private 1x1 Strangers in the night.

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Rarity was surprised by his bravery. taking a kiss from her. But as the kiss went on, she started to love the sensation. The kiss lasted forever to her. Draco finally broke it as her head was swimming. "I would trust you with my life. And as for my... v-virginity. I would give it to you in time." her cheeks blushed at the mention of her inexperience with physical love. So, Rogue. Would you like to court this goddess of which you speak?"

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Rarity was surprised by his bravery. taking a kiss from her. But as the kiss went on, she started to love the sensation. The kiss lasted forever to her. Draco finally broke it as her head was swimming. "I would trust you with my life. And as for my... v-virginity. I would give it to you in time." her cheeks blushed at the mention of her inexperience with physical love. So, Rogue. Would you like to court this goddess of which you speak?"

Draco smiled "Aye I would court her only if she let's this Rogue," Draco said as he nuzzled her gently. He held her close. He smiled gently at her "I would court her till she accepts this lowly stallion's proposal of marriage," Draco said as he looked at her.

 

"Seems like Love is in the air," Makuro said as he had Critical upside down trying to open the window. He sighed slightly "Here's the bottom line our trio is now down to two,"

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Rarity's breath grew heavy at his words. "T-Then I would accept you. I would accept his offer at mar-... marahaha." Rarity was struggling with the last word. If he meant what he said, she was falling for him more and more each time he opened his mouth. She gulped a bit. "Look, Draco. I do like you, a lot really. And if you would be my special somepony, I would accept it in a heart beat. But, lets use the gala tomorrow as a date. Just you and me." She drew closer to him, feeling his coat against hers. "And, when I'm ready, You may take my innocence. Again and again and again. But until that time." She brought him close for another kiss, feeling her tongue against his own. She broke it, trailing some saliva. "Lets take it slow, eh lover boy?"

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Rarity's breath grew heavy at his words. "T-Then I would accept you. I would accept his offer at mar-... marahaha." Rarity was struggling with the last word. If he meant what he said, she was falling for him more and more each time he opened his mouth. She gulped a bit. "Look, Draco. I do like you, a lot really. And if you would be my special somepony, I would accept it in a heart beat. But, lets use the gala tomorrow as a date. Just you and me." She drew closer to him, feeling his coat against hers. "And, when I'm ready, You may take my innocence. Again and again and again. But until that time." She brought him close for another kiss, feeling her tongue against his own. She broke it, trailing some saliva. "Lets take it slow, eh lover boy?"

Draco smiled "Of course Rarity if you want to take it slow I'll be glad to," Draco said softly into her ear. He nuzzled the mare gently. "It's enough for this restless warrior just to be with you," Draco whispered into her ear. He smiled gently and said "Just having this moment with you sooths this restless warrior's heart,"

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His words warmed her heart. SHe brought him in for another kiss. Though shorter than the last one, it still meant a lot to her. "So, does my guard require anything before he departs with his rogues gallery?"

Critical was working the lock of the window with a lock pick. He was successful but the Gryphon accidently dropped him inside. "Who's there!?" Twilight said aloud. She turned on the light to see Critical rubbing his head. "Critic? WHy did you come throught the window?" He looked to Twilight. "Uh, I thought it would be romantic?" Twilight looked to Critical surprised. "O-Okay then. J-Just don't do it again."

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His words warmed her heart. SHe brought him in for another kiss. Though shorter than the last one, it still meant a lot to her. "So, does my guard require anything before he departs with his rogues gallery?"

 

Critical was working the lock of the window with a lock pick. He was successful but the Gryphon accidently dropped him inside. "Who's there!?" Twilight said aloud. She turned on the light to see Critical rubbing his head. "Critic? WHy did you come throught the window?" He looked to Twilight. "Uh, I thought it would be romantic?" Twilight looked to Critical surprised. "O-Okay then. J-Just don't do it again."

"Oh shit," Makuro whispered as he looked at Shikonmaru. They quickly ran off. Leaving Poor Critical to his fate. "That was fun," Makuro said as he ran.  "Well Yes it is but now where is that pegasus?" Shikonmaru asked as he flew slowly. He looked and saw Draco hovering there kissing rarity.

