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You are in forest on the border of the Griffon Kingdom and Equestria... It is night and you're lost. Very lost. You knew better then to leave the path but you did. You are all lucky enough to find a huge mansion. Where can you go? Time to see if anypony is home...

 

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I look around, attempting to find an entrance to the mansion. Spotting a small path, I follow it. It leads around to another side of the mansion. A large, menacing door is standing there. I walk up to it, folding my wings away. Lifting up my claw, I knock on the door, the wood booming from the force. "Is anyone there?" I ask. "If there is, then by the Royal Griffon Army, open the door."


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I knew I shouldn't have come here. But no, I had to travel the woods as shortcut and now I'm lost. Seeing a path lead to a foreboding mansion, I follow it. It's the only civilisation I've seen for miles. There's bound to be someone there. Walking up to the big wooden door I knocked on it.

"Hello? Is anyone there?" I tentatively ask.


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I fly around the mansion wondering where the entrance is. Rainbow Dash wussed out last month then she dared me to go inside the old mansion. Then I hear a voice closeby. I landed behind the figure. I wonder who this is...
 
"If there is, then by the Royal Griffon Army, open the door."
 
I freeze in shock. ROYAL Griffon ARMY?! Whoa... I poked the figure making it jump. I smile sheepily, "Hello. I'm Mackenzie. But you can call me Kenzie. What's your name?

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I look around, attempting to find an entrance to the mansion. Spotting a small path, I follow it. It leads around to another side of the mansion. A large, menacing door is standing there. I walk up to it, folding my wings away. Lifting up my claw, I knock on the door, the wood booming from the force. "Is anyone there?" I ask. "If there is, then by the Royal Griffon Army, open the door."

After a short moment a unicorn that by he clothes appered to be a maid anwsred thw door. CREEEEK. The door was clearly extremly old and wore just like the house.

"My, are you alright? It's very late and it's miles from any town!" She had a worried look on her face.

I fly around the mansion wondering where the entrance is. Rainbow Dash wussed out last month then she dared me to go inside the old mansion. Then I hear a voice closeby. I landed behind the figure. I wonder who this is...

 

"If there is, then by the Royal Griffon Army, open the door."

 

I freeze in shock. ROYAL Griffon ARMY?! Whoa... I poked the figure making it jump. I smile sheepily, "Hello. I'm Mackenzie. But you can call me Kenzie. What's your name?

"Oh! More of you. Are you a group? Please come inside before you catch a cold" She turned around. "Master! We have guests!" As she stepped aside the inside of the house became clear. It was well light and full of expensive decor. Just the rug itself looked ot cost thousands of bits.

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I stare up, still shocked from the fright the Pegasus gave me. "Well hello. My name is Gareth Barskovska, soldier in the Royal Griffon Army and member of the Royal Guard for Important Diplomats of Griffon Interest. Just call me Gareth though. For all purposes, you can just say I'm a guard and a soldier for the Griffon Empire." Jeez, that came out awkwardly, I thought. Turning toward the maid, he saw the house's interior. He simply stood there in awe, staring at the expensive rug, exquisitely made from what appeared to be the finest of wool this side of Canterlot.


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After a short moment a unicorn that by he clothes appered to be a maid anwsred thw door. CREEEEK. The door was clearly extremly old and wore just like the house.

"My, are you alright? It's very late and it's miles from any town!" She had a worried look on her face.

 

"Oh! More of you. Are you a group? Please come inside before you catch a cold" She turned around. "Master! We have guests!" As she stepped aside the inside of the house became clear. It was well light and full of expensive decor. Just the rug itself looked ot cost thousands of bits.

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I look at the stallion then to the old pony. Um okay... I trotted slowly inside.

 

 

"Um thanks..."

 

Awkward silence....

 

I clear my throat to break the ice, "Uh-er... I'm. I'm Mackenzie but call me Kenzie..."

 

 

I smile before looking at the figure that still stood by the door.

 

 

"Hello Gareth."

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Startled a bit, I slowly made my way inside. I cringed at all the decor. Too expensive for my taste. Seeing the unicorn introduce herself to me, I answered back.

