open OC based Equestria

[Melody Arts 1]

Misty looked at her older sister. Only because you want your phoenix to do the job instead of me. Even though she was mad she called off her troops.

 

Midnight nodded. Sure. This way. She started walking towards ponyville.

 

Melody nodded. I promise. She never lied to her subjects.

[Moonbacon 384]

 

 

Misty looked at her older sister. Only because you want your phoenix to do the job instead of me. Even though she was mad she called off her troops.

 

Moonlight rolled her eyes  "dear sister phoenixes have amazing eye sight and Amber is war phoenix trained to fight since she learned to fly so if she ever have any problems with that pony she'd be able to take care of it nicely or she could fire a flare into the sky when she finds ace if she does that i will go over there and beat ace to submission. Then bring him back to you sounds nice doesn't it sister? anyways what do you want to do for the entire day besides yell at your troops?" Moonlight said smiling a little bit.

[Melody Arts 1]

Misty looked mad. Fine but just because your older it does NOT mean you can boss me around. Mom said that if you boss me I can tell her. I am old enough to take care of myself. Besides I choose to take the Crystal Empire, not you. You think that I can't do this? Everything that I have done you have messed up or taken over. I am sick and tired of it!!

[Moonbacon 384]

@@Melody Arts,

 

Moonlight sighed "i know that Misty don't forget i'm also a lot stronger than you so if Canterlot starts gang banging on us i'l be able to take care of it but i'm not saying your weak your magical capabilities are amazing little sis. I think you can take over Canterlot and maybe Equestria it self someday " Moonlight then pulled Misty into a hug.

 

(also i think Frozen_Pegasus left this rp so you can play Ace if you want.)

[Melody Arts 1]

Was there an Ace on here?))

 

Misty sighed. I miss mom. Their mom had been killed by Celestia when she was younger. Melody was a filly when it happened so Misty had a secret hate for Melody.

 

Melody sighed. She knew that Misty had a hard time being the youngest.

[Moonbacon 384]

@@Melody Arts, 

 

 

(not yet)

 

Moonlight sighed "i miss her too Misty i promise i will avenge mother for you. Now what do you want to do for the rest of the day? might as well enjoy it" she said as she breaks the hug.

 

Amber silently flew above where ace is portending to be just a wondering phoenix looking for food.

[Melody Arts 1]

ace... Wait is this the one with Sophia? No wrong site... My god I'm so confused))

 

Misty looks around. I don't know Moonlight. There is nothing to do. I want to just fly around. Misty flew off. She was going to take revenge on Melody and destroy her as Celestia had destroyed her mother.

Edited March 18, 2014 by Melody Arts

[Commander Frost 731]

((I didn't leave guys, Ive been busy, sorry about that! ))

 

Sophia. Hold on one second. Yes? What is the emergency. Melody used her magic to transport her, Sophia, and the guard to Canterlot Castle. 

"Ace has been captured by Misty!" He said paniky.

(Sorry with all the stuff with other people and stuff, I've been kinda busy, so I'll be slow to reply for a while while I get my life sortedd out, if you need to kick me you can))

[Melody Arts 1]

No your fine.))

 

Where is he? She had promised Sophia something and she was going to keep it. I will look for him myself. I take responsibility for this and I will fix it. Sophia I need you to stay here. I don't want to put you in danger. I am immortal and can survive.

[Moonbacon 384]

@@Melody Arts,

 

Moonlight spreaded her wings and flew after Misty "we can fly together if you'd like" she said

 

@, 

 

Amber suddenly dived towards ace Amber was sorrounded by blue flames and she was diving really fast seems like Ace has to take the hit.

 

((Well then i forgot to post on here))

[Commander Frost 731]

@@Melody Arts, "Ok." She said."Just bring my daddy back ok?" She said worriedly.

@, Ace tried to avoid it but was caught in it and nailed to the ground. His heat hurt as he tried to get up, but the pony was ontop of him. He nudged at her.
"Ow. Could you pleases get off of me?" He asked.
"It kinda hurts." 

[Moonbacon 384]

@, 

 

((amber is a phoenix ))

 

Amber started scratching her sharp talons on Ace's wings making sure they dig as deep as possible into his flesh "SQUAK!" the blue phoenix yelled she then latched her break into Ace's back trying to tear off his skin it seems.

 

((fbaibf))

[Commander Frost 731]

@, 

 

((amber is a phoenix ))

 

Amber started scratching her sharp talons on Ace's wings making sure they dig as deep as possible into his flesh "SQUAK!" the blue phoenix yelled she then latched her break into Ace's back trying to tear off his skin it seems.

 

((fbaibf))

((Oh. EXSCUSE MY DUMB BRAIN! XD))

"OUCH! He said batting the phieonex off and whacking it onto the ground."What the heck bird!?" He said. The phienix squaked at him. He looked at his bleeding wing.

"That hurt!" He said, trying to tend to it, but without anything to bandage it, it was no use.

[Melody Arts 1]

Melody nodded and nuzzled the filly. I pinkie promise I will. Cross my heart heart hope to fly stick a cupcake in my eye.

 

Misty hears a faint squawk. Looks like Amber found Ace. She flew off in the direction of Ponyville.

 

Midnight's Mystery looked at the sky. Any minute now. She hears yelling. Racing over to the yelling, Midnight sees Ace and Amber fighting. 

[Moonbacon 384]

@@Melody Arts, @,

 

"Perfect i knew Amber could do it if you used your troops then it would have taken a lot longer anyways" Moonlight said following Misty to ponyville 

 

Amber bit Ace's wing and started trying to tear the skin apart Amber also latched on her talons on Ace's wing.

