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Twilight gave a scoff. "I dance just fine, thank you very much." Critical whispered something into her ear. "Aww, you're so sweet. He said my dancing is adorable." Critical blushed a bit. "Its fine Twilight. Your dancing is unique and a part of you. Just as Draco's dancing is unique to him. He is spectacular and... really moistens a mare up." She blushed. "Was that out loud?"

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Twilight gave a scoff. "I dance just fine, thank you very much." Critical whispered something into her ear. "Aww, you're so sweet. He said my dancing is adorable." Critical blushed a bit. "Its fine Twilight. Your dancing is unique and a part of you. Just as Draco's dancing is unique to him. He is spectacular and... really moistens a mare up." She blushed. "Was that out loud?"

Draco chuckled and said simply "Yes," Draco then said "Weell of course he would say that. I mean he loves ya," Draco said but then sighed "Look Twilight your not a normal pony anymore your a princess. And a princess also needs to know how to dance. I could teach Critic there how to dance and then have him teach you,"


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Critic had a sour look on his face and began to whisper something to Twilight. "He says, I can dance just fine. I've studied ballroom dancing in various films I've reviewed and practice them with a broom." Criticals eyes shot open and whispered something again. "I know you didn't say that last part, but its true. I caught you a few times." Critical began to blush as the two ladies giggled. "Oh, don't worry Critic, ballroom dancing is easy as one, tow, three. Sometimes literally. Twilight could get a hang of it easily if you help her practice."

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Critic had a sour look on his face and began to whisper something to Twilight. "He says, I can dance just fine. I've studied ballroom dancing in various films I've reviewed and practice them with a broom." Criticals eyes shot open and whispered something again. "I know you didn't say that last part, but its true. I caught you a few times." Critical began to blush as the two ladies giggled. "Oh, don't worry Critic, ballroom dancing is easy as one, tow, three. Sometimes literally. Twilight could get a hang of it easily if you help her practice."

Draco was laughing hard "Oh no no no the dance I'm talking about is the tango. A dance to ignite your lover's very desires," Draco said as his voice became husky. "To ignite the fires of passion and love within their hearts," Draco said as he walked up to Rarity slowly with a smiled on his muzzle "To ignite her baser insincts and drive her very being into a lustful state," Draco said once more huskily.


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Rarity was enthralled by Draco's approach. Not saying a word. Twilight nudged Critical's shoulder. "I want you to learn that." Critic raised an eyebrow. Rarity looked into Draco's eyes. "Mmm, you wish to ignite a lovely mares fire, eh? Well, just be prepared. you better know how to dowse them as well." She gave a sexy growl.

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Rarity was enthralled by Draco's approach. Not saying a word. Twilight nudged Critical's shoulder. "I want you to learn that." Critic raised an eyebrow. Rarity looked into Draco's eyes. "Mmm, you wish to ignite a lovely mares fire, eh? Well, just be prepared. you better know how to dowse them as well." She gave a sexy growl.

"I can do that and more," Draco said as he rubbed his chest against hers. He smiled mischievously as he wrapped her in his wings then gave her a soul searingly passionate kiss. If she had socks on they would have ignited. He could have sworn she passed out from it.


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Rarity blacked out with the intensity of the kiss she had received. Twilight and Critical looked with awe, Twilight slightly jealous of Rarity. But her jealousy sub-seeded when she looked over to Critic. "That's fine, I'm perfectly happy with what I've got already." Draco broke the kiss, as Rarity was panting slightly. If it was anymore intense, she would have slipped into a false state of estrus at that very moment. "Draco... that was indescribable."

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Rarity blacked out with the intensity of the kiss she had received. Twilight and Critical looked with awe, Twilight slightly jealous of Rarity. But her jealousy sub-seeded when she looked over to Critic. "That's fine, I'm perfectly happy with what I've got already." Draco broke the kiss, as Rarity was panting slightly. If it was anymore intense, she would have slipped into a false state of estrus at that very moment. "Draco... that was indescribable."

Draco chuckled "And that my friends is how the O'Malley's woo their mares. Of course we have to be charming to them too. And spoil them rotten. Now that I think about it we are pretty," Draco was interrupted by a whip crack next to his ear. "Mother bucker that hurts," Draco said rubbing his ear. "And thank you Makuro for that now I'm slightly deaf in one ear,"

"No problem dude. Plus you O'Malley's are whipped with a capital W,"


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Rarity gave a giggle. "That was entertaining, Makuro. But pleasing a mare, doesn't make him whipped. It makes him a stallion." Rarity gave Draco a kiss on his cheek. "And what a fine stallion he is." Twilight looked to Critic, then to the new males that arrived. "Well, I hope you two are very happy together. I can tell already that you two are." Rarity gave a nod. "And I hope you and Critic have the same luck."

