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Hello everybody, this is actually my first FanFic, I'm writing. Also my first in english(I'm german). So, please not crying from my not perfect english :D Also, the beginning could be thinking, this has not much to do with MLP ... but it's the beginning afterall^^

 

Thanks for Chocolate Chess, who editing it, so it is better to read for you^^

 

Prolog:

"Hello... My name's Jack. I'm not sure if anyone will ever hear this message, but here goes... I'm being hunted by something, but I don't know what.  I thought I had a normal life, just an average 20 year old man, with a job and a few friends. But now? Now I can't even tell the difference between dream and reality. It looks like I'm important, but I don't know why. Wait. I think I heard something ... I have to go."

 

 

Chapter 1: Just another normal day

 

And the next day begins. Like every day, I wake up, take a shower, go to work, come back home, relax and go to sleep. I live with my best friend Michael in an apartment currently. I could buy a house for myself, but... he's just so awesome! It's always fun with him... okay, he may not be crazy like Pinkie Pie, but he's still funny. Oh yeah, Pinkie Pie... Michael doesn't have any clue that I like My Little Pony. And after one incident, I think it would be better if I leave it like that. He found out one time that a good friend of his liked MLP... he really hates the show and everybody who likes it. If I didn't stop him... his not-anymore-friend would be dead. And when he goes that crazy when he finds out that his good friend watches the show... what would happen when he finds out that his BEST friend watches MLP too? Yeah... wait a minute... why am I talking to myself? It almost sounds like I'm talking to someone. Maybe this is just a FanFic, and all what I'm saying is just text in a story. Hey, you... yeah, I mean you in front of your computer, laptop, mobile... whatever, thanks for reading, if you survive it, haha. Okay, too weird... I better get moving, before I'm late to work...

I arrived at work on time. Like always. I go to the 23rd floor, open the door to my office and start my computer. Like always. It's not really hard work, but you get so much money... AWESOME! Well, I'm working from 8 AM to 16 PM... so enough time for fun after work. After 8 hours, full of boredom, I go back to my home. My friend is already here. We go out to a bar nearby. Drinking some beer. After that, we walk to the park. It's a beautiful place here. After the park, we go back to home and play some games together. There's one thing that Michael's a lot better than I am... Video Games. But today, I decided to go out again. Just a short walk. I needed some fresh air. So I went out and started walking... until something strange happening.

I saw Twilight Sparkle... right in front of my eyes. She was just walking there. But then, she tripped and fell down on her face. She stood up, and I saw that her lip was bleeding. Also she lost 2 teeth. I can't believe what I'm seeing and start rub my eyes. When I look again... she's gone. And no one seems to have noticed that she was there in the first place... Weird... I mean, I've been dreaming about Equestria since I was born... but only, when I was asleep, never in daydreams...

I made my way back home, still confused about what was happening. Did my mind start to connect dream with reality? It looked pretty real. I take my key, open the door and make my way straight to my bedroom, when my friend stops me.

"Hey. Are you alright? You look confused."

"Me? No, no, no, I'm fine, just... tired."

I smile at Michael and go to my bedroom. I close the door and let me fall on my bed. It was already 11 PM. It doesn't take long for me to fall asleep, and head to my dream world... Equestria...... just like it always happens.

 

 

Chapter 2: Just a normal dream ...

 

I woke up, laying in my bed. I rub my eyes with my hooves and then stand up. I'm a lucid dreamer... every single time! So everything I do in my dreams here ... I really do here by my own. Since I was born, I've always dreamed about Equestria. Some guys would say, I always dream about Equestria, because I'm too much in love with the show. But like I said... I've dreamed about this place since I was born... on the 14th of January 1994... over 15 years before the show was created! I knew the mane 6 when they are young. I saw, how they grew up. Even all the adventures from the TV Show, I saw, before the episodes even aired. So I always know what's happening in the next episode. I looked out of the window, and saw that Celestia's Sun was already shining. I go out from my own home. It's easy, to live as a pony, especially when you're a pony for every dream you have. It's like a second life you live... but as long as you know what's real, and what's a dream, there shouldn't be any problems. I feel the air, touching my fur. It feels so real. In my dream, I don't have the same job as in real... they don't even have computers. But I do have a job here, I'm a mailpony, Ponyville isn't that big, so it's not a hard job, and I'm done pretty quickly. For the rest of the day, I just walk around, talking with other ponies. I've already talked with the entire mane 6 today! When the sun goes down and Luna's moon appears, I go home, read one of the Daring Do books, and go to sleep... but there's still one thing that bothers me.... Why did I see Twilight in reality? Should I ask her? Well... I guess not, I'm still in a dream after all. Also it would sound a bit strange.. "Hey, Twilight, I want you to ask something. I dreamed about you today. Or, to be more precise, I'm dreaming right now and I saw you in reality. How'd you get into my reality?"

You know what I mean? That sounds really stupid. I go to my bed and fall asleep... going back to my normal, boring life...

 

 

Chapter 3: It slowly started to get complicated

 

"JACK! JACK! WAKE UP! JACK! DAMN IT JACK, THE APARTMENT'S BURNING! JAAACK!"


"Michael, just few..."

 

My eyes snapped open wide as my mind registered what he said... did he really say ... the apartment burns?


"What the hay!"


Oh crap, it really is on fire! We ran to the door, and run out of the apartment. The whole building is burning!


"Michael, did you smoke in our apartment again?"


"No! I didn't!"


"Great! All my things burned down. Even my Fluttershy plushie!"


Oh no... did I just say Fluttershy plushie... outside... where over 100 people are already here... including the fire brigade... and... the worst part... my Brony and MLP-Hating best friend Michael ...


"What... you had a plushie?"


It's probably a good thing that he doesn't know what Fluttershy is from ...


I heard a voice coming for my right "... MLP?! You... you watch MLP?"


"Hey, what are you talking about?" Michael said replying to the other person, someone I knew from work "My best friend would never watch this girly crap ponies!"


"But Fluttershy is a ..."


I look to my workmate and shake my head, with a pleading look in my eyes. 'Please stop talking,' I thought as I looked at him 'pleeaase!!!'


"... pony from the show."


I'm screwed ... I'm SOO screwed... well.. maybe not. I don't think that Michael would do anything in front of all the people here!


"Wait a minute ..."


Of course I wait a minute, nothing important, just the building's burning and he's going to kill me, right at the moment, no one is here anymore ...


"...you? YOU?! You like this?"


"Y ... yes ..."


I expected a punch in my face... but nothing happened. I open my eyes and look in his eyes. I can see clearly, that we are no friends anymore.


"You little freak ..."


And with his last words, he goes away. I still standing, every one is watching at me. But, surprising, the workmate, who say that, that Fluttershy is from MLP, comes to me.


"You all right? Hey, I don't blame you. Everyone has his own likes and dislikes, right? Or ..."


He comes closer to me.


"... should I say, every... pony?"


"Wait, what?"


But he just wink to me, before he go away. Wow ... the coolest guy at my work ... is a brony?! Still confused, I rub my head. They killed the fire, but I know, I can't live here anymore ... not with my "friend" together ...

A few hours later, including working, I already found a new place to live. A whole house, just for me. And they allowed me to sleep here today... because, I had no other place to go. I bought an air mattress for sleeping on tonight. Tomorrow, I'll get some furniture and stuff... but now, I need sleep... and to go back to Equestria... and I really hope that nothing bad is happening there ...

 

 

chapter 4: new friend

I wake up on my bed ... now as a pony. And thank Celestia, it's NOT burning. I run out, just to look, if everything here is alright ... and it is. Good. I start walking, when I bumped into somepony.

"Oh, hey, sorry, I always thinking, when I walking. Are you okay?"

I rub my head. Then I watch to the pony. He has a cyan blue fur with a darker blue mane and tail.

"I'm fine, thanks for asking."

"You ... really not hurt?"

"Nope, I'm fine."

"Good. Oh, by the way, my name is Rising Shine. I continue walking now, see ya."

I don't have a really good friend here ... afterall, it's still a dream. My real life changed ... so why not my dream life?

"Hey ... Rising, right? Wait a minute, I walk with you, when it's okay."

"Uhm ... sure, why not?"

And so we start walking together.

"Are you ... uhm ... new here?"

"No. Live a few years here already."

"Really? Never saw you in my dre ... here."

That was close!

