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She looked to the two and gave a sigh. "No. I can't. In fact I can't ask them to be anything else. I just don't want to let this gala to be a disaster. Boys, please don't think less of me. I'm sorry if I offended you in any way. If I have, could you please forgive me?" Rarity looked to the Zebra and Gryphon.

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She looked to the two and gave a sigh. "No. I can't. In fact I can't ask them to be anything else. I just don't want to let this gala to be a disaster. Boys, please don't think less of me. I'm sorry if I offended you in any way. If I have, could you please forgive me?" Rarity looked to the Zebra and Gryphon.

"Oh come now Toots your the boss's special somepony," Makuro said with a chuckle as Shikonmaru also but snickered. "I mean it's no as if he's plowing your fields with his seed you know. Wait is he?" Shikonmaru asked as he looked at Makuro then the two looked at Draco.  "Oi don't look at me guys," Draco said as he backed away from the stares they were shooting at him.


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Rarity let out a chuckle. "Oh, he hasn't the equipment to handle these fields, boys." She looked to Draco with a smile. "But, That doesn't mean I would like to check out the equipment before a test run." Twilight looked to her friend in shock and leaned to Critic. "Is she talking about a date, or something else?" Critic gave a shrug. He was thinking the former, but she was showing a side neither of them had seen before. 'She was hanging out with Rainbow too much.' Critical thought to himself.

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Draco's eye brow went up. "Humph  sheesh what a blow you the man hood," Draco said slightly but then looked t her. "Hmm don't think I won't take you up on that my dear lass," Draco said as he smirked at her. "Are you sure the little unicorn can handle the big bad pegasus?"


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"As long as you protect those wings." Critical rolled his eyes at Rarity's advances to Draco. Though he did find it adorable. Rarity looked to Draco. "It has been a while since I had some yard work done. But lets see how our date at the gala tomorrow goes, then I'll see about a second date for us." She gave a wink. "Then you can plow these lush fields to your liking, handsome." Twilight and Critic gave a chuckle at her flirting. "Gee, Rarity. Didn't know you were so lewd." "Twilight, there are things I don't let out lightly. I'm sure I can trust you boys to not mention this to anypony else."

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Draco and his friends held up their right talon, and hooves respectfully. "As brothers of Bedlam we solemnly swear to never reveal what was said here unless the mare who said it allows us too and if anypony breaks this oath twenty kick to the balls," Draco and his friends said together.


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Rarity gave a smile to the boys. "Thank you. That brings my mind to rest. Now, what shall we do now that we are all together?" Twilight began to think, as does Critical. "Draco, do you have any requests on what we shall do until the gala?" Critical watched her, waiting for more raunchy flirting.

"Nah I did my shopping today so I don 't know," Draco said as he looked to his friends. "Well Draco we actually came to tell you that thing you said for the courier guild to fid for a white unicorn mare. Heh they have afew leads nothing concrete but," Makuro said trailing off. "I get it it'll take time but it's worth it to see the stones light in Rarity's beautiful blue eyes,"


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Rarity raised her eyebrow at his remark. 'What had he gotten me?' She shrugged it off. "Well, if you boys can't think of anything, I should really get back to my work. Twilight, boys. You are free to come in, but it will be dull. And don't brake anything." She walked back into the boutique. twilight looked to the Gryphon and Zebra. "Well, it was nice meeting you all. Critical thinks so to." He gave a nod in agreement. "So, what is it that you got Rarity, Draco?"

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Rarity raised her eyebrow at his remark. 'What had he gotten me?' She shrugged it off. "Well, if you boys can't think of anything, I should really get back to my work. Twilight, boys. You are free to come in, but it will be dull. And don't brake anything." She walked back into the boutique. twilight looked to the Gryphon and Zebra. "Well, it was nice meeting you all. Critical thinks so to." He gave a nod in agreement. "So, what is it that you got Rarity, Draco?"

"Trying to find an Onyx stone that glows blue in the moonlight. Well as my two numb skull friends here have said," Draco said pointing at the now calm Griffin and Zebra. He smiled as he chuckled. He would definitely have a guy's night out. "So Critical have you been to a bar or tavern?" Draco asked with a grin on his muzzle.


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Critical looked to Draco and shook his head 'no'. Twilight looked to him. "You'll have to forgive him. He's not much of a talker. Except me. He and I are good friends. Critical is... a shy pony. Like, really shy. You could spend hours next to him and not even realize he's there." Critical gave a nod in agreement. "So, this stone. I suppose its for Rarity then?"

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Critical looked to Draco and shook his head 'no'. Twilight looked to him. "You'll have to forgive him. He's not much of a talker. Except me. He and I are good friends. Critical is... a shy pony. Like, really shy. You could spend hours next to him and not even realize he's there." Critical gave a nod in agreement. "So, this stone. I suppose its for Rarity then?"

