Burner created a flame copy of herself, and left the building. Valor thought she was still there, and foolishly tried breaking her neck. Instead, she was caught on fire. Luckily, water was just outside.

As she flew out, she caught wind of Floor Burner, being chased by a red mare with a red mane and tail. Suddenly, the swift mare stopped. She looked back at Valor. "D-D-Daughter?" She said. Valor became confused. "Mother?" She replied. "Valor! I missed you so much!" she replied. "M-mother... what is your name?" Valor asked. "My name is blood shed, for good reason. That mare right there is why me and your father had to leave you.

"You see, that mare has been around for years killing many innocent ponies." "I know that, mother. She killed our friends, thats why were after her. We thought we killed her!" Valor replied. Blood Shed dissapeared after Floor Burner. The Flitter of winds pressed up against Valor and her friends' faces. "What... just happened?" her friends asked. "Floor Burner is back. Storm Stopper was murdered." Valor said. "Thats your mom?" Valor sighed in sarcasm. "Oh, no."

Valor had no time to lose. She went speeding after the mare that had caused her so much pain. She pushed her mom out of the way, and sped up to Floor Burner. She brought Floor Burner to the ground. She stomped her face in about one million times. Floor Burner's body suddenly dissapeared. A greater evil has arisen. A true life stopper.

Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed! make sure to read the next Valor Chronicles. Remember to read the past series "The Adventures of Valor and her Friends" to learn more about their history and origins. Keep in mind, though. The Adventures of Valor and her Friends" was my first ever fan-fiction.

Winter:

Floor Burner:

Mine Stack:

Storm Stopper

Blood Shed:

Edited January 16, 2014 by Flitter Flyer

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Did everypony enjoy? I haven't posted one of these in a while, and I'd love some reviews. Just so I don't make the same mistake, or so I do the same every time.