"I'm often in my house, you know? I write stories and books. I only walking or flying, when I need fresh air to think ... or have to buy food."

"Ah, okay."

"And you?"

"Me?"

Actually, nopony never ask about me in my dreams yet.

"I'm a ..."

"Bad memories? Then just tell you're name."

"Uhm ..."

Well ... I don't even have a name. What my parents calling me in my dreams, when I was younger? Hmmmm ...

"I ... uhm, Jack. Call me Jack."

"Jack? Sounds strange."

"Yeah ... tell that my parents, haha."

"When I met them, sure."

"That was a joke ..."

"Oh ..."

We still walking, but didn't really talk, until we come to his house.

"Well ... thanks. I talk already with ponies, but it's always nice to talk with new ponies. Thanks ... Jack. Mayby wee see us again."

"Yeah, I hope so. You know, I just lose my best friend ..."

"Huh? Really? I'm sorry for that ..."

"Wa- ... nonono, not in that way. He isn't dead. We ... had some trouble."

"Sorry. Hey, want some tea? You can come in."

"Oh yeah, thanks."

Together, we go in his house. He go to the kitchen and come back with a tablet with 2 cups of tea.

"Here, take. It's really good."

I take a sip ... and he was right!

"Wow! Have you do this by you're self?"

"YEP!"

"Taste really good. I ..."

And the a loud noise comes from the outside.

"Oh yeah, had forget this. Today is a storm. Stay here for this night, okay? Too dangerous outside right now."

"Thanks. It is really no problem for you?"

"Nah, it's okay. I go to my bed, think for a new story. I think, I even had some idea already. Sorry, have no bed for you, but if you want, you can sleep on my ..."

"nonono, it's okay. The bottom is really comfortable. But is it okay, if I use the chimney?"

"No, you can use it to warm you."

"Thank you."

"You are welcome, my friend."

And with a smile, he go away. After I start the chimney, I lay on the bottom. It was really comfortable here. And I have a new friend too. If my real life would be so perfect ...

 

 

chapter 5: New beginning

I wake up ... and realized something. When I wake up as a human, I lay on my back, arms and legs like a pony. When I wake up as a pony, I lay on the side. Everytime.

"Haha."

I stand up. And then I remember. My own house. My new beginning. And no hide anymore about MLP, that's for sure. I feel really fresh: No secrets, no problems. I feel better then ever in my entire life. For a moment, I was going so far, to jump out from my house, run to the street, start dancing and sing Pinkie's Smile-Song. But I think, that is too much ... at the moment. So i just go ... wow. I was in front of my door when I realized, that I had only my underwear on. I take my clothes. After a minute, I'm ready. I'm still missing my plushie, but, afterall, I had enough money to buy a new one. So it's time for shopping ...

... on the internet I buy with my new laptop. Bed, TV and so on, just with one click. After that is done, I go to work ... afterall we had only wednesday yet.

On my work, I met my workmate from yesterday again.

"Hey, how you doing, Jack?"

"Fine. Have a new place to live now."

"Yeah, after this, it was clear, that you go away from him. And sorry, that I tell that. Didn't recognized you're head shaking."

"I Didn't know, that you like MLP."

"Haha, no one does. For them, I'm the awesome guy, who work here."

"So, you hide it?"

"No. I'm open with it. But no one talk about that, so I never mentioned it."

"Ah, okay. Hey, what is your name?"

"Didn't say that? It's Alex."

"Okay, then, I had to work. Mayby we can see us on weekend?"

"Yeah, sure. Well, see ya."

And then he goes.

The rest of the day was normal. After work, I went back to my new home. I open my laptop and see, that all the things I buy, come on friday. After that, I go to my air mattress, lay down and fall asleep ...

 

 

chapter 6: Accident

I wake up. I sleept very well here. Sun is shining, storm is over. And then Rising comes to me.

"Hey, Jack. Everything good?"

"Yeah, thanks."

"I ... uhm ... do you want some Cola?"

Wait! Cola? Since when, Equestria has Cola? Better act like unknown.

"What is ... cola?"

"Cherry often lovely awesome. My own created tea. Taste really good, better then I expected."

Didn't expect THAT!

"Sure!"

"I'm so fast as I can."

He smiled to me, before he leave the room. I sit on the bottom and wait. From all I can remember in my dreams here, he was one of the friendliest ponies I met. But I make worry about him ...

... because it's already 45 minutes ago, since he left the room. I stand up and go to the kitchen. When I see Rising ...

"Shout! RISING, YOU ALLRIGHT?!"

Rising is unconscious. A knife lays next to him. He bleeding on one of his hooves. I look to the table. There laying cherrys on it, some cut by the knife. He has hit himself accidentally. The wound is deep.

"Oh no! What should I do! I NEED HELP!"

The hospital! Of course, stupid me.

"If you can hear me, don't worry, I bring you to the hospital."

If managed to take him on my back and start running. The talking, playing and walking ponies outside recognized me with Rising on my back. Somepony ask me from behind.

"What is happening with him?!"

"Accidentally hurt his hoof with an knife!"

"He is too havy for you, I take him."

I feel, when Rising is no longer on my back. I turned around and see Rising in the air with an aura. When I look, who use magic, I see, that it is Twilight.

"Twilight?"

"It's me, yes. But no time to talk, come!"

Together we run to the hospital. One of the nurse's screamed, when we went in. We don't even have to say, what is going on, because they take him without asking anything. Then they bring him away.

"I hope, he will be okay."

"Don't worry. They know, what they doing. But what is happened?"

"I think, he was cutting cherrys for a tea, when he accidentally hit his hoof. You saw youreself, how deep it was."

"Really deep. Good that you found him fast enough ... wait, you come from his house, what are you doing in there?"

"We met us yesterday. We go to his home, he makes some tea for me. It was stormy outside, so he allowed me, to stay for the night."

"I see. Hey, don't worry, everything is going to be fine. If you want, I stay with you, until we know more about his status, okay?"

"Okay."

Second to second ... minute to minute ... hour to hour ... With every second counting, my heart beat faster and faster. I'm worried about Rising. About 17 PM, finally, a nurse comes.

"How is Rising doing?!"

"You come fast enough, he is okay. He is now sleeping but he should be wake up in few minutes. You can come, if you want."

We go with the nurse to the room, where Rising is still sleeping. He got a bandage on his left hoof.

"You don't have to worry, he will be fine soon. But he must stay a few days here."

Then Rising open his eyes slowly.

"W ... what happening? Where am I?"

"You are in the hospital. Princess Twilight ..."

"Only Twilight is okay, really."

"... and your friend here bring you here fast enough. You had a really deep cut on your hoof. What is happening?"

"Now I remember. Cut cherrys for tea ... hit my hoof with my knife. I start bleeding fast, I get knock out, before I could scream because of the pain ..."

"Are you feeling fine?"

"Yeah. And thank you, Twilight and Jack."

"No problem, Rising."

I say that as the same moment as Twilight do.

"Okay, he need some rest now, you can come tomorrow again, if you want."

"Bye, Rising."

I leave with the other ponies the room. We say "bye" to the nurse and leave the hospital.

"Thanks, Twilight. I don't know, if he would still live, if you not helping me."

"No problem ... Jack, right?"

"Yeah."

"I had to search something, you can always met me in the library. See you next time."

And so she fly away. I got still time, so I decided to go to Rising's home and clean it for him. It take several hours, before I'm finished cleaning the house. During that time, I realized, that he has many books here. I know some of them, all written by the anonym " RS" ... wait ... R-ising ... S - hine ... he write own stories? Wow! But I better go to my home now. I close the house door and go back to my house, my bed. I climb into my bed and fall directly asleep ...

 

 

chapter 7: Bad day

I wake up. It was really long ago, that I dreamed badly. Last time was on my 10th birthday. I know, it isn't real, but it really hit me. I don't remember my real name there, but I remember every dream since I was born. But - even when it's not real - I'm happy, that Rising is okay. Today is already Thursday, my things come tomorrow. I start to put my clothes on, when I get a call from my mobile.

"Here is Jack, how can I help?"

"Hello, Jack. We are glad to say, that you can back to your apartment. Or if you find a new place to live, you can take your things that dosn't burned."

"I need just one thing ... I had a plushie from a pony from the TV-Show "My Little Pony" ... is it still exist?"

"I don't know the show, but here is a ... yellow horse with ... pink mane and tail and ... butterflys? If you mean this plushie, yes, it's okay."