Draco chuckled "Aye it is for the lovely lass named Rarity," Draco said as as he smiled. "Anyhow you are coming with us to a nice little bar and maybe a strip joint. They serve good alcohol there. Trust us. Oh be prepared to lose your breakfast in the morning,"


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Critical began to ponder his offer. He gave a shrug and nodded to Draco. "Oh. Okay. You boys have fun then. I'll be at the Library. Critic, I'll leave the door open for you when you return." Twilight began to walk off as she gave Critical a wave goodbye. Critical looked to Draco, awaiting for him to speak.

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Critical began to ponder his offer. He gave a shrug and nodded to Draco. "Oh. Okay. You boys have fun then. I'll be at the Library. Critic, I'll leave the door open for you when you return." Twilight began to walk off as she gave Critical a wave goodbye. Critical looked to Draco, awaiting for him to speak.

"Well now since your free now," Draco said with a grin. "Come on boys let's cause alittle chaos," Draco said as he ran dragging the poor Critical by the tail with Makuro and Shikonmaru on his on tail. The boys would have their fun alright. He laughed out loud as he ran into a nearby bar.


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Draco dropped him off at a booth wear the three sat. The gryphon and zebra sat next to Draco as Critical watched him. Critical just watched them as they eyed him. he had never been in a bar before. 'Really wish Twilight was here. She could do the talking for me.' He thought to himself. 'Still, could try to have a little fun here.' He looked to the three males.

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Draco dropped him off at a booth wear the three sat. The gryphon and zebra sat next to Draco as Critical watched him. Critical just watched them as they eyed him. he had never been in a bar before. 'Really wish Twilight was here. She could do the talking for me.' He thought to himself. 'Still, could try to have a little fun here.' He looked to the three males.

Draco handed the poor stallion force to come along with the group a beer. "Something light," Draco said as he then had a whiskey.He drank slowly as the two friends had the strongest stuff. "Whoa baby that's strong," Draco said as he looked at the mare on stage. He gave a wolf whistle. The mare was dancing sexily. Makuro and Shikonmaru howled as she past the three male.

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Critical tapped his foot to the beat of the music. The mare's voice was enchanting to the males as they all staired, giving away calls to the mare on stage. She concluded her song as the whole bar was alight with applause. She gave a wink to her fans and left the stage. 'SHe was pretty good.' He thought to himself.

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Critical tapped his foot to the beat of the music. The mare's voice was enchanting to the males as they all staired, giving away calls to the mare on stage. She concluded her song as the whole bar was alight with applause. She gave a wink to her fans and left the stage. 'SHe was pretty good.' He thought to himself.

Draco on the other hand was having a different problem. He was trying to get his wings down quickly. He was using tape to bring then to his sides but they were quite the stiff pair. Shikonmaeru on the other hand since his wings were alittle smaller than Draco's he still had trouble.


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Critical looked to the Gryphon and Pegasus struggle to keep their wing-boners in check. Critical gave a chuckle at the display. 'Its good to be an earth-pony.' He thought. A waitress came to their booth, making the situation a bit more awkward. "Hey, boys. I'll be your server tonight. Can I get you anything?" She said in a cheery voice.

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Critical looked to the Gryphon and Pegasus struggle to keep their wing-boners in check. Critical gave a chuckle at the display. 'Its good to be an earth-pony.' He thought. A waitress came to their booth, making the situation a bit more awkward. "Hey, boys. I'll be your server tonight. Can I get you anything?" She said in a cheery voice.

Draco smiled and siad with a come hither stare" Oh come now aren't you on the menu?" Draco said as he then got slapped. "Yep definitely what I thought," Draco said rubbing his jaw while he snapped his wings back into their right place. "I'll take fire whiskey a whole bottle please," Draco said with a grin.


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http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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The waitress took each order and eventually made it to Critic. "And what about you, cutie." Critical turned bright red at her remark. He couldn't speak. "What's the matter, cat got your tongue?" Critical found a sheet of napkin and wrote down a response. "Water it is then." She walked off to retrieve their drinks.

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Draco chuckled "Oh she likes you," Draco said as he smiled at the stallion. "So far so good no?" Draco said as he smiled but it just wasn't right with it being all quiet. He needed to sin and be a sinner that he was. He smiled mischievously as he made eyes with a gang member's girlfriend.


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Critical saw Draco eyeing a mare at the other end of the bar. She was in the hooves of a butch looking stallion. What Draco was thinking quickly clicked in his head. He looked utterly scared and shook his head as if saying, ' No don't. It's not worth it.' Hopefully he could understand what he was signaling.

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Critical saw Draco eyeing a mare at the other end of the bar. She was in the hooves of a butch looking stallion. What Draco was thinking quickly clicked in his head. He looked utterly scared and shook his head as if saying, ' No don't. It's not worth it.' Hopefully he could understand what he was signaling.

Draco smiled as the butch looking stallion saw him making eyes and grew utterly pissed. Draco chuckled slightly as he waved his hoof to the mare. He ducked under a bottle of whiskey thrown at his head. He laughed. "Missed me," Draco said as he laughed at the blue stallion. He was going to start a ballroom blitz.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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