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"well, I don't know. Fashion is what I love. The clothes and the patterns are what I live for. And to help others when they need it. I admit I have had a time when I wanted more than I should, but I'm not perfect. I have my flaws and to me that makes me a better pony to embrace them. What about you darling. An exotic accent isn't all there is to a stallion of your caliber now is there?"

"Calibur really? I'm nothing special," Draco said as he looked at Rarity. "Used to sing at the Coco Bucko but I hit a stump while I was there. Oh yes it was a job but what I wanted was to see the look on my customers faces not a roaring audience who tries to climb onto the stage,"


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"I see. I for one adore the audience. Their cheers and applause as they look upon my creations. Bringing joy to others. But I can see the appeal of pleasing a single customer. I see it every time a pony leaves my store. They rush out, preparing to attend a dance or a date with their special somepony."

"But the rabid fans are what drives me nuts," Draco said simply as he sighed. "An entertainer entertains the crowd but the rabid fans cause more stress. Think to that young stallion what's his name Beiber or something. Anyhow his fan fillies are little crazay beat up a old stallion sheesh," Draco said as he shook his head.


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"Agreed. The fans can get rather ravenous at times. But they can't be all bad... I think." Rarity began to ponder her words and she set her tea cup down. She looked to the clock and her eyes widened. "Good heavens, its that late. Draco, this has been a lovely night, thanks to you. But I must conclude this meeting. However, I would like to see you again. If that's alright?"

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"Agreed. The fans can get rather ravenous at times. But they can't be all bad... I think." Rarity began to ponder her words and she set her tea cup down. She looked to the clock and her eyes widened. "Good heavens, its that late. Draco, this has been a lovely night, thanks to you. But I must conclude this meeting. However, I would like to see you again. If that's alright?"

"Of course I have afew days off before I get a notice from the courier guild about your package," Draco said with a smile. "Of course I can always take you a night on the time," Draco said as he smiled at the mare. "Well I could stay here. As I said Scootaloo is staying at Applebloom''s place,"


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Days past as the time of the gala was around the corner. The two sets of friends were getting ready in their own ways. Twilight had the tickets for her friends and Rarity was preparing her new dress. Twilight came over to Critic. "Hey, does this dress look okay?" Critic began to look her over, searching for any flaws. "Nope, seems fine to me." Twilight gave a sigh. "Okay, that's great. Unfortunately, Its just going to be You, me, and Rarity this time. The girls have other plans going on during the day of the gala, but I can have at least two friends at the gala." Critic gave a nod in understanding.

(Yes I just contrived a way for me to control less characters... what ya gonna do about it?)

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Days past as the time of the gala was around the corner. The two sets of friends were getting ready in their own ways. Twilight had the tickets for her friends and Rarity was preparing her new dress. Twilight came over to Critic. "Hey, does this dress look okay?" Critic began to look her over, searching for any flaws. "Nope, seems fine to me." Twilight gave a sigh. "Okay, that's great. Unfortunately, Its just going to be You, me, and Rarity this time. The girls have other plans going on during the day of the gala, but I can have at least two friends at the gala." Critic gave a nod in understanding.

 

(Yes I just contrived a way for me to control less characters... what ya gonna do about it?)

(Meh)

Draco looked at his old suit with a chuckle. "This thing still fits this stallion," Draco said as he put on his old armani suit. "Still quite the comfortable alright," Draco said as he smiled at his fedora. HE placed it upon his head as he looked into the mirror. "Oh yes the mares would swoon at my hooves," Draco said jokingly to himself.


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Twilight took her dress off as she went over to Critic. "So, the gala isn't for another two days, lets go check out what Rarity is doing." Critical gave a nod and they left.

Rarity was at her boutique. There were quite a few orders, but she was determined to finish them. Sweetie was in the living room, practicing her magic skills. Focusing on a few crayons. "Darn it. These crayons weigh a ton." SHe went to the sofa to think of how to better approach this.

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Twilight took her dress off as she went over to Critic. "So, the gala isn't for another two days, lets go check out what Rarity is doing." Critical gave a nod and they left.

 

Rarity was at her boutique. There were quite a few orders, but she was determined to finish them. Sweetie was in the living room, practicing her magic skills. Focusing on a few crayons. "Darn it. These crayons weigh a ton." SHe went to the sofa to think of how to better approach this.

Draco walked out towards the Boutique slowly as he had a song in his heart. He looked great and felt like a million bits. He chuckled as he noticed Critic and Twilight in the distance. He felt good as he walked towards the boutique. He began to hum a song.


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Twilight went to greet Draco, Critical following close behind. "Hey, Draco. Come to see Rarity?" Rarity heard voices outside. she looked through the window to see Draco. Her heart skipped as she saw the courier. She placed her work on hold as she rushed to greet her friends.

Draco chuckled and said jokingly "Why else hmm? I mean it's not like these streets are made from gold," Draco laughed joking. He smiled gently as he spotted Rarity through the window he winked at her smiling. He smiled as he also had something in his saddlebags for her.


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Rarity exited the door to meet Draco and her friends. "Oh, good evening, Draco. How are you all doing this fine day?" Twilight gave a greeting nod. "I'm doing fine. So is Critic." Critical gave a nod in agreement. "That's so good to hear. Draco, are you ready for our little get together in a day or so?"

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"Of course. i'll rent out a sky chariot for us," Draco said as he smiled at her gently. "Or does the newly appointed princess have something to get us there quickly?" Draco asked jokingly. He just loved messing with them. He then heard a familiar song being sung. "Ah here comes my two friends Makuro the zebra and Shikonmaru the griffin,"


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Twilight, Critic, and Rarity looked to the new characters. The gryphon stood tall and looked to Draco. Critic didn't know much about Zebra's, but if he was as mysterious as Zecora, and just as likeable, he was sure that he would be able to stay around them. Rarity looked to Draco. "Oh, more friends. Care to introduce us, Draco."