"GREAT! I come now."

I take my mobile back, take my clothes on and run to the bus stop. One of them drive near my old apartment. After I wait for the bus and travel to my old apartment. I just hope, that Michael is not here.

"Sir, that isn't ..."

"Do you really think, that inte ... oh, here he is. Having fun with your ponies?"

He had my Fluttershy plushie!

"That's mine, give it back!"

"No - way!"

"Michael!"

I had the whole way to the apartment a bad feeling. And now, I think, my bad feeling getting true.

"Oh, is the little pony crying?"

"I swear, if you ..."

"If I doing what? Rape it? Destroy it? Burn it? Come on, say ..."

"Michael ..."

"Sir, give him his plushie."

"Michael! What is your problem? Why do you hate MLP so much?"

"You are all freaks! I mean ... liking a show with colorful ponies, created for little girls? Really?"

"You don't know ... if you just watch some episodes, you may understand this."

"NEVER! I will never watch this shit!"

"Michael!"

"Say your pony to clop, good bye!"

"MICHAEL!"

And then, Michael tears the head from the plushie. I start to cry.

"Ohhhh ... poor Jack. I killed your non-exist girlfriend. Cry you little baby!"

I was never so angry until now. I really feel hate for him.

"Michael ... you make the biggest mistake in your entire life."

I start to go slowly to Michael.

"Oh, you think, I fear you?"

But I just beat him in his face.

"Okay you piece of shit, you going to far now!"

And then, he beat me.

"Never fight against Michael, idiot!"

But I was so in anger, it not even hurt really. I beat back but I don't stop. I beat on him for minutes. He bleeding already, but I don't stop. But then I realized something. What am I just doing, beat him makes me more like him. Also the ponies wouldn't be proud about me. I stopped.

"I'm ... I'm ... sorry."

I stand up and make my way out of the apartment ... but then, Michael catch me and try to strangle me. I think, the fire brigade are to confused about the situation, because they not even try to help me. I start to go back, faster and faster, until I smashed against a wall. The wall breaks by smashing it ... wait, breaks? I feel free, he let go of. But then, I fall. I just realized, that it was the broken window, I smashed. I managed to hold, before I completly fall down. We lived here on the 12th floor, a fall from this high, no onewill survive ... wait Michael! He is falling ... and ... oh no ... he is dead ...
I climb back to the apartment, shocked, what just happened.

"Are you all right?"

I can't answer. That, what just happened was to much for me. When I didn't start to beat him ...
I feel bad ... really bad. And dizzy. I try to walk, but I fall down to the ground ...

When I wake up, I realized, that I'm laying in a bed.

"So, you wake up finally."

"What ... where am I?"

"In the hospital. We already know, what happening."

"Michael ... is he ..."

"If you mean the man, that smashed on the street, then yes. I'm afraid so."

"It's all my fault ..."

"You two had trouble, but you stopped. He then, tried to kill you. You just doing the only thing, you could do in this moment. No one will blame you."

I didn't answer. I need time to think.

"You stay here this night. You should sleep now."

Yeah. Dreaming. To a better place ... I'm coming, Ponyville ...

 

 

chapter 8: Stalking shadows

I wake up in the morning. And I still thinking about Michael. Yes, he was not my friend anymore ... but still. We know us from the very first schoolday. And now, he is gone ... forever. I had to clean my mind, so I stand up, go out, straight to the hospital. When I come in, the nurse from yesterday recognized me.

"Oh you. You are here for Rising, right?"

"Yes."

"You can go, he is already awake."

"Thanks."

I go to the room, where Rising is.

"Hey Rising, you allright?"

"Yeah, doesn't hurt anymore."

"Good to hear, at least, one, who is fine."

"Huh?"

"Uhm, nothing."

"You okay?"

"Yeah ... just a terrible nightmare."

Funny to say in a dream, that you had a terrible dream, that is in reality real. Wow, that confused even me now.

"Don't worry, Jack. It's just a nightmare, everypony has sometimes nightmares."

If you just know, that this here is just a dream ...

"Yeah, you are right ... I ..."

Suddenly, Twilight comes in.

"Hey guys. You looking better, Rising, good to see."

"Yep, definitly better."

"And you? How you doing?"

"You can call me Jack, Twilight. I'm fine, just had a terrible nightmare."

"So long, you not lucid dreaming this, everything is allright."

Wait, what?

"What do you mean with that, Twilight?"

She look surprised.

"Do you ever hear of lucid dreaming?"

"Yep."

"Good. Lucid dreaming is a dangerous kind of magic here in Equestria."

"Really?"

"Yes. We ponies - or other species - are not really lucid dreaming and when, it's not a bad dream. But it can be dangerous, if you lucid dreaming badly."

"What do you mean?"

"Everything you lucid dreaming, actually happen really."

"What? Wait a second ... as an example ... if I lucid dreaming ... and I dream about, that Princess Celestia dies ... does she really ..."

"Yes."

"Wow, that is really dangerous."

"Yes. So be careful, Jack."

"Don't worry, I don't think, my dreams would be dangerous for you or everypony else."

"Well, sorry, but I had to go. Afterall, I'm a princess, mayby we see us later?"

"Sure, why not?"

"Okay, have fun."

And then, Twilight leaves the room.

"Rising, did you know that?"

"About lucid dreaming? Sure ... that could be a interesting stuff for a story, hmmmm ..."

"Good, that I'm not dreaming about ponies or Equestria."

"Really? Hey ... I think, I got an idea for a story. Is it okay, when you are the main character?"

"What ... me? Why?"

"Don't know."

"Uhm ... sure."

"Thanks. And what are you doing today?"

"Nothing special. I don't work on Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday. Mayby walking."

"Okay. I have to stay this day here but I can leave tomorrow."

"Good to hear, you will be surprised, when you come home ... oh, one thing. You mention it already, but I didn't know, that you write stories."

"Really? Now you know, haha."

"Okay, I go now. See ya tomorrow."

"Bye."

I leave the hospital and start walking. But I start, getting the feeling, that somepony follows me. I turn around ... and see a shadow, running behind one of the houses.

"What the hay?"

I run. When I am here, where I saw the shadow, nopony is here.

"There was definitly somepony here."

"Soon. Soon, you will fulfill your destiny, Sweetfull Dream."

"What? Who's talking?"

But nopony was nearby.

"What's going on? I never hear this voice before."

I get nervous. That wasn't normal. I shake my head.

"What can I do now?"

Reading books. Yes. The ones from Rising. I make my way to his home and open the door. I closed it behind me and take one of his book. That one was full with action. I read it, the whole day. That book has over 3.000 sites. At some time, I fall asleep on the book ...

"Soon, Sweetfull Dream!"

 

 

chapter 9: Unexpected visitor

"Soon ..."


"You okay?"

I open my eyes. It was Alex.

"I'm fine ..."

"We wondering, where you was yesterday. I go, one hour ago, to your new home. There was a car with boxes for you. They ask, if I know, where you are, but I didn't. They drive away, let a letter back in your mail. Just in case, I drive to your old apartment and saw and hear what was happening. I drive to the hospital and ... yep, here I am. But good to hear, that you are fine. Wasn't easy for you, hmm?"

"Yeah ... it really wasn't easy for me. If I didn't start to beat him ... I just could buy a new plushie ..."

"To be honest, I had react the same way."

"Really?"

"Yep."

We didn't say anything for few minutes.

"Anyway ... I just came with the idea to talk about MLP. Who's your favourite pony, my favourite is Pinkie, she is so funny and adorable."

"Uhmm ... my favourite ... my favourite is ... is ..."

But before I could answer, some one goes into the room. But it was no doctor or nurse.

"Long time ago, huh?"

"Can it be? Ryan?"

I can't believe that ... Ryan ... my little brother ...

"I hear it in the news. Are you okay?"

"THAT question I should ask. Didn't you get ... kidnapped, when you was nine years old? We thought, you are dead ..."

"Yeah ... I thought that too. I managed to escape. But I was to far away from our home. And I didn't know the way back. Some family found me few days later. A nice family. They take me and care for me the whole time. I go to a school nearby. When I was old enough and found a job, I make my own way, my own decisions. And only three weeks later I saw what happening. They rold about someone who survived but get knock out. His name ... Jack Anderson."

"Good to hear, that you are allright, Ryan. After all what happening, that is a really good thing."