"G-glisten Dew, Kenzie. But you can call me Dew if you want." I looked over at the griffin.

 

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"What's your name sir?"


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I stare up, still shocked from the fright the Pegasus gave me. "Well hello. My name is Gareth Barskovska, soldier in the Royal Griffon Army and member of the Royal Guard for Important Diplomats of Griffon Interest. Just call me Gareth though. For all purposes, you can just say I'm a guard and a soldier for the Griffon Empire." Jeez, that came out awkwardly, I thought. Turning toward the maid, he saw the house's interior. He simply stood there in awe, staring at the expensive rug, exquisitely made from what appeared to be the finest of wool this side of Canterlot.

 

Abandon hope all ye who enter...

 

Another unicorn came from a side room. By his dress the stallion was most likely the master the maid had called.

 

"Why hello! We rarly get visitors out here. Your arrive clearly wasn't on perpose at that. This place is far out of the way and it's muck to late for you to be here to deliever anything. Feather Brush, please go get our guests some tea"

"Yes sir" She walked with perpose towards the kitchen whereever it was in this huge place. The master noticed a filly walk from the door.

"There are a lot of you" He stepped foward to look outside.

"It is much to late for you to head home now. Please accept my invitation for you to stay here for the night. We have plenty of room. If not then please stay for dinner" 

 

OOC: You have to accept the invatation to stay! It is necasary.


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I looked at the others before looking at the unicorn that I think is the master. I nodded slowly.

 

 

"Um sure... But I'll have to go home by tomorrow."

 

 

I swear the unicorn's eyes has an evil glint to it. I swear. :I I waited for the other ponies to answer. I wonder if they'll stay?


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"Uuh sure. I'll stay for the night. But only for one night though." This place was starting to give me the creeps. I looked around at the others. The Master looked like he had an evil glint in his eye. What's up with that? I looked over at the griffin. He said he's from the Royal Griffin Army.Royal? Since when do griffins have royalty?


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I walk through a dark, menacing environment. Something seems wrong, but I shake it off as nothing.

A clearing. In it, lay a rustic mansion that has no earthly business there.

What the hell... I think to myself. I've been wandering for days. I'm hungry, and tired.

It doesn't matter why, but I've found somplace to rest.

I feel a nagging in my mind as I knock on the door.


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(dinner time)

 

I sat in one of the chairs and looked around the room. Cobwebs on the chandelier... Dusty floors... How can anyone live in this place? I leaned towards Dew and whispered.

 

"Hey does this place give you the creeps too?"

 

I hope I'm not the only one otherwise I'd be mental.


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I nodded to Kenzie, thinking the same thing. This place does give me the creeps.

"Yeah, this place gives me the creeps as well. What do you think about it? There's a mansion in the middle of the forest that we all just happened to be walking through. What are the odds of that happening?"

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I walk through a dark, menacing environment. Something seems wrong, but I shake it off as nothing.

A clearing. In it, lay a rustic mansion that has no earthly business there.

What the hell... I think to myself. I've been wandering for days. I'm hungry, and tired.

It doesn't matter why, but I've found somplace to rest.

I feel a nagging in my mind as I knock on the door.

 

The maid anwsers the door.

"Another one! This night is very strange..."

Skip to diner...

 

OOC:Sorry but... filller filler filler filler filler filler filller filller filler filler Some more filler maybe some more annnnnnnnnnd done wait not yet now donnnnnne


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I walk into the dining hall. It carries the feeling of malice.

I see a few others around me. They look a little unnerved, not unlike myself...

I try to foget about it, and try to say something.

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"H-hi... I-i-i jus- i..."

The words escape me.I'm terrible around others.

Quit talking, you idiot...

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"Uh h-hello. Do you want something?" I asked the poor sod. He looked nervous around others. Probably for the best as I don't trust other people either. I motioned for him to sit next me, so that we could chat more quietly instead of yelling across the room. Not that we weren't talking quietly before, sound reverberates weirdly.


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(dinner time)

 

I sat in one of the chairs and looked around the room. Cobwebs on the chandelier... Dusty floors... How can anyone live in this place? I leaned towards Dew and whispered.

