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Twilight gave a nod. "Its okay. No pony is perfect. We've all had a moment of greed in our life." Critical gave a nod in conformation as rarity looked out to the window. Seeing that Canterlot was coming up close. "Come now, were almost at the city. We may continue our conversations there."

Draco chuckled slightly then saw his friends come in with a serious look on their faces. He saw that and asked "What's wrong guys?"  Shikonmaru looked at Draco and said "I saw your ex on  the train so please try to keep your anger under control. Try not to embarrass you day with a impromptu show please," he looked at Draco as Draco said "Yeah alright then,"

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Rarity and Twilight raised and eyebrow at this. Twilight made a motion to ask about it, as if the two were having a silent debate on the matter. Rarity walked upto Draco and asked the question. "Draco, why would your companions warn you about a former flame? She didn't hurt you, did she?"

"Yes yes she did hurt me," Draco said simply as he sighed. "She stole from me, Cheated on me then lied about being pregnant," Draco said with a scowl on his muzzle. "Of course she decided to go with a better pony or atleast better rich pony," Draco said with a growl on his muzzle. His eyes were almost alight with wrath in them.

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A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity gave a scoff as they all began to exit the train. "What a horrid pony. You are better off without such a beast." Critical, Twilight, Rarity, and Draco were walking to the Castle. There, their night would begin. "But, I will say one thing about her." SHe got closer to Draco. "She let a wonderful catch go."

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Rarity gave a scoff as they all began to exit the train. "What a horrid pony. You are better off without such a beast." Critical, Twilight, Rarity, and Draco were walking to the Castle. There, their night would begin. "But, I will say one thing about her." SHe got closer to Draco. "She let a wonderful catch go."

Draco chuckled "You think so?" Draco asked as he danced with the mare. He smiled gently as he looked into her blue eyes with his silver ones. "Hmm just think about it you just met me afew nights ago. Jezz I really am a tramp," Draco said jokingly as he danced with Rarity.


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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They arrived at the gala. Draco and Rarity began t dance to the sound of the music, while Twilight and Critic did their own thing. Rarity and Draco danced as if their hooves were on air. "If you are a tramp, I have a few coins on me, I could have you strip. But the other mares would get in on my fun as well." Rarity gave a short giggle. "But in seriousness, you are no tramp, Draco. You see it as hasty, I see it as that I have found a pony that I have clicked with."

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They arrived at the gala. Draco and Rarity began t dance to the sound of the music, while Twilight and Critic did their own thing. Rarity and Draco danced as if their hooves were on air. "If you are a tramp, I have a few coins on me, I could have you strip. But the other mares would get in on my fun as well." Rarity gave a short giggle. "But in seriousness, you are no tramp, Draco. You see it as hasty, I see it as that I have found a pony that I have clicked with."

Draco smiled at the mare. "I see," Draco said as he nuzzled the mare. Sana walked onto the stage. She was a white unicorn mare as she looked down at the audience "Hello everypony. For this next song I want to sing you a song about a certain pony in this room," she said as she looked at Draco. She began to sing.

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A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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The crowd applauded at the musicians song. Draco didn't seem all that amused and Rarity was able to put two and two together. "I'm guessing she is your former fling? She does look beautiful, but from what you've told me, that beauty is only on the outside."

"Yeah former," Draco said with a scowl. How dare she do that. He growled and then he saw that bloody bastard Blueballs come walking up and he knew the look he was going to insult Rarity. Draco was definitely in no mood to deal with the bastard he wanted to rip Sana appart.


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http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity cringed at the sight of the prince. "Come, Draco. The inside seems a bit stuck up." Rarity and Draco left for a new part of the Gala. They found a table were Critical and Twilight were sitting. "Hey, guys. You having a good time?" Critical was nibbling on some kind of cheese and looked up to greet them.

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Rarity cringed at the sight of the prince. "Come, Draco. The inside seems a bit stuck up." Rarity and Draco left for a new part of the Gala. They found a table were Critical and Twilight were sitting. "Hey, guys. You having a good time?" Critical was nibbling on some kind of cheese and looked up to greet them.

Draco had the most foulest of looks on his face as the prince had followed them. But in that instance Draco had the prince's throat on his knee and one of his wings shimmering with his innate magic sharpening it. "Go on say it Blue moron then I will end your miserable life," Draco whispered coldly as his eyes showed no mercy.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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They all looked in horror, the music stopped as a few guards came to attend to the prince and his assailant. Twilight and Rarity took a step back as the guards came in. "Unhand me, peasant! I am not some mare to be handled!" The guards got closer, holding spears at the ready to Draco.