"Yeah. I go to your apartment ... found this. I don't no, why, but I think, that was yours. I repair it for you ... IF it is yours."

And then, he give me my Fluttershy plushie ... without any damage.

"T-thanks ..."

"So you really like this show, hmm?"

"Yeah ... are you now going to laugh about me?"

"No ... we are no kids anymore, you like, what you like, I like what I like. And ... I like specific stuff ..."

"Specific stuff? What do you mean?"

"I think ... based on your fans ... I should be called a clopper."

"Okay, you don't have to say more. I'm just happy, that you are alive. Our parents should know, that you are okay. Alex, have you paper and a pen?"

"Nope."

"Just say it, I don't forget."

I say him the adress.

"Got it. So ... why do you like the show? I hear a lot about it."

And so, a long conversation about MLP started. Characters, episodes, fans, FanFics, animation and so on. 5 hours long.

"Wow, that's a lot. Mayby I start watching it later. I have to go now, visiting some very important peope. I hope we see us again, Jack. And Alex, he can be proud to have a friend like you."

He smile to us and leave the room.

"So that was your little brother? Nice guy."

"Yep. Have no work today?"

"I say, that I'm ill."

"Ah, okay."

"Mr. Anderson? You can leave, if you want, everything is okay."

A nurse comes in the room.

"Really? Alex? Can you help me, because ..."

"I know, yeah, of course I help you!"

Together we leave the hospital. We go to the post office. They take the boxes in a transporter and drive it to my new home. All together, we bring the boxes in and Alex help me to build everything. We finish late in the evening.

"Thank you for all."

"Hey, I'm your friend, right?"

"Right!"

"It's really late, I better get home."

"Okay. See ya!"

He leaves the house. Finally a comfortable bed. And my brother is alive. After the shit from the last days here in reality,this was a wonderful day. And this bed is so ... comf ... ortable ... zzzz ...

 

 

chapter 10: Strange day

"Did you sleep well, Jack?"

"Huh?"

I wake up and see Rising Shine.

"I'm sorry, I just read that book and ..."

"It's no problem. Yep, that is one of my best books. Hope you like it."

"I'm not finished, I fall asleep."

"Did you ... clean my house?"

"Yes, as a surprise."

"You ... uhm ... didn't look under my bed ... or?"

"Nope ... I forgot it, I can ..."

"NONONONONONONONONONO! I mean, it's okay, I can do that."

I get the feeling, he hide something under his bed ... something ... special.

"Hehe, I think I know what you hiding ... but it's no problem for me."

Is Rising getting ... blushed?

"T-thanks."

"Everypony that, what he like, right?"

"Right. But ... that is normal, to like mares, or?"

Oh yeah, we are ponies, stupid me.

"Yeah ... I just mean, having pictures from mares ... can we please change the topic?"

"You just started with ... nevermind. What are you doing today?"

"Have to work, it's friday today. And I think, after that, I going to the library ... that whole lucid dreaming get me, you know?"

"Yeah, sound really like good stuff for a story. But I can't come with you, still work to do."

"No problem, Rising."

I leave Rising's house. I went to work. Nothing special happening during the time I worked. After work, I make my way to the library. I knock on the door. The door open with magic.

"Come in!"

I go inside. There are really many books.

    "Oh, it's you, Jack. Welcome to the library."

"Hey, Twilight."

I smile to her. She smiles back.

"Looking for a book?"

"I ... getting interested about lucid dreaming, after you talk about that."

"Really? Well, normaly, everything you should know, I told already."

"So it is really dangerous, huh?"

"Yes ... wait. Why do you ... you are not trying to lucid dreaming?"

"No, in a strange way, I already lucid dreaming since I was born ..."

BUCK!

"You do WHAT?!"

I'm screwed ...

"I'm ..."

"Sorry, but this is too dangerous. Have you ever dreaming about one of us? About Equestria?"

"Not really ..."

"Huh?"

"In a strange way ... this here, everything what happen right now, is just a lucid dreaming."

"Uhm ... no."

"Yes."

"No. I'm definitly sure, I'm exist ... what do you exactly dreaming?"

"I already told, this here is ..."

"Fine. Then tell me, what do you do in "reality"?"

"I'm ... living in a world, calling earth. Our species is called human. We not really have magic in our world. Our world is not so beautiful and friendly like here. And ... you ... everything here exist too ... in a TV-Show called "My Little Pony Friendship is Magic". You are not really there."

"Sounds strange. No wonder, when you say, you dream about that, since you was born, that you don't know, what world is real. But I'm sure, that the pony in front of me is real. You are real here ... no dream."

"I'm not sure about that ..."

"When you are next time in your world ... you mean, you lucid dreaming, right? When this is a dream ... try next time something, that normally is impossible."

"Are you not want to know, what humans are?"

"I already do ... there was an accident, few days, after I getting a princess."

The accident in My Little Pony Equestria Girls, I see.

"I think, I heard about that. Okay, I try something unlikely, when I "dreaming" next time."

"Good."

"Good. Get more friends. Get her as your friend, Sweetfull Dream!"

"Oh ... my head."

"Are you all right, Jack?"

"Yeah ... yeah, I'm fine."

Again that voice!

"I NEED YOU! SOON!"

"Oh ..."

"Better stay here, Jack. I make something to drink."

This isn't normal. Started yesterday and getting stronger. And now the whole "What is real and what not" Situation. I really getting confused now. Twilight come back with a cup of tea.

"Here. You really looking bad, are you sure, you are allright?"

"I'm not sure ..."

"Mayby ... the whole thing. I mean, all the time, you thought, this other world is real. And now I smash to you, that this here is real. That can really be confusing."

"Yeah, definitly."

"Better stay here this night. I better keep an eye on you for this night. And now drink, it will help."

I take a sip from the tea.

"Thanks Twilight. You are really nice to me ... like Rising ... even if you not know me that much."

I look to Twilight ... is she ... blushing?

"It is really no problem ... Jack."

The I realized something. That strange voice ... call me always Sweetfull Dream. Is this my real name?

"Uhm ... I think, I remember my real name. You know, I used Jack ... because the person in my ... dreams ... called Jack. I think my real name is Sweetfull Dream."

"Sweetfull Dream? Okay then. Behind that door is a chimney. Mayby you need a warm place to sleep. It's going to be late outside."

"Twilight? Can you ... stay with me there? I'm feeling better, when somepony is next to me ... o-only when it's okay for you."

"Sure, if you feel better then."

"Thanks."

I really start to like her ... more then usual. Can ... can it be?

"You can go in and start the fire, I have to do, I come in about ten minutes, okay?"

"Okay."

I go to the chimney and start the fire. After that I wait for Twilight. About 20 minutes(Didn't she say 10?)she comes in.

"You look better the before. Sorry took a bit longer then I expected. Feeling better?"

"Yeah ... thanks."

She sit down next to me.

"It's really warm here."

"Yeah ... it is."

"Don't worry, Sweet ... it is okay, when I call you that?"

"Yeah, it's fine."

"Good. I hope you will understand it better ... must be really confusing."

"Yep. But with you, I feel safe. Thanks."

"Uhm ... it's okay. You better should sleep now, I stay with you, Sweet."

I lay down on the bottom and closed my eyes.

"Good ..."

I open my eyes again, but there is still only Twilight here. I close my eyes again, trying to sleep. Suddenly, I feel something on my back. I think, Twilight put one of her wings on me ... I feel better now. Good enough to fall asleep ... I think, I blushed, before I fall asleep.

 

 

chapter 11: Reality and dream

I wake up in my new bed. This here is a lucid dream? I don't know, what going to happen, mayby I should leave a spoken message here ... okay, there is the recorder.

"Hello ... my name is Jack. And you mayby never hear this message. I get hunted by ... something. Or at least, I think. Hearing a voice sometimes. I thought, I had a normal life. A 20 year old men, who had a job and a normal life. And now? Now ... I don't even know anymore, what is real and what is a dream. Is this world a dream? It looks like, I'm important, because this voice needs me, I think ... but I don't know, why. What? What was that sound?! I have to go ..."

I hear someone knocking on the door. I end the message and go to the door. When I open the door, I see Alex.

"Hey, Jack, how you doing?"

"Who say, that you are real?"

I slowly get nervous. What is, when Twilight is right? When this here is just a lucid dream?

"What do you mean with real?"

"I'm ... it's complicated, okay?"