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Critical walked to his couch to sleep when he heard something. "Critic. When you came through the window, did you mean what you said, about it being romantic?" Critical paused and looked to Twilight. "Well, in a way, yeah. I guess I did." She flew from the top floor to meet him on the couch. "Critical, do you... like me? As in... like me, like me?" He was stunned. He sat down with the princess and looked to her with somber eyes. "I admit, I do. I have had feelings for you for a long while. But never got the courage to ask you out." Twilight bit her lip and leaned in close to him. "I like you, too. Critic, would you like to... s-sleep with me." Critical's brain deep fried itself trying to comprehend that sentence. "I-I mean, like, sleep in the same bed. Nonono, I mean, would you like to- no that wont work. What I'm saying is. Want to share my bed. I know the couch is not the best, so would you like to share." Critical rebooted himself and shook his head yes.

 

Rarity broke their kiss as she said farewell. "May our paths cross again." She closed her window as she returned to her bed. She looked at her blanket. "Oh, for Celestia's sake." She got up and went to the bathroom to take care of an issue.

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Critical walked to his couch to sleep when he heard something. "Critic. When you came through the window, did you mean what you said, about it being romantic?" Critical paused and looked to Twilight. "Well, in a way, yeah. I guess I did." She flew from the top floor to meet him on the couch. "Critical, do you... like me? As in... like me, like me?" He was stunned. He sat down with the princess and looked to her with somber eyes. "I admit, I do. I have had feelings for you for a long while. But never got the courage to ask you out." Twilight bit her lip and leaned in close to him. "I like you, too. Critic, would you like to... s-sleep with me." Critical's brain deep fried itself trying to comprehend that sentence. "I-I mean, like, sleep in the same bed. Nonono, I mean, would you like to- no that wont work. What I'm saying is. Want to share my bed. I know the couch is not the best, so would you like to share." Critical rebooted himself and shook his head yes.

 

Rarity broke their kiss as she said farewell. "May our paths cross again." She closed her window as she returned to her bed. She looked at her blanket. "Oh, for Celestia's sake." She got up and went to the bathroom to take care of an issue.

Draco chuckled when he saw the state of the blankets. "Poor mare," Draco said teasingly. He began to hum a slight tune. "Heped a friend, got love once more, my friends are here snickering at me. Wait snickering at me?" Draco asked himself and just blushed slightly. "Atleast I have a mare friend," Draco said dead panned.

 

"We know Draco but please be careful remember how you got when you found out that Sana was cheating on you. I mean you looked ready to off yourself by ramming yourself into a cliff," Shikonmaru said simply as he was trying to be cautious. "must you always bring that up?"

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Critical walked up to Twilights room, scared out of his mind. She hopped into her bed and patted it a bit, asking him to come over. He did as she asked and sat down on it. It was unnaturally comfortable. "Its a special bed, from my teacher. She told me it was amazing. And you know what, she was right." They both laughed a bit, bringing the uncomfortable silence to a halt. "Critic. I just want you to know that, I really like you. And I hope this isn't too uncomfortable for you." Critical waved her worries away. "The truth is," She came closer to Critic. "I'm a bit lonely. Sure I have my great friends, but seeing how Draco looks at Rarity gives me this empty feeling. And I'm not doing this to use you. I really do care about you, I ju-" She was interrupted by a kiss from Critical. He broke away and looked to her. "You talk to much. But, I care about you too." She looked at him softly. "Look, tomorrow, I'll take you to the gala, not as a friend, but as a date. We can see how things go from there and if not, we can return as friends." Twilight gave a nod and laid down to bed. Critical followed her lead.

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Critical walked up to Twilights room, scared out of his mind. She hopped into her bed and patted it a bit, asking him to come over. He did as she asked and sat down on it. It was unnaturally comfortable. "Its a special bed, from my teacher. She told me it was amazing. And you know what, she was right." They both laughed a bit, bringing the uncomfortable silence to a halt. "Critic. I just want you to know that, I really like you. And I hope this isn't too uncomfortable for you." Critical waved her worries away. "The truth is," She came closer to Critic. "I'm a bit lonely. Sure I have my great friends, but seeing how Draco looks at Rarity gives me this empty feeling. And I'm not doing this to use you. I really do care about you, I ju-" She was interrupted by a kiss from Critical. He broke away and looked to her. "You talk to much. But, I care about you too." She looked at him softly. "Look, tomorrow, I'll take you to the gala, not as a friend, but as a date. We can see how things go from there and if not, we can return as friends." Twilight gave a nod and laid down to bed. Critical followed her lead.