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Rarity gave a giggle. "That was entertaining, Makuro. But pleasing a mare, doesn't make him whipped. It makes him a stallion." Rarity gave Draco a kiss on his cheek. "And what a fine stallion he is." Twilight looked to Critic, then to the new males that arrived. "Well, I hope you two are very happy together. I can tell already that you two are." Rarity gave a nod. "And I hope you and Critic have the same luck."

Draco chuckled and said "I have a library full of erotica Twilight if you want ideas to please your coltfriend there," Draco said jokingly. He smiled as he playfully smacked Rarity's flanks. He smiled at her playfully. "Ah but dear Rarity you have great flanks and a great plot," Draco whispered into her ear gently.


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Rarity was taken by surprise by the impact to her cheeks. She was embarrassed to think if the other ponies were to see such behavior. Twilight was uncomfortable at his offer. "Oh... u-uh. I-I don't need those..." she leans in to Draco. "Drop off the best copies you have at my place in the after noon. No witnesses." Critical was intrigued by how his lady friends were acting this evening. Rarity blushed and trailed her hoof down Draco's chest. "Ooh, treating a lady so roughly in public." She gives him a firm slap on his flanks, not giving a damn if the other ponies saw. "Maybe I should treat mine as such." She gave a playful giggle.

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Rarity was taken by surprise by the impact to her cheeks. She was embarrassed to think if the other ponies were to see such behavior. Twilight was uncomfortable at his offer. "Oh... u-uh. I-I don't need those..." she leans in to Draco. "Drop off the best copies you have at my place in the after noon. No witnesses." Critical was intrigued by how his lady friends were acting this evening. Rarity blushed and trailed her hoof down Draco's chest. "Ooh, treating a lady so roughly in public." She gives him a firm slap on his flanks, not giving a damn if the other ponies saw. "Maybe I should treat mine as such." She gave a playful giggle.

Draco jumped slightly. He smirked at the bold mare and said "Of course no witnesses," Draco said as he looked at Twilight. He smirked slightly as he whispered into Rarity's ear "It's always the book worms that are the real perverts," Draco chuckled slightly to himself.


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Rarity gave a chuckle. "You have no idea what she's in to. then again, you have no idea what you're in for." She separated from Draco and looked to her friends. "Well, this has been lovely. We loved and laughed with my good friends. But, I'm ready to go home. Before we give the upperclass ponies how... down and dirty a classy lady can be. Draco, Critic. Would you two be dears and escort your ladies home?"

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Rarity gave a chuckle. "You have no idea what she's in to. then again, you have no idea what you're in for." She separated from Draco and looked to her friends. "Well, this has been lovely. We loved and laughed with my good friends. But, I'm ready to go home. Before we give the upperclass ponies how... down and dirty a classy lady can be. Draco, Critic. Would you two be dears and escort your ladies home?"

"Aww I wanted to sing a song too," Draco said as he chuckled slightly. He wanted to make her feel special this night for that one upset. He smiled slightly. "Come on I'll put a show on or you Rarity. And you'll be my co star. Actually a duet," Draco said as he looked at the mare. Pulling her into the ballroom.


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"Well. If you insist." She got up on stage as the two prepared to sing. Twilight sitting close to Critic. "Hey, sorry if I embarrassed you there." Critic gave a wave. Saying it was okay. "I don't want you to think I'm a floozy. It's just... I really like you Critic. You're sweet, and at times funny. And your shyness is adorable." Critical gave a blush. They both looked on stage as the two stood, overlooking th crowd.

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"Well. If you insist." She got up on stage as the two prepared to sing. Twilight sitting close to Critic. "Hey, sorry if I embarrassed you there." Critic gave a wave. Saying it was okay. "I don't want you to think I'm a floozy. It's just... I really like you Critic. You're sweet, and at times funny. And your shyness is adorable." Critical gave a blush. They both looked on stage as the two stood, overlooking th crowd.