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Draco let out a boisterous laugh and said "These two numb skulls are my best friends Makuro the zebra from the Hiro tribe. Biggest hornball around," Draco said introducing one of his best friend. "What's up toots," Makuro said with a chuckle as he looked over Twilight. Draco tilted his head toward Shikonmaru. "He is Shikonmaru a griffin as you can see and can brawl with the best of them," Draco said as he laughed.

"Ha got that right. If you need a a good brawl to really get the party started then I'm your bird," The boisterous griffin said with the same irish accent as Draco. "And you already know me the classy stallion known as Draco. But to our other friends we are the bedlam brothers," Draco said with a laugh. "So did you two get those extra Gala Tickets I sent you?" Draco asked the two as the pulled out their tickets. "Good this gala will be the best," Draco said with a grin on his muzzle. "Oi Draco I'll bring the show girls to the gala to show those stuck up mares what real mares are like," Makuro whispered as he held a mischievous grin. Draco's eyes widened then his smile turned into a Cheshire cat smile.

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Rarity looked to the new characters with unease. She went over to Draco. "Um, Draco. I don't think your friends are... well, can you just make sure that they behave. My last visit was... something I don't wish to recall. Please promise that they will be on their best behavior."

Draco said with a chuckle "Oh calm down dear Rarity. They can behave when they want to. But again why? Don't like my friends?" Draco asked with abit of mock pout n his face. "Guy's she says she doesn't like you," Draco said with abit of a joking hurt tone. The two friends of the stallion started to tear up jokingly.


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"no, no. Its just I have had a bad expierianc last time, and would like to... bounce back from that, as they say." Rarity gave a shudder. "You all seem to be gentlecolts, but I ask that you behave yourselves. Last time, my friends and I... may have trashed the party last time."
Twilight interjected. "In defense, I was with Celestia the whole time. And Rainbow knocked the columns over" Critic raised an eyebrow in confusion.

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"no, no. Its just I have had a bad expierianc last time, and would like to... bounce back from that, as they say." Rarity gave a shudder. "You all seem to be gentlecolts, but I ask that you behave yourselves. Last time, my friends and I... may have trashed the party last time."

Twilight interjected. "In defense, I was with Celestia the whole time. And Rainbow knocked the columns over" Critic raised an eyebrow in confusion.

"Bah," said the three friends laughing slightly. "Look toots you chose the wrong stallion. How about I take you around ba... OUch!" Makuro said as he got hit upside the head. "Oi behave as the lady said," Draco said as he took off his suit folding it up gently then placing it onto the ground. "Okay now let's miss behave," Draco said as he and his two friends began to rough house kicking up smoke.


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Twilight, Critic, and Rarity stepped away from the cloud. Letting the two duke it out. Rarity took her place next to Draco. Twilight rolled her eyes and used her magic on the two, separating the two. "That is enough!" Critic looked to his friend at her sudden burst in vocal volume, while Rarity looked in worry.

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Twilight, Critic, and Rarity stepped away from the cloud. Letting the two duke it out. Rarity took her place next to Draco. Twilight rolled her eyes and used her magic on the two, separating the two. "That is enough!" Critic looked to his friend at her sudden burst in vocal volume, while Rarity looked in worry.

Draco rolled his eyes. "Oh chill out princess," Draco said as he looked at his two laughing friends. "They are being themselves. Puckish Rogues," Draco said as he accidentally patted the spot where all pegasi have ahem 'happy pants feeling'. Draco looked embarrassed when he did that uh whoops," Draco said as he backed away slowly.


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Twilight let out a yelp at the touch of a sensitive spot. They all looked to Draco in shock. Rarity looked in shock... and maybe some jealousy. But she wouldn't admit that. "Draco! Do I have to tell you to behave yourself as well. Touching a mare inappropriately. Maybe you are the one I should focus on rather than your friends." Critic let out a chuckle. Twilight looked to him. "And whats so funny?" Critic fumbled and began to whistle casually.

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Twilight let out a yelp at the touch of a sensitive spot. They all looked to Draco in shock. Rarity looked in shock... and maybe some jealousy. But she wouldn't admit that. "Draco! Do I have to tell you to behave yourself as well. Touching a mare inappropriately. Maybe you are the one I should focus on rather than your friends." Critic let out a chuckle. Twilight looked to him. "And whats so funny?" Critic fumbled and began to whistle casually.

"Er the spot I touched on a pegasus would we'll let's just say that any mare or stallion would be very very satisfied," Draco said as he sighed "I apologize for that Twilight it's wasn't my intention of...There they go again," Draco said as the two frinds began to fight. "Okay boys break it up,"


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Twilight looked to the fighting creatures. She dropped them to the ground with a thud. Rarity was looking to them, she sighed in defeat and walked to Draco. "Draco, if they are going to join us, can they at least dress the part. If they are going to join, I at least want them to blend in and not bring too much attention. Can you do this for me."

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Twilight looked to the fighting creatures. She dropped them to the ground with a thud. Rarity was looking to them, she sighed in defeat and walked to Draco. "Draco, if they are going to join us, can they at least dress the part. If they are going to join, I at least want them to blend in and not bring too much attention. Can you do this for me."

Draco chuckled as they quickly put on tuxedos. "My dear Rarity surely your not ashamed of them. Plus I tend to get wild," Draco whispered huskily into her ear his chest against hers. "Surely you can see they are just being themselves you know. You can't fault them for that,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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