Draco snarled out as he looked at the prince "I am Celestia's Mercanary," Draco said simply. "I have lead an expedition to the Eternal Return and Dealt with a god like being," Draco said opening his shirt to reveal Celestia's mark that was burned onto all of the Mercs of Equestria. "You know nothing of hell little pony," Draco said coldly. "You say I'm a peasant. But really you are the one who is the peasant. You assaulted my date last time now you want to insult her. For that I judge you a threat to Equestria. I give you two choices. 1. You are exiled from Equestria no name, No money as it will be given to the one you have slighted. Or death,"


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http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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The prince looked to Draco in terror. "What are you talking about. I have no interest in her, why would I insult in a pony I care nothing about." The guards stepped forward slightly. "Its true, miss Rarity and I are not the best of companions. In fact we hate each other, and we've come to an agreement to just avoid each other. I have no desire to interact with her in any sense of the word."

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The prince looked to Draco in terror. "What are you talking about. I have no interest in her, why would I insult in a pony I care nothing about." The guards stepped forward slightly. "Its true, miss Rarity and I are not the best of companions. In fact we hate each other, and we've come to an agreement to just avoid each other. I have no desire to interact with her in any sense of the word."

"Try lieing again slime. I dare you. The magic coursing through my very wing right now will cut through a marble statue easily," Draco said as he looked at the lying scumbag infront of him. "I know your type Blueblood. You want other's to pity you. Want other's to sympathize with you. But me. I don't see a weak little stallion oh no Your a manipulative stallion. Now begone from Equestria pissant," Draco said as he let the now peasant Blueblood up. Draco close his eyes then looked to Rarity. "I apologize for that display Rarity. I will go home and you will have your fun,"

 He glared at the prince "I mean it Blueblood,"

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A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Blue Blood got up and dusted himself off. He motioned for the guards to stand down and left with him to some other location. Rarity looked saddened, giving him a nod and sat down. Not speaking a single word. Twilight and Critic just watched as the awkwardness grew.

Draco sighed then walked to Rarity. He gave her a kiss. "Or I could stay here with you my dear," he said as he smiled at her "I'm sorry Rarity. But Shikonmaru was right I have anger issues," Draco said with a sigh as he placed a wing over her back gently. He he a soft song for Rarity "If I had words, to make a day for you, I'd sing you a morning, golden and true. I would make this day, last for all time, then fill the night, deep in moonshine."


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http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity gave him a soft smile. "Y-You scared us there." her voice was soft as she spoke. "But, you were standing up for me, in a way. And I find it... sweet. And, I admit..., I may or may not have done the same thing for you." Rarity slowly got a bit closer to Draco. "Thank you, Draco."

"I wasn't lying when I said I went to the Eternal return," Draco said as he nuzzled her "Look I'm sorry for the sudden change. It seems I'm alittle," Draco said as he looked at her and he smiled when he looked into her eyes. "Well the music is still going oh and that Sana left quickly,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity gave a sigh. "Just promise me you won't do it again." Rarity gives him a kiss on his cheek and stood up to dance with him. Critic and Twilight decided to join them. "Critic. You wanna dance with me?" He shook his head with glee and got up to escort her to the dance floor.

Draco smiled as he began to dance with Rarity. He nodded to his friends as they took over for the band on stage. They began an energetic tune. Draco smiled as the two special someponies began to dance a tango. A rather raunchy tango at that too. A tango from Argentina.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Rarity was utterly blown away at his dancing. Her mind was swimming and her under-garments were a tad damp. "W-Well. That was... something. A definite good something I can tell you that." Rarity pulled him in for a passionate kiss to finish their little dance. "That should tell you how good it was."

Draco chuckled as he tossed his fedora onto a nearby statue. He smiled mischievously as he nodded to his friends again as they began to play another song. a Spanish tango from the Hippogriff kingdom tune. He smiled at the mare as he began to dance with her again.


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

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Twilight and Critical decided to join them once again. The two couples danced the night away, no interruptions in sight. They stopped dancing and they all sat down. All downed their beverage of choice. Twilight looked to them. "Hey, I managed to get us all a room in the castle, just in case we get too tired for the trip home." Rarity looked to her friend. "Thank you Twilight. That was kind of you."

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Twilight and Critical decided to join them once again. The two couples danced the night away, no interruptions in sight. They stopped dancing and they all sat down. All downed their beverage of choice. Twilight looked to them. "Hey, I managed to get us all a room in the castle, just in case we get too tired for the trip home." Rarity looked to her friend. "Thank you Twilight. That was kind of you."

Draco chuckled "My my I smell something sweet in the air," Draco said teasingly. "Heh I thought I was pretty bad in the dance department," Draco said jokingly. "Well I knw of a dance instructor in the Hippogriff kingdom Twilight," Draco said slightly trying not to hurt her feelings. He coughed slightly "No offence but you do kinda dance okay you can't dance. Maybe I can teach you,"


A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/draco-omally-r1651

http://www.fimfiction.net/chapter/561674 My story

http://pre01.deviantart.net/a52b/th/pre/i/2014/015/5/5/runes_1_0_by_dragon_fangx-d72cibe.pngNice Runes

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