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"Oh my. Such a silver tongue on you. Your compliments will get you oh so far, Draco. But they are far enough." Rarity nuzzled against as he carried her home. She could walk just fine, but the thought of a handsome stallion carrying her like a damsel was just to rare to pass up.

 

Critical had gotten ready for bed, as did Twilight. The two sat at the couch, calmly talking to each other. Telling jokes and how the night had gone.

"Well the night went well don't you think," Draco said as he walked through the door of the boutique. "I mean besides my little temper incident it went rather well huh," he said as he walked to her room with her on his back. "Hmm though I bet you would love to be on your back,"


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Rarity got off him and went to her bed. Removing her clothes and putting them away. "well, you and your friends behaved phenomenally tonight. And I have grown quite comfortable around you..." Rarity paused to take in the information and process it. "I would like to be... intimate with you, Draco. I really do. You sweep me off my feet and you treat me like a mare, not someponies plaything. But, if we are to go that far. I-I just don't know if I... could satisfy you."

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Rarity got off him and went to her bed. Removing her clothes and putting them away. "well, you and your friends behaved phenomenally tonight. And I have grown quite comfortable around you..." Rarity paused to take in the information and process it. "I would like to be... intimate with you, Draco. I really do. You sweep me off my feet and you treat me like a mare, not someponies plaything. But, if we are to go that far. I-I just don't know if I... could satisfy you."

Draco chuckled and said "Don't force yourself to try to be intimate with me my dear. Just let it come to you. Even then I will worship you like a goddess that you are. I would erect towers of gold and ivory for you. I would destroy mountains if you so wish it," Draco looked into her eyes "All you have to do it wish for it and I'll do it just for you my blue eyed goddess,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity looked relieved. A tear falling down her face as she embraced draco. "Thank you. Thank you so much." She looked to Draco, a smile on her face and she began to bite her lip. "I-If you are telling the t-truth. Then... t-touch me." her voice was soft and nervous. "I-I want to be with you, Draco. So, I give you something I give to nopony else. I-I ask you t-to touch me."

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Critical and Twilight awoke, their manes frazzled from their first time together. Twilight awoke from her sleep groggy, but satisfied. "Mmm, good morning, lover." Critical gave a dizzy smile. "H-Hi. Its nice waking up to an angel." Twilight gave a giggle and got up to head to the shower to clean up her sticky coat.

 

Rarity was awakening as well. Her plot a bit soar. But seeing Draco next to her made the soar body more than worth it. "Good morning, my love. How are you doing, this morning?"

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Critical and Twilight awoke, their manes frazzled from their first time together. Twilight awoke from her sleep groggy, but satisfied. "Mmm, good morning, lover." Critical gave a dizzy smile. "H-Hi. Its nice waking up to an angel." Twilight gave a giggle and got up to head to the shower to clean up her sticky coat.

 

Rarity was awakening as well. Her plot a bit soar. But seeing Draco next to her made the soar body more than worth it. "Good morning, my love. How are you doing, this morning?"

"Heh good and you?" Draco asked as he looked at Rarity gently. "Hmm want me to cook you some breakfast?" he asked his mare as he stood up and stretched out his wings. He smiled as he flapped them slightly. He noticed afew loose feathers on his wings. "Huh afew loose feathers,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity gave a stretch of her muscles and gave a nod. "That would be lovely, Draco. I would like them over easy. If that's not to much to ask for." She got up from her bed and headed to the bathroom to freshen up. Her mane was a mess and her plot was sore from last night.

Draco chuckled to himself as he walked down after abit of preening himself. He walked into the kitchen as he began to make Rarity a full breakfast. He was so glad that he got supplies in his saddlebags. The aroma drifted into  Rarity's room. a mixture of pancakes with eggs and hay bacon.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity placed Draco's breakfast on the table and sat with him. "So, what shall we do today? After work I mean. I could introduce you to my friends. The rest of them I mean." Rarity took a bite of her eggs and looked to Draco with a smile

 

Critical and Twilight got the living room in the library back together. After which they had gotten everything ready for their day. Critical had a review to do and Twilight was studying new spells from some books she had received from Celestia.

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Rarity placed Draco's breakfast on the table and sat with him. "So, what shall we do today? After work I mean. I could introduce you to my friends. The rest of them I mean." Rarity took a bite of her eggs and looked to Draco with a smile

 

Critical and Twilight got the living room in the library back together. After which they had gotten everything ready for their day. Critical had a review to do and Twilight was studying new spells from some books she had received from Celestia.

"Well there is that delivery Twilight commissioned," Draco said as he smiled slightly. "She did say no witnesses," he said "Does that mean I get to knock out some pony?" Draco asked jokingly as he pulled up ponysutra series. "What I am a stallion you know," Draco said.

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A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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"Meh says you my dear," Draco said jokingly. "I mean you wanted me to be rough with you last night," Draco said as he smirked looking slightly smugly at her. He was joking with her but he love it. "But," Draco then laid one hell of a soul searing kiss on her. "I wouldn't trade it for the world,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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Rarity was taken aback by that passion filled kiss. Loving every second of the connection. Draco broke the kiss as Rarity began to pant as she gathered her thoughts. "I-I wouldn't have it changed either. But, don't hurt anypony unless it's necessary. Can you do that for me sweetie?"

"My dear your looking at a stallion who helpped out his friend by beating up a gangster," Draco said as he nibbled on her ear. "I make you no promises," Draco whispered huskily into her ear gently. "I'm sure you can think of a way to keep this bedlam bro in line," he said.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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"Mmm. I can think of a thing or two. But for now, we have our jobs to do. So, you do your thing and I'll do mine. And when you get back, my friends and I will meet you. Then we can get to... round two. But lets get the day done with and I'll make the arrangements so you can meet everypony."

"But of course my dear Rarity," Draco said as he looked at his mare. H kissed her gently as he walked outside with his delivery bags. He smiled at her "Parting is such sweet sorrow," Draco said as he took flight once more. He flew through the air doing afew flips for show.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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  • 2 weeks later...

As Draco left, Rarity went to get to her work. Twilight did the same thing. Critical left his new home with Twilight and was making his way to the theatres. But as he was making his way there, he saw a new building. One he had not seen before. What was most odd was the fact that it was a boutique. It appeared that Rarity has a little competition.

 

(Sorry it took so long. I've been feeling kinda lonely. But, I made a promise to ya and I plan on keeping it.)

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Draco landed abit roughly as he saw critic. "Hmm she did say no witnesses," he said with a mutter. He hit the poor stallion upside the head hard to knock him out. He'll get the poor stallion a fire whiskey afterward. Draco then noticed another boutique. "Hoo boy Rarity won't be happy about this," Draco said as he dragged the Poor Critic to Twilight's Library. "Heyo O'Malley deliveries," Draco said knocking on the door.

Mr. Critical Edited by dragon4111

A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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