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Twilight and Critic left the library trying to find her friends. Rainbow was scaring foals again, Applejack was monitoring the games, and Pinkie was... being pinkie. Twilight wanted to break the silence between them. Though, in public, she wasn't expecting a lot of words from him. The stallion was more shy than Fluttershy. He barely speaks a word with another pony around that wasn't her. "So, Critic. How have you been." Critical made a motion saying he was okay, then asked how she was. "Oh, I'm doing fine. Been kinda dull." The two continued to walk. "Uh, Critic. Would you, I don't know, wanna do something some time? Just the two of us." Critical looked to her in surprise, and nodded his head in acceptance. Twilight let out a squee in happiness. "Where do you think Rarity is?" Critical pointed at a Princess Rarity and a Sapphire Sweetie Belle.

 

Draco heard the squee. "That's definitely Twilight. Hmm seems like Rarity wants to play the princess. Well then I think this vampire will have a drink," Draco said as he look at Rarity then he walked towards her silently. He smiled revealing a pair of vampire teeth.


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Draco put on a fake Transylvanian accent. "My dear sweet miss," Draco whispered into her ear. "Might I have a neck on your glossy white coat?" Draco whispered huskily into her ear gently as smooth as he could. He chickled into her ear. "Surely you have a colt friend me dear Rarity?"


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity turned and saw Draco in a vampire costume. She found his performance quite enjoyable and wanted to play along. Only to embarace her sister for destroying her important clients dress. "Alas, I do not. I am unwed, and no stallion would aproach me. But you my dear, you have smitten me with your supernatural gaze. I beg thee, take your fill." The group all gave an eye roll at Rarities over the top performance.

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Rarity turned and saw Draco in a vampire costume. She found his performance quite enjoyable and wanted to play along. Only to embarace her sister for destroying her important clients dress. "Alas, I do not. I am unwed, and no stallion would aproach me. But you my dear, you have smitten me with your supernatural gaze. I beg thee, take your fill." The group all gave an eye roll at Rarities over the top performance.

Draco chuckled as he brought her close to his chest. "My heart lies silent. Maybe a pony can rekindle the flame of life," Draco whispered into her ear gently. He nibbled on her neck gently. "One such as you alone come now fair princess surely you jest. Any stallion would be smitten by your beauty,"


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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"My beauty is hidden by others, but you see me for my true beauty." Rarity fained death as Draco nibbled her neck. After the performance she gathered herself and got up. "You know Draco, would you like to be my date for the evening, my sister has already gone and Twilight would want toe get on with her date." "We're not on a date. 'Yet that is.' she thought to herself.

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"My beauty is hidden by others, but you see me for my true beauty." Rarity fained death as Draco nibbled her neck. After the performance she gathered herself and got up. "You know Draco, would you like to be my date for the evening, my sister has already gone and Twilight would want toe get on with her date." "We're not on a date. 'Yet that is.' she thought to herself.

"That I would enjoy," Draco said as he smiled "So have you heard there will be another gala this year?" Draco asked  as he smiled to himself. "As a royal courier or rather a courier of exotic import and export I get to meet Celestia daily to see what she want's,"


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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"That sounds lovely. My friends and I go every year. Though the first time was a disaster." Critical looked in confusion to Twilight. "You don't want to know, Critic." Rarity got closer to the vampire, a small smile on her face. "Would you care to walk with me?" Twilight looked to her friend. "Critic, come here please." he nodded and left the other two together. "Critic. Since the Gala is coming and you are a close friend, would you be my date." Critical raised and eyebrow. "You and I have gotten so close and I really trust you. You're smart, funny, sure you prefer movies over books, but I still like despite that. So, will you accompany me." he remained silent. Twiligths expression saddened. "Forget it. I understand." "Yes." Twilight looked to her friend. "Yes, I would be honored to go with you."

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"That sounds lovely. My friends and I go every year. Though the first time was a disaster." Critical looked in confusion to Twilight. "You don't want to know, Critic." Rarity got closer to the vampire, a small smile on her face. "Would you care to walk with me?" Twilight looked to her friend. "Critic, come here please." he nodded and left the other two together. "Critic. Since the Gala is coming and you are a close friend, would you be my date." Critical raised and eyebrow. "You and I have gotten so close and I really trust you. You're smart, funny, sure you prefer movies over books, but I still like despite that. So, will you accompany me." he remained silent. Twiligths expression saddened. "Forget it. I understand." "Yes." Twilight looked to her friend. "Yes, I would be honored to go with you."

Draco chuckles "Of course dear Rarity," Draco said as he walked with Rarity. He chuckled slightly from the jelous glares of both mares and stallions. "Hoo boy I think I pissed ponies off," Draco said in a singsong voice. He was in a good mood alright. He smiled at Rarity.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity gave a chuckle. "Well, you are walking with the most gorgeous of ponies in equestrian. I would be shocked if they didn't give sour looks to you. They probably think were an item." Rarity gave a small giggle once more. "I've turned down so many suitors. None were in it for me, just my looks and my business."

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Rarity gave a chuckle. "Well, you are walking with the most gorgeous of ponies in equestrian. I would be shocked if they didn't give sour looks to you. They probably think were an item." Rarity gave a small giggle once more. "I've turned down so many suitors. None were in it for me, just my looks and my business."

"Not too surprising really," Draco said as he smiled slightly. "I work almost all the time. So it feels like Scoots is growing up on her own. Let me guess your parents dumpped your sister onto you so that they don't babysit her while on some sort of trip correct. But they do love her," Draco said as he looked at Rarity. He sighed. "Complete opposite for me,"


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http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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"Oh of course not. Well... maybe once. But I didn't mind." The two walked through the town chatting and learning more about each other. "So, whats it like being a courier. Visit a lot of places or is it a bit droll." Rarity leaned against Draco. Ruffling her dress a bit.