 

"Hey does this place give you the creeps too?"

 

I hope I'm not the only one otherwise I'd be mental.

 

I nodded to Kenzie, thinking the same thing. This place does give me the creeps.

"Yeah, this place gives me the creeps as well. What do you think about it? There's a mansion in the middle of the forest that we all just happened to be walking through? What are the odds of that happening?"

OOC: Jumping the gun a little... If it is a major time change let me handle it... Just saying

 

"Now that your all here I will introduce you to my family" Said family were already seated. He begins to ring them off from right to left.

"First is my wife, Night Star" She had a navy blue coat with a white mane and along with the rest of the family a unicorn. Her cutie mark was simply a white star.

"Then my oldest child and daughter, sweat dream" She had the same color coat as her mother's mane and had a silver mane herself. She appered to be about sixteen to eighteen. Her cutie mark was of a pillow with a pony sleeping on it.

"My twins, Clock Work and Little Dipper" Clock work was a young Colt around ten. His coat colors were exactly the same to his father: a pure white and a dark blue mane. He had a clock face for a cutie mark. Little dipper was a young mare with out a cutie mark yet. She had a light blue coat with a dark blue mane.

"My maid, Feather Brush" She was in her twenties with a gray caot and slightly darker gray mane and a feather duster cutie mark

"And finally my butler, Clean Cloth" He was a yellow coat and a orenge mane with a white cloth cutie mark.

 

"Is this house creapy? I wouldn't know. I've lived here all my life. How you got here? I have no idea. Fate I suppose. Now time to eat! Clean Cloth please go fetch the wine"

"Yes sir"

"Oh, I almost forgot to introduce myself. I am Warm Night. You may call me Warm if you like. Now let's eat!" The table was full of foods of all asortments. There was even some meat for Gareth. Clean Cloth brought the wine soon after being sent.

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"N-no... I-it's just really creepy here. W-w-why are there so many ponies here? It's the middle of nowhere. A-am I c-cr-crasing a party or s-something?"

I look around. The place feels like there is an ominous presence looming.

I think something is wrong, yet I say nothing.

 

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"I don't think you're crashing a party. What I want to know is how we all got lost in the same forest." I shrugged my shoulders. I put some of the salad on the plate and began to munch on it thoughtfully. Why is this house even here? I think I'm going to find out soon enough.


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"Your all probebly wondering why we live out here. Our family has it's origins in writing and acting out plays. After many years my ancestors became rich from it and settled here. He wanted to be away from the wordl and alone with his family" The unicorn took another sip of his wine.

"Now we just stay out here and hardly ever leave. My ancestor's fortune has given us the privalge to live out here almost without working at all. I make the occansion clock though and my son plans to be a fine clock maker once of age. My wife here was a Canterlot aristocrat until her parents died. My late father took her in on one of his rare trips to the capitol and I fell in love with her and had our wonderful children"


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I feel a little anxous of my surroundings, putting some salad on my plate.

I take a bite, but don't really fill myself.

"Hahaha." I laugh.

"D-don't really care why we're here. Just hungry... and why the hell do you even care? Free food. Everything's fine."

I pat his shoulder, with a little bit of force.

"We're all fine. Just l-look at that cute family."


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(OOC: Sorry. Should have mentioned this but Glisten Dew's a female.)

I waved his hoof away from my shoulder. I don't like getting touched. "I care because I'm curious and rather creeped out at everypony being in the same place at the same time." Finishing my salad, I ask Warm Night a question.

 

"Do you know how old this house is Mr. Night?" I asked politely.


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"Well hello. I'm Gareth." Taking a knife and fork, Gareth cut into the steak, taking a bite size portion and placing it in his mouth. The steak was nice and tender, most likely a rump portion. The steak made audible squishing sounds while he was chewing. After swallowing, he took a sip of wine to wash down the meat.


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"Hello sir. I'm Glisten Dew but you can call me Dew if you want." I looked over at his plate of meat and nearly vomited but I managed to hold it back. "Mr. Gareth, I know you're a griffin and eat meat, but why do you eat meat? Couldn't you eat a salad? Or grass?" I put some more salad on my plate and chewed silently.


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