Draco gave a nod to his two friends as Draco sat on a piano and started to play it. He began to sing with Rarity. He looked into her blue eyes as they sang. It was just Rarity and Draco as they sang. It was a love song written by his parents before they became the greedy ponies they were.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l2uMyfC4ycg


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The crowd cheered as the two ponies took a bow and went off stage. In the back of the room, Blue blood had shed a tear at their performance and wiped it away quickly and disappeared into the castle. They sat at the table with their friends, Rarity taking a sip of champagne. "Rarity that was fantastic, you as well Draco." Twilight said, her wings flapping a bit with her excitement.

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The crowd cheered as the two ponies took a bow and went off stage. In the back of the room, Blue blood had shed a tear at their performance and wiped it away quickly and disappeared into the castle. They sat at the table with their friends, Rarity taking a sip of champagne. "Rarity that was fantastic, you as well Draco." Twilight said, her wings flapping a bit with her excitement.

Draco chuckled slightly. "Rarity has the voice of an angel," Draco said as he nuzzled Rarity. "Hmm nice," Draco said as he opened his wings slightly. "Yeah it's been a very good day for me," He said out loud. "This last week well things haven't been going well. The courier guild is being arseholes about the money I'm paying them to et the Onyx Stone,"


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity gave a chuckle. "I told you that its difficult to find. And you have the voice of a devil. Charming young mares and what not. Still, I had fun tonight. But the night is still young. Draco, you may join me for tea again if you wish?" Twilight and Critical stood up, taking a final sip of their drinks. "I had fun too. You two sounded amazing together. Critic, Lets be off. I want to relax a bit at home. I've already had some nobles hitting on me tonight and I want somepony else to start hitting on me."

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Rarity gave a chuckle. "I told you that its difficult to find. And you have the voice of a devil. Charming young mares and what not. Still, I had fun tonight. But the night is still young. Draco, you may join me for tea again if you wish?" Twilight and Critical stood up, taking a final sip of their drinks. "I had fun too. You two sounded amazing together. Critic, Lets be off. I want to relax a bit at home. I've already had some nobles hitting on me tonight and I want somepony else to start hitting on me."

"Of course Rarity," Draco said as he sighed "Critic," Draco said as he looked at the stallion "knock her socks off," Draco said jokingly as he looked at the stallion with a smile. "Now shall we go my dear lass?" Draco asked as he spread his wings slightly as he looked at Rarity.


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity climbed onto her date, knowing full well what he wanted. "Just be gentle, this is my first time flying with another." Twilight and Critical were going to head home by magic. Twilight was skilled at long range teleportation, but was only capable of herself and one passanger. "You crazy kids have fun. Were heading home."

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Rarity climbed onto her date, knowing full well what he wanted. "Just be gentle, this is my first time flying with another." Twilight and Critical were going to head home by magic. Twilight was skilled at long range teleportation, but was only capable of herself and one passanger. "You crazy kids have fun. Were heading home."

Draco chuckled "In what other way is your first time?" Draco asked jokingly as he and Rarity took flight. "Do you like it taking flight my dear rarity. The wind in your mane," Draco said after taking off his suit and placing it safely into his saddle bags.


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity held on tight to Draco, she was not used to such high altitudes as a passenger. "INdeed. I have never really done this before. And for your information, I've never done "That" before either." Rarity was enjoying the view though. Their trip to Ponyville was within view.

Twilight and Critical appeared in the treehouse with a flash, Critical was slightly charred. "Well, we're not burnt to a crisp, so I say I'm getting better." Critical gave a chuckle. "Always the optimistic one as always, Twilight."

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Rarity held on tight to Draco, she was not used to such high altitudes as a passenger. "INdeed. I have never really done this before. And for your information, I've never done "That" before either." Rarity was enjoying the view though. Their trip to Ponyville was within view.

 

Twilight and Critical appeared in the treehouse with a flash, Critical was slightly charred. "Well, we're not burnt to a crisp, so I say I'm getting better." Critical gave a chuckle. "Always the optimistic one as always, Twilight."

Draco chuckled slightly as he looked t the mare "The only view I can see is you," Draco said as he landed near the outskirts of Ponyville. "Now shall we get going my dear lady?" Draco asked as he walked towards her boutique slowly with her on his back. "ANd in my eyes your as beautiful as the night and stars,"


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http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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"Oh my. Such a silver tongue on you. Your compliments will get you oh so far, Draco. But they are far enough." Rarity nuzzled against as he carried her home. She could walk just fine, but the thought of a handsome stallion carrying her like a damsel was just to rare to pass up.

Critical had gotten ready for bed, as did Twilight. The two sat at the couch, calmly talking to each other. Telling jokes and how the night had gone.

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