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You'll not have her (Lyra& Applebloom WIP sketch)


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I was doodling, and I got a cool little concept in mah brains.

 

I'm really wondering if I should scrap this, just because I have no idea how to background (specifically: Rocks >.<) even though I really want it to be a finished product :/ I'll prolly keep this one on hold for a bit until I can figure something out xD

 

(I'm so proud of how Lyra came out *-* Applebloom, on the other hoof >.>)

 

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Now I want to know what Lyra is defending Applebloom from. Please tell me! :D

All in due time, grasshopper, all in due time... xD

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Great job! I think you need to work on the sketching a teeny tiny bit, but other than that, it's good. The background is awesome by the way.


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Great job! I think you need to work on the sketching a teeny tiny bit, but other than that, it's good. The background is awesome by the way.

*points at giant WIP in the upper left corner* it's not done. xD


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But force your way into its secrets,
For it and knowledge can raise men
To the Divine." -Ludwig van Beethoven

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Outside of Applebloom's ear (which is a bit low on her head and doesn't look enough like an ear), this is some good stuff. You definitely shouldn't scrap it. If you can manage it, might I suggest you have the shadow of Lyra and Applebloom's pursuer(s) fall over them? Unless you already have something else in mind.


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Outside of Applebloom's ear (which is a bit low on her head and doesn't look enough like an ear), this is some good stuff. You definitely shouldn't scrap it. If you can manage it, might I suggest you have the shadow of Lyra and Applebloom's pursuer(s) fall over them? Unless you already have something else in mind.

*legasps* oh my gosh, you're right xD That ear is hideous. Thank you for pointing it out ^-^'

 

(And as for the shadowing thing, that was along the line I was actually thinking of 8D Now, deciding what's coming after them is a different story >.>)

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For it and knowledge can raise men
To the Divine." -Ludwig van Beethoven

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