Draco sighed and said "It's good to see you guys again," Draco said as he landed infront of his two friends," He would go to hell and back for them. "So anyway yeah you guys better get out of here before you get in trouble I'll stay with Rarity okay?" Draco asked as his friends nodded as they headed to a hotel that they rented two rooms from.

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(Afternoon. Next Day.)

 

Rarity and Twilight had met up at the area they settled on. Rarity looking a bit anxious. "Rarity, calm down. He'll show up." Rarity was pacing in place. "But what if he doesn't? He-He-He could have over slept. Or he may have passed out. Or-" Twilight cut her off. "calm down, Draco will show. He is not one to keep a mare waiting." Rarity tried to calm down. Twilight saw Critical coming towards them in a suit Rarity made.  He stood before them and gave a heroic look. "My, Critical you look rather dashing." He lifted his head up in triumph. Twilight came over to greet him. "You look very handsome. Now, all that's left is Draco and then we can head for the train."

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"WOAH, WOAH, WOAH!" Draco yelled out as he crashed into the side of the train. "Ow," Draco said pulling himself off. "Bloody hell on a crap cracker that hurt like a mother bucker," Draco said holding his head. He was looking all dressed up in his get up from yetserday. "So how do I look ladies and gentle stallion?"

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The mares commented. "Rather dashing." "You look great." Critical gave a remark in his head. "Like a rock learning how to fly by the looks of your landing. But the suit looks cool. Rarity must have put extra effort into it.' He thought to himself. He gave Draco an approving nod. The girls, and Critic, joined Draco on the platform. "So, my dashing rogue, are you set for our first date?"

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The mares commented. "Rather dashing." "You look great." Critical gave a remark in his head. "Like a rock learning how to fly by the looks of your landing. But the suit looks cool. Rarity must have put extra effort into it.' He thought to himself. He gave Draco an approving nod. The girls, and Critic, joined Draco on the platform. "So, my dashing rogue, are you set for our first date?"

"Of course and oi I know that look. This suit is an armani suit made by the finest suit makers in the griffin kingdom," Draco said and then sighed "Yeah I know that was a crash landing. Look I was getting here in a hurry. Should have woken up earlier. Ah balls," Draco said as he saw his ex in the train. "Well let's get first class shall we?"

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Edited March 11, 2014 by dragon4111

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Rarity practically lit up at the mention of first class. She took her place next to Draco, both walking to get the tickets. Leaving Critical and Twilight. "So, you excited about our date?" Critical gave a nod. "Of course. Wouldn't trade it for the world." She nuzzled up to him. "Glad to hear that. Come on, lets catch up before they leave us." Critical returned to silence.

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Rarity practically lit up at the mention of first class. She took her place next to Draco, both walking to get the tickets. Leaving Critical and Twilight. "So, you excited about our date?" Critical gave a nod. "Of course. Wouldn't trade it for the world." She nuzzled up to him. "Glad to hear that. Come on, lets catch up before they leave us." Critical returned to silence.

"Well now the shy pony speaks," Draco said jokingly as he looked at the stallion then smiled. "Man gotta be abit braver. Oh and I do know who you are Critical. Your a movie critic who reviewed the Lord of the Rings trilogy didn't you?" Draco asked. "I was in it. I'm not much of an actor though,"

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Critical looked in surprise. He did look familiar to him, he just thought it was a coincidence. He still didn't speak to the others. Still to shy. Instead he gave a shrug and a motion to Draco as if saying 'It could have been worse.' Critical had indeed seen worse. The Room, by Tommy Wild-bow. Never again. "You, an actor?" Rarity said in disbelief. "Come now, Draco. No pony is that interesting."