"It's nice but if your thinking of the regular courier's like the courier guild then lass you have got another thing coming. I do exotic and priceless items. And sometimes I need to prove myself to war tribes to get their specialties," Draco explained with a look to the mare.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity looked to her friend. "Really. Sounds like we've both had some adventures. You've gone to war tribes, I've tangled with the worst that equestrian has had to offer. I guess were sort of like kindred spirits. So what do you deliver besides diamonds and jewels?"

Draco took off his costume to reveal the wounds. "I also deliver rare pastries for Celestia and again same thing happens," Draco said as he looked to his red wounds. "These were from a fight with a griffin prince who thought he was tough shit," Draco said as he reeled back "Ah sorry my mother always taught me not to cuss infront of a lady,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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"You are excused. But I do like a man who can take care of himself. Shows he can take care of others. Though the scars are a bit off putting, I do like that you wont take anything negative from your betters." Rarity was starting to like this stallion. "Tell, me Draco. How are you this day? I know you may not get this a lot but I'm starting to grow fond of you. So, tell me about the pony, not the courier."

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"You are excused. But I do like a man who can take care of himself. Shows he can take care of others. Though the scars are a bit off putting, I do like that you wont take anything negative from your betters." Rarity was starting to like this stallion. "Tell, me Draco. How are you this day? I know you may not get this a lot but I'm starting to grow fond of you. So, tell me about the pony, not the courier."

"There's not much to tell. I'm just one of those background guys that tend not to get the girl in the end," Draco said as he chuckled. He smiled "But if I have to tell you something. Well I am the type to not back down from a challenge," he said as he looked at the mare. "Of course I saw that little stunt with that Canterlot pony. You shouldn't change yourself for a guy my dear lass,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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"I understand. I know that now and wont be making that mistake again(Irony)." Rarity was walking next to Draco, looking up to him. "Draco. I was hoping that... if you were free, would you mind accompanying me to the next Gala.  My last visit was not so... positive. I would like to have a real stallion to dance with at the event."

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"I understand. I know that now and wont be making that mistake again(Irony)." Rarity was walking next to Draco, looking up to him. "Draco. I was hoping that... if you were free, would you mind accompanying me to the next Gala.  My last visit was not so... positive. I would like to have a real stallion to dance with at the event."

Draco chuckled and said "Of course if a mare asks something of an O'Malley he does it," Draco said as he looked at her eyes. "Of course I saw what happened last time. Prince Blue-blood is definitely no blue-blooded gentle stallion. Heh trust me he is a pain in the ass," Draco said


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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"I know that first hand. But, I know better now." Rarity walked with Draco as they looked around the festical. All the while, Twilight and Critic were enjoying their time together. The kids rushing by and her friends enjoying their candy. Spike was busy joining the CMC's. "So, Critic. What shall we do tonight? Its still early, but there should be a few games to play." Critic looked around and saw a catapult. He pointed to it and Twilight rushed to it.

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"I know that first hand. But, I know better now." Rarity walked with Draco as they looked around the festical. All the while, Twilight and Critic were enjoying their time together. The kids rushing by and her friends enjoying their candy. Spike was busy joining the CMC's. "So, Critic. What shall we do tonight? Its still early, but there should be a few games to play." Critic looked around and saw a catapult. He pointed to it and Twilight rushed to it.

Draco chuckled slightly. "I hope that didn't paint some of the good stallion's in bad light for you my dear Rarity," Draco said as he looked at Rarity. "From what I've seen of him he's an ass," Draco said as he shrugged at the indignant hey from a donkey. "Oi not talking about you," Draco said over to the donkey.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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"Ugh, that doesn't even begin to describe him. He's brutish, uncivilized, and... and... UGH!" Rarity overcame her anger with her former love interest. "But, let us forget about him. Let's focus on us. What would you like to do this night of horror and frights?"

 

Critic placed another pumpkin in the catapult. He took aim and pulled the trigger. Unfortunately, he was a few centimeters off. Twilight was bouncing around shouting in victory. "Ha ha! Victory belongs to me this night." Critic sunk in defeat. He rolled his eyes and bowed to the victorious alicorn. She stopped bouncing and saw her friend. "Oh, stop that. You know that I hate ponies bowing to me."

 

(I'll go with alicorn twilight since I don't know what version I wanted. So thought I would go with up to date.)

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"Ugh, that doesn't even begin to describe him. He's brutish, uncivilized, and... and... UGH!" Rarity overcame her anger with her former love interest. "But, let us forget about him. Let's focus on us. What would you like to do this night of horror and frights?"

 

Critic placed another pumpkin in the catapult. He took aim and pulled the trigger. Unfortunately, he was a few centimeters off. Twilight was bouncing around shouting in victory. "Ha ha! Victory belongs to me this night." Critic sunk in defeat. He rolled his eyes and bowed to the victorious alicorn. She stopped bouncing and saw her friend. "Oh, stop that. You know that I hate ponies bowing to me."

 

(I'll go with alicorn twilight since I don't know what version I wanted. So thought I would go with up to date.)

"I do have an idea," Draco chuckled slightly as he pulled out the fake teeth. "Hm," as he ruffled his hair slowly from combed to crazy. He smiled evilly as He stole a kiss from the pearly white unicorn. Then walked away to the shadows to hide. "Try and find me my dear lady vop and see if you can arrest this Hyde," Draco said "But if I catch you I get to do anything I want with you,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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Draco smiled to himself as he sneaked around Rarity slowly smiling at her from the shadows. Despite him being a large pony He could be silent when he needed to. He smiled as he slowly approached Rarity from behind. His hooves silent as the night itself as the merriment concealed his breath.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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