"Are you all right?"

What did Twilight say? Everything you lucid dreaming goes real? So, what if I lucid dreaming about this world? Then ... I created a whole world with an own history?!

"NO! DEFINITLY NO!"

"Hey, calm down, what happening?"

Try to do something, that isn't normal. Flying! I run away from Alex.

"Jack?! WAIT!"

If this is really a dream, I should do anything I want, right? So, why not flying?! I jump ... and ... it ... WORKS!

"Jack? What the hell are you?!"

So ... this is really just a dream?

"Good. You stupid pony find it finally out."

Again that voice.

"Jack ... WHAT ARE YOU!?"

"I need you soon, Sweetfull Dream. To finish my plan. You are something special. That's why I choice you. Do you know anything about your family history, Sweetfull Dream? I'm sure your special somepony knows already about you, that stupid princess. Have fun with your last dream about your own created world. WAKE UP! Time for your OC here to die. Kill your self, now!"

"What?! No!"

"DO IT!"

Again my head hurts ... more then ever before.

"And then come to me ... I show you the way."

"NEVER!"

"I am strong enough, to come to the library, killing her and take you with me ... and everypony, who try to stop me dies too."

"NO!"

"So you not want, that somepony get hurt, right? Then, fullfill your destiny ... and come on your own will to me. But no, die!"

I wasn't sure ... my head hurts ... but I can't let it happening, that he kill Twilight ... I never could live with that.

"....... fine!"

If this is the only way ... then I die. I fly really high ... and let me fall. I hope, at the end, that this here is really only my second me ... and that Sweetfull Dream, me as a pony, is my real me ... I think, no one or noony could ever say, they died twice ... for me, now, hopefully, this is my first time ... I'm falling ... more and more ... I crying ... Alex and other people screaming ... I see the street ... closer and closer ... did Michael feeling the same, when he was falling? Will it hurt? Will it ............................................................

"Good. And know come to me, Sweetfull Dream!"

...

 

 

chapter 12: It got to be my destiny?

I open my eyes fast. It's still night here in Ponyville. I looking around. Twilight is falling asleep, her wing still on me. How cute. I really start to love her. But I have to go ... for her. Complete my destiny. It hurt really, to go away ... but it has to be. I try to go, moving slowly, because of her wing. But she wake up.

"You are not going away, Sweet."

She use her magic to stop me.

"I know everything about you ... and your family history, Sweet."

What?

"What do you me ..."

"I read about your family in a book ... about lucid dreaming."

"Re - really?"

"Yes. The world you are "living" when you are dreaming. It is not created by you. It is created by one of your family members. They all had that talent, to lucid dreaming. The first generation in your family history ... find out, that this is really dangerous, because every lucid dreaming goes real. So they start to control it ... and so they managed to create a total different world. Generation to generation, they controlling it better and better. Their names from your family history ... every name is here ... and the last name, the newest member of the family ... is you, Sweetfull Dream. That's why you dreaming a second life in your lucid dreamings. And you didn't know, what life is your life. You lucid dreaming ... so, in a strange way, BOTH worlds are real. Our world ... and your lucid dreaming world, because, everything you lucid dreaming ..."

"... really happen."

"Exactly. Sweet? It is really important ... do you really never dreaming about us?"

I know, I have to leave her ... but I can't lie to her. I love her to much for that.

"I ... yes, but only one time. Few days ago, I think, it was monday or tuesday. You suddenly walking in front of me ... and you fall on your face ... you bleeded on you lips and you lost some teeths. Short after that, you was gone."

"And that really happening ... so that happening to me, because you lucid dreaming it. Have you something else to tell?"

"Hurry up!"

"Ohhh ... no, nothing ..."

I can't tell her about THAT!

"I don't believe you, Sweet ..."

"Twilight, I have to go ... it's really important."

"No. You stay here now."

"I'm sorry, Twilight Adorable Sparkle ..."

Without a warning, I kissed her on her lips for 10 seconds.

"I have to go ... that is the only thing, I can tell you ... Good bye, my special somepony ..."

And with tears in my eyes, I run out of the library, knowing, that this will never work out ...

"Go to the Everfree Forest ... when you are there ... follow the light."

"I do ..."

I make my way to the entrance of the Everfree Forest. And there is really a moving light. So that's how it ends? Follow a light to somepony, you never met before? So long, nopony will hurt, it's okay. I follow the light. It is really dark here. I only now, where I'm going, because of the light. Deeper and deeper. I think, we need an hour, when I see finally a ... castle?

"Welcome to your new home, Sweetfull Dream."

"Stop talking to me ..."

I go into the castle. It was still dark, even inside. Only the light show me, where I have to go. After a while, I come to a smaller room.

"Finally you ... uhm, I mean, finally you are here."

"So what do you want from me?"

The pony, the one, who always talk to me the last few days, turn around. A black pony, black fur, black mane, black tail. The eye color was the only thing on ... her? Well, only thing on her, that was blue.

"I need you ... to overtake Equestria."

"What? No!"

"If you don't do, I have to kill everypony, that could be dangerous ... including a specific purple princess ..."

"Grrrrr ..."

"But if you do, what I want ... then nopony get hurt."

"... fine. What do I have to do?"

"I'm not powerful enough, to control the sun and the moon. Killing Celestia and Luna wouldn't help me. So I need them alive ... but I need something, to keep them captured ... and giving their magic to me. That is the point, YOU came in. Youe lucid dreaming. You can dream about a machine, that captured them and give me their magic. They are alive, but can't fight then. Okay? Can you lucid dreaming about that?"

"I ... I don't know. I only dreamed about that world."

"You can do it."

"Fine ... I give it a try."

"Good ... sleep well, Sweetfull Dream."

I feeling pain in my head ... so strong, I ...............

 

 

chapter 13: Find a way out

I wake up ... and for the very first time ... I'm not a human ... I'm still a pony. Also, there is no world ... just darkness. Not even a flower. I looking around, but still nothing. Is this happening, when my human self died? I try to think about a little flower. I close my eyes and open them ... and there is really a flower. Wait ... if that is working, can I ...?

"Don't even try to think about, killing me! I can still give you enough pain, to stop you ... better do that, what I'm allowing to do!"

DARN IT!

"Fine ... hmmm ..."

Looks like, there is no other way ... well ... at least, they living, right?

"Okay, here we go!"

I close my eyes ... thinking about capsule ... two of them ... with a generator, that ... allowing her to use the magic from the ponies inside. I open my eyes ... and again, it works.

"Good. But I still missing ... ponies."

I have no other choice. I would just kill her, but she will stop me everytime I trying. I feel really bad, when I close my eyes again ... and think about ... princess Celestia and princess Luna ... captured in the capsule. I not want to ope my eyes ... not want, to see them ...

"It really works! Good work, Sweet!"

Just ... stop going on my nerves.

"Now, you got, what you want. Can I go? Can I back to Ponyville?"

"Sure ... but ... if you tell anypony about this ... then I have to kill everypony who knows."

"Okay ... can you wake me up somehow?"

"Sure!"

Again that strong pain ...

I wake up. She is in front of me.

"Good morning, Sweet. And thanks for your help. Nopony have to suffer, so long you don't tell anything. I feel already the power ... looks like, it's time, to let the sun shine."

She use her horn. It start to glow. I go outside and see the sun rising. She really doing this by her own!

"You can go ... if I need you again, I contact you!"

Because of the sun, I can see better here now.

"Just follow the sun, and you are back in Ponyville."

"Thanks!"

I follow the sun. After a few minutes, I finally come back to Ponyville. I see ponies, walking around ... they all have no idea, what happened. And then, I see the most adorable pony I ever saw ... Twilight. And she see me too.

"There you are!"

"What?!"

"Why do you run away?! You scared me!"

I feel really bad ... because we are in the middle of Ponyville and everypony looking at us.

"Twilight, calm down."

"No! Why do you go away in the middle of the night? Saying, you have to go? Run away and crying? And ..."

She comes closer to me.

"... why do you ..."

Now she is in front of me.

"... saying, you love me and then leave me alone?"

And, without any warning, where everypony can see us, she kiss me ... and it is wonderfull. I love every single second. I start too blush, but ... nevermind, I love this moment and I love her. I wish, this moment never ends. I think, it take 2 minutes, before she stop kissing me. I open my eyes, my muzzle still open. Everypony is looking to us. And ... she blushed too, how cute.