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"I was low on money. So I took a job as an actor for a Minotaur named Peter Jackson. Nice guy. Gave me the lead role of Aragorn," Draco said as he smiled at the memories. "Ah that role was fun too," Draco said with a smirk on his muzzle. "I did enjoy the speech though,"

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They all gave a chuckle. Critical whispered something to Twilight. "He says that was one of his favorite parts in the film. He thought you pulled it off well. Except the ending. Your voice sounded a bit strained. " Critical gave a nod in confirmation. Rarity drew closer to Draco. "Hm, a movie star as a simple courier. I guess the interesting ponies are in places you least expect."

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They all gave a chuckle. Critical whispered something to Twilight. "He says that was one of his favorite parts in the film. He thought you pulled it off well. Except the ending. Your voice sounded a bit strained. " Critical gave a nod in confirmation. Rarity drew closer to Draco. "Hm, a movie star as a simple courier. I guess the interesting ponies are in places you least expect."

Draco chuckled slightly "Yeah believe me I don't want to do speeches. I'm more along the lines of a singer," Draco said as he looked at the window. "I personally like different genres like  western, Swing, Cabaret, and then love ballads," Draco said as he relaxed. "It did put a strain on my voice. The speech I mean,"

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Critical gave a nod in agreement. He whispered some more into Twilights ear to help him speak. "Critical says that your portrayal of Aragorn was superb. He doesn't think another stallion could do any better. Regardless of a voice strain." Rarity looked to Draco. She was interested in the singing thing. "Ooh, Draco you sure have some talent. A pony like you could take broadway by storm, making it with the greats." Rarity gave a sigh. "And maybe a lovely mare at your side?"Rarity bit her lip.

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Draco chuckled as he began to sing for the ponies. He looked at Rarity gently as he sang. "There's a calm surrender to the rush of day
When the heat of a rolling wind can be turned away
An enchanted moment, and it sees me through
It's enough for this restless warrior just to be with you

And can you feel the love tonight
It is where we are
It's enough for this wide-eyed wanderer
That we got this far
And can you feel the love tonight
How it's laid to rest
It's enough to make kings and vagabonds
Believe the very best

There's a time for everyone if they only learn
That the twisting kaleidoscope moves us all in turn
There's a rhyme and reason to the wild outdoors
When the heart of this star-crossed voyager beats in time with yours," after he sang he nuzzled the mare gently. He slowly gave her a kiss a gentle one but passionate.

Edited March 17, 2014 by dragon4111

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The entire train car applauded as Draco came to a close on his song. A mare was crying in the far corner of the car. Rarity was enthralled by his singing, along with Twilight. Critical looked to Twilight and Rarity, then to Draco. He whispered into Twilights ear once more. "Critical says, he is quite impressed with your musical talent. Even though he is not a fan of the genre." The train conductor had begun to speak on the intercom. "Mares and gentlecolts, we will be arriving at Canterlot station in approximately ten minutes. Please be ready to depart soon." The comm. shut off as they sat in waiting. Rarity was totally in to Draco right now. "My, such beauty emanating from your mouth. To think that such a wonderful voice hides behind such a devil. Truly I am impressed."

Edited March 17, 2014 by Mr. Critical

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The entire train car applauded as Draco came to a close on his song. A mare was crying in the far corner of the car. Rarity was enthralled by his singing, along with Twilight. Critical looked to Twilight and Rarity, then to Kyo. He whispered into Twilights ear once more. "Critical says, he is quite impressed with your musical talent. Even though he is not a fan of the genre." The train conductor had begun to speak on the intercom. "Mares and gentlecolts, we will be arriving at Canterlot station in approximately ten minutes. Please be ready to depart soon." The comm. shut off as they sat in waiting. Rarity was totally in to Draco right now. "My, such beauty emanating from your mouth. To think that such a wonderful voice hides behind such a devil. Truly I am impressed."

Draco said simply "There is more to me that meets the eyes dear diamond," Draco whispered into her ear. He placed his fedora onto his head once more. "Trust me my friends and I put on shows for towns ponies and for charity. Heh I may seem like a kind stallion but I've been selfish before very selfish,"

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Twilight gave a nod. "Its okay. No pony is perfect. We've all had a moment of greed in our life." Critical gave a nod in conformation as rarity looked out to the window. Seeing that Canterlot was coming up close. "Come now, were almost at the city. We may continue our conversations there."