[Commander Frost 731]

Ace screamed in pain and stomped the bird to the ground, not stopping until it topped attacking him. He panted and looked at his wing. It was pretty bad. He needed a doctor for it. He headed towards ponyville, hoping he could get there before the bloodloss gor him.

"Ok." Sophia said.

Edited March 20, 2014 by Frozen_Pegasus.mp3

[Moonbacon 384]

@, 

 

Amber launched herself at Ace again lanching on to his bleeding wing making sure Ace would pass out from blood lost "Oh no no your not going anywhere pony. I'm going to make Moonlight and Misty proud" Amber said as she tears a piece of skin on Ace's wing.

[Commander Frost 731]

, He yelped in pain as he tried to slam the phoenix into the tree near him. It detached from his wing  and he panted, his vision was blurry. He tried to lkep himself awake as he stumbled. He fell over and passed out.

(THAT PHOENIX IX OP. lol. But seriously, that is a little OP."

[Moonbacon 384]

@, 

 

(apperently alicorns that can bring ponies back to life isn't OP by itself? phoenixes can ressurect themselves so wouldn't you think their Op anyway? plus Amber is a war phoenix that mean's she's trained to fight)

 

Amber layed on the ground for a few seconds before flying up a tree brance and waited for Misty and Moonlight to arrive.

[Melody Arts 1]

Misty sighed. Why must I be the youngest? 

 

Melody transported herself to the everfree. This is where most ponies who get lost go. So maybe he's here. She teleported herself everywhere. Eventually, she found Ace. Amber!! What are you doing here? Melody knew the phoenix was Misty's sisters pet.

[Commander Frost 731]

Sophia sat and waited for Melody.

Ace floated in and out of conciousness, not being able to move, and barely being able to see or hear. he moaned as his wing throbbed and bled. 
'So this is how I die...I never...I never got to see my little filly grow up...I'm sorry Sophia..' He thought as he laid there, waiting for death.

(No, I don't want him to die.)

[Melody Arts 1]

Melody used her magic to transport Ace to the castle. Then she launched herself at the Phoenix. You shouldn't have threatened my kingdom!!! Melody tackled the Phoenix and kept a hoof on the right wing. Misty Haze!!! You and your sister need to show yourselves!!! 

[Moonbacon 384]

@,@@Melody Arts,  

 

((i dont see how amber could have threatened Melody's kingdom))

 

Amber shot a few fireballs at Melody's face and started flailing around.

 

Moonlight growled and teleported herself near Melody she took a deep breathe then sighed hoping to try and contain her anger as much as possible "what do you want 'queen' Melody?" she said in a clearly irritated tone.

Edited April 13, 2014 by Moonbacon

[Everleaf 541]

Name: Everleaf

Race: Alicorn

Gender: female/mare

Coat Color: the same brown in my profile pic

Mane/Tail Color: same as profile a smilky green

Eye Color: green when not glowing as seen

Cutie Mark: some kind of thorny plant

Age: old XD

Parents: unknown 

Pets: pets well not exactly but she kind does have a sidekick you could say at the name of Thorntail or Thorny for short.

 

 

as more detail she is the alicorn of the Everfree forest has a sister which is long gone D: has them hoof things or whatever like Celestia Luna Cadance and Twilight (makes sense shes a alicorn) much like Elsa she has a slightly hard control over her powers and get get a little cruel or just hard at first but for one is not so bad she also created the forest herself as her now home before  she turned stressed and her insanity to go by and turned upon her evil self (my head canon all alicorns have a dark side like NM) before it was dark and full to all nightmares you could think it was a bright and even peaceful forest but after turning she changed it all by her own cruelty it was taken evil and if anypony came to find out exactly what had gone on or to hunt her own for her bad she would only hunt them instead and swear them never to be seen. She was defeated bu the tree of harmony back to her formal form and so on. her full backstory is WAY too long..

Everleaf stood within the forest soon to lay down on the cold rock just listening to the howls of the timperwolves  which once had a true soul "I'm sorry....so so sorry" she whispered to herself chaining herself to her own vines she created using her large open wings to lift herself. Why? just why did I make this cold mistake? why? She cried turning into a small smile. I guess it's not all too bad I mean I would not be this way without my mistakes....Everypony makes mistakes yes? No... Only one pony in Equestria which has made a similar role in that a princess a princess of the night like she could blame her. "why would I blame her I too made the same line of mistake I know how it all feels".but yet my own sister still mortal never to help her stay...I wish her immortal as I as I still wonder how I came this way.I'm sure I must know...how? Her smile turned into a frown,, "I am sorry for all I have done....I am so so sorry....

@, 

 

(apperently alicorns that can bring ponies back to life isn't OP by itself? phoenixes can ressurect themselves so wouldn't you think their Op anyway? plus Amber is a war phoenix that mean's she's trained to fight)

 

Amber layed on the ground for a few seconds before flying up a tree brance and waited for Misty and Moonlight to arrive.

 

It does not really matter it's not like it's really too OP but alicorns bringing ponies back to life is a little off since that is old culture of the unicorn which would make small sense since alicorns are part unicorn but I am fine with alicorn ocs in fact mine is just don't go beyond Celestia and Luna at least around Luna's power new facts split from the show is a little awkward create it in a fan fic fine with it just don't go over...

Edited April 13, 2014 by Everleaf

[Melody Arts 1]

Ever look at the first page. And she is in the everfree forest. She is in the area of Melody's control.))

 

Melody looked pissed. You are in my kingdom! I have told you and Misty (appears next to Moonlight) to stay away from here!!!

 

Broken Spirit flies and lands next to Misty. Is there a problem?