"I ... I think, we should continue in the library. Spike helping Rarity, don't worry, Sweet."

She go straight to the library ... is she ... shaking her flank? I'm a bit confused.

"Hey, come on, go with her."

"What?"

I look up to the sky and see a cyan blue pony with ... Rainbow Dash.

"Come on, not everypony get this chance!"

"Uhm ... uh ... sure ... uhm ... right on my way ... uhm ..."

I start walking ... to the library. My heart beat faster and faster ... are we really going to ... have "fun"?! Finally I'm in the library. Twilight close the door with her magic. She comes closer too me. And then she ...

"Come on, Sweet, lay down ... and then, you tell me WHAT IS BUCKING WRONG WITH YOU?!"

"Huh?"

"You are not just going to the Everfree Forest and comes back, without any reason. Tell me, why do you ..."

I can't tell her ... I need to change the topic.

"So you don't love me really, huh?"

"What?"

I feel bad ... no, really.

"You ... not love me, right?"

"I'm ..."

"I knew it ..."

"No ... wait ... I ... I ... I love you. Really. I just want to know, why you go to the Everfree Forest. Don't worry, I made a protect shield. Nopony from the outside can hear you, not even with any magic."

You can still here me, right? Hello?

"Wait ... even without magic?"

"Uhm ... yes."

"You are really the best pony here, Twilight."

She blushed.

"T-thanks ..."

"No, really. Finally, I can tell you, what is going on."

"Huh?"

"I ..."

But somepony enters the library ... Rising Shine.

"Hello you two ... uhm ... I don't interrupting you, or?"

"No ... you can hear to, close the door."

"Okay."

"Okay. You ... or at least, Twilight, knows, that I'm lucid dreaming. Since I was born. The whole thing can Twilight tell you, Rising. In the last few days ... I always hearing a voice, talking to me. He calling me Sweetfull Dream ... that's why I know my real name. He need me for a plan ... overtake Equestria. If I tell you aboutt that, she would kill you. Remember Twilight? I tell you, that I can't tell you, why I have to go. But now I can. He used my lucid dreaming. I ... I ... I have to lucid dreaming for her ... creating with my lucid dreaming a machine ... that captures Celestia and Luna ... and give their magic to her. Celestia didn't rise the sun today ... that was her."

"What?!"

"I'm sorry ..."

"You didn't have a choice, Sweet."

"Twilight is right. We don't blame you for this."

They still like me? Even after that, what I done?

"I ..."

"We helping you, okay? You met her, right?"

"Yeah ... black pony ... black mane and tail ... but the eyes are blue."

"No ... no that can't be ... I know here."

"What? You know her, Rising?"

"Yeah ... I know her from school ... her name is Black Star."

"Come on ... tell."

"All right ..."

And we start, listen to Rising ...

 

 

chapter 14: Past, present, future

"All right ... I know her. I met her in school, in the first years. She was really shy, and didn't have her cutie mark ..."

"Wait, but she still doesn't ..."

"She has one ... about that soon. We just met, bumped into each other. I'm a bit shy too, so we just looking to each other for few seconds. Then I say "Sorry". She look to me. And she was smiling. Then she open her heart to me. She told me everything about her life. Her parents hate her. Generation to generation, every new filly, was a pegasi ... except her. She was the first non-pegasi in her whole family history ... a unicorn. She hated her life ... she was really thinking to make a end to her sad life ... she was 8 during that time!"

"Sounds horrible!"

"It was ... She didn't have any friends. But I take her as a friend ... showing her the good side of life. And she like it. No, no "My special somepony" thing, no love. Just very good friends. But suddenly, her parents find out, about me ... and ... she should live in shame ... in shame, that she is no pegasi. They ... went to Manehattan, far away from me. It really brokes me ... she is no bad pony ... her life just made her, like she is now. I never saw her again. Jack ..."

"Sweet ..."

"Sweet ... don't hurt her ... she isn't bad ... if you have to fight her ... I come with you. Mayby she remember me. Mayby we can help her together. Please, Sweet."

"I ..."

"I don't met her, I don't know, how bad she really is. But when it comes to a fight ... then I have too ..."

"Twilight, no ..."

"I don't killing anypony! I just ... turn her to stone ... or do something, so she can't be dangerous."

"Think about your life ... do you both don't lose somepony you really like?"

"No. My parents are alive ... the princesses are alive, even when they captured ... my friends are alive ... and ..."

She looking to me.

"... my special somepony stands right next to me ... so no ... didn't ..."

"Fine, fine ... and you, Sweet?"

"I ..."

And then I remember ... my 10th birthday ... I start, getting tears in my eyes ... the day, my parents died ...

"Sweet ... are you ... okay?"

"I ... lose my parents ... on my 10th birthday ... a accident happening ... they want to surprise me ... but the doesn't came back home ... t-then ... later ... some nurse from the hospital cames ... and told me, what happening ... I ..."

"Sweet ..."

And then I feel warm ... wonderful warm. Twilight hug me.

"You can cry, Sweet ... it's okay. But you know, hoe it feels, right? Loosing somepony? Okay, you lost your parents ... that is way worser then a good friend, who still lives."

I cry a lot ... few minutes long. Then I slowly stop.

"Rising is right ... T-twilight. We should try it. And when ... it still not working ..."

"It's okay, Sweet."

And she give me a short kiss.

"I get my friends, together we ..."

"No! I do this by my ..."

"We come with you, Sweet."

"Yes, I don't let you fight alone."

"No! You already done enough for me! It's too dangerous ... I don't want too lose you all."

"Sweet ... we doing this for our own. It's our own decision. When we die ... then it is, because we want to help you ..."

"Rising ..."

"He is right ... if we fail ... we fail together."

"Twilight ..."

"We should go soon ... but we should wait until the night."

"Why?"

"Mayby we can surprise her."

"You say, she is talking to you?"

"Yeah ..."

"I use a spell against you ... so she can't get in your mind anymore."

I feel a short pain.

"Sorry, it hurt. But now, you are safe."

"Thanks, Twilight."

We wait until the night.

"Let's go ... do you know the way, Sweet?"

"Not exactly ... it's a castle."

"A castle? I think, I was there already, with Celestia, but there was nopony. Secret entrance?"

"Yep."

"Okay. I know the way. Time to make you a peaceful future, Sweet."

We moving out. We make our way to the Everfree Forest. Twilight use a spell, to make more light, so we can see better in the dark.

"Follow me and stay close."

Me and Rising follow Twilight. But suddenly, we hear a noise.

"What was that?"

"Pssssst ..."

Again the same noise.

"Oh no ... Timberwolves! Follow me, fast!"

We still follow Twilight ... or better running. They come closer and closer and then ...

... we see the castle. We run inside and closing the door.

"We ... we did it."

"That was close."

"Hello, there."

"Huh?"

There she was. Black Star.

"So you are Black Star."

"Yes, I am ... princess Twilight Sparkle."

"Hey, you still didn't tell, why she has no cutie mark."

"Forgot that, but this is not ..."

"R ... Rising?"

"Yeah ... it's me, Star, Rising Shine, your friend."

"Rising ... I have no friends ... you don't even try to bring me back. You say, you will come ... safe me ... bring me back to my beautiful life ... but you never come ..."

"I'm sorry, Star ..."

"Don't call me like that ... you are no friend ... all your friendship ... isn't real. No friendship goes forever ...  nopony like me ... because of all of you, I suffering ... my whole life ... and you all ... will do, what I'm saying!"

"Star ..."

"STOP CALLING ME STAR YOU USELESS PONY!"

"I ..."

I look to Rising ... I never saw him shocked. Until now. Is Rising going to ... cry?

"S-Star ..."

"Cry, little filly, I like that, you looking so stupid."

Yep, he is crying now.

"HEY! Stop hurting his feelings!"

"Princess, calm down ... or I going to hurt you."

"We will see!"

Twilight use a spell ... don't know, what spell. But Star using a spell too. The spells hit together. A giant light ... and everything was black ...

 

 

chapter 15: Unexpected destiny

I wake up, shortly after the light. I looking around. Star is still standing.

"Oh, my dear princess ... I had the power of two princesses in me ... you can't stop me like that."

I look to Twilight on my right side. She don't look hurt.

"I will get you ..."

"If you try again, I kill you."

Twilight look to me.

"SWEET! Oh no, are you okay?"

"Well ... yeah, why not?"

