do you think my fanfic is worth making

[Master George Ideas 8]

NAME: Assassin pain: brighter Start

 10 years ago a young filly named BrightBorn lived with his father SoulDark who a assassin and every night he would bring BrightBorn outside to try to make him lose his ability to feel feelings for dead or injury ponies so that he too could become a assassin unfortunately for his father he won't move a inch and also sets trap to save ponies all his life he just dream of escaping his father and one night he gets his chance but when he leaves where will he go and what will he do with his life though this we see my OC BrightBorn Backstory as we live though his diary of his childhood

ps:the reason i decided to make this spin off before the first Real Assassin pain comes out is because i need to make my OC Backstory more detail so that i can fill plot holes in the real first assassin pain of the series which is why this spin off is being made first before the first main story title but i was just wondering do you think this series is worth making i mean do you think it has a chance of hitting off with the fanfic brony community also if you want to read more about my OC go to this link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brightborn-r6043. i will be ever grateful for your feedback 

Edited March 16, 2014 by Master George Ideas

[BlinkZ 1,151]

Well any fanfic is worth writing, it the motivation of a writer that is the true push, don't feel like you have to write if you dont want to.  You write better when you enjoy writing a story , rather then having to.  

 

So truth is it really your call.

[SFyr 1,982]

@@BlinkZ, beat me to it on some points, the other points, I agree fully. 

 

Anyways, often it matters more how the story is told, or how it's made interesting for the reader to fulfill their namesake through.   An alien coming to Equestria, a townsmare talking with her friend over tea, or an epic science fiction spaceship battle... they can all be equally interesting or painful depending on how its told. Yes, action and suspense tend to be easier to make interesting, but interesting quirks and slants can be introduced to almost any situation. That's the beauty of writing.

If you're interested in the topic, it may shine through, or not. Though, if you're not interested in your own story, it's more likely to come off poorly.

 

That said, you may want to look into punctuation and breaking up your thoughts a little more cleanly. Grammar conventions help stories flow smoothly, and relatedly make them more enjoyable to read.