I know realized, that I'm laying on my back. My whole body have violations. Some of them bleeding.

"E-everything is going to be fine, Sweet."

Her smile filled me with love. But I hear crying. I look to my left ... Rising is crying.

"S-Star stop i-it. We d-don't want to kill you ... I'm y-your friend ... really, I can't hurt you."

"Stop going on my nerves, Rising, you are not a friend ... nopony is ..."

"WHY YOU NOT LISTENING! I'm your bucking friend, Star!"

"Pfff ..."

"Listen ... when I was old enough ... I travel to your new home ... I ask everypony I met, if they know you ... finally, somepony with an answer ... I went to the adress, he gives me ... but ... you was not there ... nopony was there ... I don't know, where else I could search ... so I forgot you after time ... I'm so sorry ..."

For the first time, I know Star, she look ... sad?

"What is ... if you lying?"

"When I lying ... then you can kill me. Here. RIGHT NOW!"

Rising stand up ... but do nothing, just stand there ... ready to die? But Star do ... nothing, just standing there.

"I ... I'm sorry, I still can't trust you ... but also, I can't kill you."

"Do you ... let us go?"

"No ... yes ... you can go, Rising. But they not."

"But there are my friends ... Sweet ... is a really close friend to me ... even when I met him few days ago. He saved my life with Twilight ... if they wasn't there to help me ... I would be already dead right now. I'm not going anywhere without them."

"Well ... I'm not going to kill you ... but I can't let them go."

"But ..."

"I said NO!"

"Rising ... it's okay ... go ... live your life. We can do this ..."

"Sweet ..."

"Go, please ..."

"But ... no ... I don't go."

"Rising ..."

"I stay with you. And ... if she going ro kill you, she had to kill me first ..."

"Rising ... I can't kill you ..."

"Well ..."

"I can't kill you ..."

But then, something happening ... she use a spell against Rising ... and turning him into stone.

"I can't kill you, Rising ... but if you going in my way ... I have to stop you ... I'm sorry."

"TURN HIM BACK!"

"I can't princess, I can't ..."

"Well, if you not going to turn him back, I turn you ..."

"Don't ... even ... try."

"I have too, if you ... ARGHH!!!"

"NO! TWILIIIIIIIIIGHT!!!"

I can't belive this. She really do it ... she ... killed ... TWILIGHT! Her still warm body falls on me. I see tears falling from her closed eyes ... she is really gone ... no way, to bring her back ... her body getting colder ... I start to cry ... I can't believe this ... she is really ... dead. Twilight ... nooooooo ...

"She was on my way ... you better not try to get me ... or I will do the same ... I don't need you anymore."

THAT MONSTER KILLED HER!

"What ... what did you just ..."

"Oh, come on, you didn't really love her. You just love her, because she is a princess."

"That is not true!"

"Oh, come on ..."

"I loved her ... with all my heart and soul. She was my special somepony ... that must be my destiny ... that I found them ... good new friends ..."

Looking to Rising.

"... and my special somepony ..."

Her body is completly cold now ...

"Oh, how cute ..."

"Your hate overtake you ... you just killed a pony ... no, not just a pony ... the best pony in my life ... I had a strange life, thanks to the whole lucid dreaming thing ..."

Wait ... that's it! Lucid dreaming! No ... for that, I have to sleep ...

... I don't have a choice ... this is my destiny ... dying here ... today ... now!

"I can't live with out Twilight and Rising anymore ... if you not need me, please ... kill me."

"I don't killing for fun."

I stand up, putting Twilight's dead body away and run to her ... I feel power in me ... so strong.

"Then I KILL YOU!"

Closer and closer and ...

"You choice your way here, huh?"

I see her, shooting a spell to me ... that wax the last thing, I saw ... I'm coming home, Twilight ...

 

 

chapter 16: Dying wish

Everything is black ... deep black. I open my eyes. Everything now is white ... really light white. I looking around, but here is nothing ... until somepony touch me.

"Hello there, Sweetfull Dream. Your time has come to left the world behind."

I turn around, to see ... Twilight?!

"Twilight, you ..."

"I'm not Twilight. I just use the form from her. I thought, the pony, you loved most will make it easier for you."

Oh ...

"Be sad. That's normal."

She smile to me.

"So, this is heaven? I ... expected more."

"Well, you not going to heaven."

"What? But I never ..."

"It has his reason."

"Uhm ..."

"Anyway ... like everypony, who dies, you got a last wish."

"Dying wish?"

"Yes. You have one wish."

"Fine, I wish, I'm back to kick Star's ..."

"No ..."

"Huh?"

"There are 2 rules for the wish. First: You can't wish your selve back to life. Second: You can't wish, that somepony dies."

"I see ..."

"You have all the time to think about it, Sweetfull Dream."

I don't know ... I have no idea.

"How much time I have to think about it?"

"Infinity ... you know, there is no "time" here. All this here, happens 1 second after you died. So even when you think a whole year ..."

"... there is in reality only 1 second happening?"

"Yes."

I think ... and think ... and think ... and ... wait, I'm so stupid, even when I'm dead.

"I know now."

"Really? Say."

"All right then ... mayby this was my destiny from the beginning ... I wish, that Twilight bring Star back to normal. So, she is alive, Rising is happy and Star can start new. Everypony is happy then."

"Yes, everypony will be happy. A good wish, you have. All right then, time to fullfill your wish."

"Thank you."

She start to glow. With tears in my eyes, but smiling I close my eyes. They can live now peacefully ... I feel something ... I start to fly. Thanks for this life, they all gave me ... Good bye.

 

 

chapter 17: You will always be in our hearts

I open my eyes. How can I live? Star killed me. I looking around, hopefully seeing Sweet. When I see him ... no. Is he ... dead? His eyes are closed, his body isn't moving. But he is smiling. And I'm alive ... can it be ... can it be, that his dying wish worked really? That he wished, I'm back alive? Can it be, that my will work too? Sooner or later? No time for that, I have to stop Star. I see her, she look away from me. I feel power in me. I'm not going to kill her ... but I'm going to help her back to normal. In a kind of way, I do it with my friends against Nightmare Moon. Hope, she didn't realized, that I'm back. I start, my horn is glowing. And then I shot the spell to her.

I can see her ... she look like the same before ... but, she look more friendly and shy ... not evil and bad.

"Are you ... the true Black Star? The one, Rising Shine knows?"

"Who are you? GO AWAY!"

She even sound more friendly.

"No ... I'm here to help you. I know about your bad life. It must be really hard for you."

"It was ... it eats my soul."

"Yes. And I am here, to free you from the darkness, that controls you."

"Nopony can free me ... the darkness will kill you ..."

"I don't think so, I will rescue you."

I give her my hoof.

"No ... that wouldn't work!"

"Listen too me ... trust me, Black Star. You can be yourself ... you can see your friend, Rising again ... forever."

"I ... I'm ... I ..."

"Please ... I got this chance only from my best friend. He sacrifice his life for this. He was my ... special somepony ... please, take my hoof. I'll promise you, we will escape from here. You have to believe me."

And then, she gives me her hoof. Right in that moment, some kind of black tentacles going to attack us. I use a light spell ... and it works.

"Time too see the real Black Star ... get on my back."

She climbs on me.

"Hold on tight."

Still using the spell, I fly with her, straight to the sun. It feel warmer and warmer ... until I land on the ground. I open my eyes. We are back in the castle. I look to Star.

"Please, let it work ..."

She stand up ... turning around. Then she comes closer to me. I don't have the feeling, that she is going to hurt me ... when she reach me ... she ... hug me.

"T-thank you. Thank you to save me. Thanks."

"I'm here to help, no problem."

"Twilight, right? Sorry for all of this. I wasn't my ..."

"It's okay ... but you should help your stoned friend there.

She looking to Rising.

"RISING!"

She use a spell and Rising can move.

"Rising! I'm so sorry."

Then, she runs to him and hug him.

"So you finally back, huh? Welcome back, Star."

They both crying. Crying, that they are together again. Friends. But this isn't my happy end. I lose my friend ... no, he was more. I look to his dead body, tears getting in my eyes.

"I'm sorry, Twilight ... there is nothing to bring him back, right?"

I just shake my head ...

5 days later

There they come. Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. I stand with Star and Twilight in the crowd of ponies. So many ponies come today. Saying good bye to Sweet. My life change, thanks to him. When I didn't met him accidentally ... It must be destiny.

"Today, we are all here, to say a good pony good bye. Most of them mayby don't even know him, but for some ponies here, he was something special. A nice stallion ... a good friend ... a special somepony ..."

Celestia look to Twilight. She is crying.

"... but at the end, he help us all. Without him, without his dying wish ... we all wouldn't be here. Thanks to him and our newest Princess, Twilight Sparkle, a pony named Black Star, wouldn't be back to normal. We will be still captured. And some of you would be already dead. So let us say good bye to him. Dying is a rare thing in Equestria. It is always hard to lose somepony forever. Always. I saw ponies come and go. Mayby some of you too. But life goes on. And for him and all the other ones, who already gone, we should continue life. Remember the dead, but still continue life. And now a minute of silence for or friend.

And we all do. Nopony say anything. Completly silence. A whole minute.

"Thank you all. Our friend Fluttershy make a little song for him, after talking with Twilight."

To surprise everypony, Fluttershy appears on the podium. Even I didn't expect that ... afterall she is really shy. I think, this is a special situation.

"T-thank you. I don't know him good, but Twilight tell me about him. He was a good pony. She ask me, if I can sing the short text, she gave me. Normally, I wouldn't, but I think, for her, I should do. From Twilight, for Sweet, if you can hear us ..."

And then, she start to sing ... her voice is wonderful.
"When you now, you have done
to pass this life, to gone
Their will always be somepony
who remember what you done.

You will never be forgotten
even when you are rotten
You will always be in our hearts

We hope you lived well
in our big world
Remember the good and bad
and be proud of it

You was a wonderful friend
we'll never can show you that
but we all know in our hearts,
that you will be watching us.

Now it's time to say good bye
to our friend, to your life
And someday, in a far new world
we will see you happy alive.

And now, we sing together
for or loved friend
we will always keep you friend
in our place, in our heart."


Some of the ponies here, start to cry, especially Twilight. I feel sad to, tears in my eyes. Thank you a lot, Sweet ... I hope, you would like my book about you ...


8 hours later

"Thank you ... thank you for everything, Sweet ... and that my dying wish worked."

Here I am. His grave.

"He was a good one ..."

"Yes ... like he deserve it ..."

"Yep ... like I deserve it. You know, Twilight ... why do you wished, that I'm alive, few hours later?"

"Because I can't live without you anymore."

"But you know, that we can't see again ... they all thinking, I'm dead."

"I know ... but I know, that you give me something, that remember me on you. New life."

"Can you care our filly alone?"

"I and Star helping her."

"Okay. I better go now ... new life, new identity, new look. I promise you, I will write you every monday, so long I live."

"Yes ... I will miss you, Sweet."

"Me too ..."

"I will miss you too. You are the only ponies, who knows, that I'm not dead ... anymore. The sun is beautiful today."

"Sweet ..."

"Twilight ..."

I kiss him, with tears in my eyes.

"Good bye ... live good."

"So long you are alive, I am happy. I have to go now ... Good bye, you two."

And there he goes ... starting a new life ... following his new destiny. Sweet is dead ... but also stil here. It hurt, to lie everypony, that he is dead. But so, he isn't in danger because of his magic. But I know, I will see him again ... sooner or later ... Good bye.

End




Credits:(Just something funny I do^^)

 

That was the FanFic "Unexpected destiny". I hope you like it. And when not, I'm sorry to waste your time.

Cast:

Sweetfull Dream as Sweetfull Dream/Jack

Rising-Shine as Rising Shine/Michael/Alex

Twilight Sparkle as Twilight Sparkle

Big MacIntosh as fire department guys/other people

Rainbow Dash as Rainbow Dash

Black Star as Black Star

Celestia as Celestia

Fluttershy as Fluttershy

Music:
Octavia Melody

Special Effects:
Vinyl Scratch

Stunts:
Derpy Hooves

Human acting teacher:
Lyra Heartstrings

Basic Story idea:
Rising-Shine

You will always be in our hearts - song by:
Fluttershy

 

Editing:

Chocolate Chess



Special thanks to equerio, to bring me the idea with the whole lucid dreaming.

Special thanks to all Users, who read it and give me a broohoof for it^^



All copyrights to Rising-Shine. All characters, that are not in the TV-Show "My Little Pony Friendship is Magic" are created by me. If it gives the name of a character already, I'm sorry.



Last words:
I thank you all, you all here are awesome! First I was unsure, if I should write it, but you push me up, so I do. And I don't regret it. Any questions left? Ask me.
And for the question, if I make a second FanFic, that continues the story ... yes, I will do.

No, I wont to that. I let it by the way, think yourself, hoe it continues^^

And sorry for the cloppers, but I think, this isn't allowed here :(

Thank you all, have a nice day :)

 

 

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wow thanks. The story isn't complete, it's just the beginning^^ I already on my way to write chapter 2.

And for the english ... someone ask me already, if he can edit it, so it's better to read, but nice to hear, that you can read it without trouble^^


Chapter 2 is done ... again a short one, but like I say ... it just the beginning, I think, the next ones could be longer^^


Chapter 3 is Done!^^ Have fun

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Nice work, enjoyed reading it! I like how you were able to use two different settings! It kind of feels like im reading two stories at once

Yeah, thanks^^ I can promise you, that the whole 2 stories from 1 person/pony getting more and more confusing :D

chapter 7 is finished already, but I couldn't put in here, because site was down, but now, here is it^^

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Wow ... I have to admit I felt rather uncomfortable reading chapter 7. If someone dared to even touch my plushie, let alone rip its head off :( ... anywho, keep up the good work! :D

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I just want to say thank you to you all. I have more fun to write chapter to chapter, when I know, that you all like it. It really pushing me on a positive way. I will allways giving my best to not disapointed you all^^ Thanks :)


chapter 8 is done now, have fun^^


chapter 9 is now avaiable^^


already 10 chapters, thank you all^^


chapter 11 is now avaiable^^


chapter 12 is now ready to read^^


chapter 13 is done^^

 

Everypony, we going near to the end, thanks, that you survived it so long :D


chapter 14 is done^^

 

I think, they come about 3-4 chapters, before it ends


chapter 15 is done now*Sniff* :(


short chapter 16 is done now^^


chapter 17 is done, and with it, the end of my FanFic, hope you liked it^^

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That. Was. Amazing.

 

Though what happened in our world seemed a little far fetched,* I loved everything that was in the pony world, and it was a really great story.

Also, other than My Little Dashie, it managed to be the only fanfic that almost managed to make me cry

 

 

 

*

Though in hindsight, if it is a dream, it can be a bit less realistic than the rest

 

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This was the first MLP fanfic I've ever actually read all the way to the end, and I must say that it was really, really awesome! :yay:

 

I'm really not good with reviews or anything of the sort, so I'm just going to say that the story was, overall, really well done in my opinion, and I enjoyed reading it! :lol: Except for what happened in the 'human world' ... don't get me wrong, it was good, but that moment with the plushie hit me in the feels ... probably more than it should have xD ... what? I'm sensitive okay! :P

 

That asshole deserved what he got I'm kidding that's messed up. Also, those credits. xD

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Thank you both for the informations^^ And that you like it so far, I know, it have his failure, but afterall, it was my first one^^


47.169 characters :o

 

I son't going to make a sequel, it ends like it is, if you want continue it, then do it in your fantasy^^

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That was really good!

 

Seeing as I have never wrote a fanfic I don't have any pointers. But I can say it was very well done for a first fanfic.

Congraulations! :squee: 

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wow thanks. The story isn't complete, it's just the beginning^^ I already on my way to write chapter 2.

And for the english ... someone ask me already, if he can edit it, so it's better to read, but nice to hear, that you can read it without trouble^^

Chapter 2 is done ... again a short one, but like I say ... it just the beginning, I think, the next ones could be longer^^

Chapter 3 is Done!^^ Have fun

This post you made was hard to understand. Do you already have someone fixing all of the English errors in this AWESOME fanfic.  I really loved it. 

 

And if you dont have anybody fixing it, Im willing to

 

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This post you made was hard to understand. Do you already have someone fixing all of the English errors in this AWESOME fanfic.  I really loved it. 

 

And if you dont have anybody fixing it, Im willing to

 

Thanks^^

 

Normally yes, but at the moment, he has not much time

 

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Black star? But it cannot be! :o

same thinking XD


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