Trying new style- Need criticism!

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So I decided to try out a new style of art today, and I'm not sure what I think of it. It's kind of rough and sketchy, which I like better than my clean-cut style I used to use, but it's also a bit messy. The "Pinkie" in the picture is the Pinkie's Boutique line which always struck me as hilarious, so that's why her mane is colored differently. Also, I can't decide on a villain name for her. She's the antagonist in my Iron Dash tumblr, and I can't think up a name to save my life! But enough of that, here's the picture.

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Um, let's see! ^^

 

Well, it's a little messy, but I'm sure touching up on it wouldn't be a problem at all!

 

I see you were going for Pinkamena, which totally fits her...dark style! ^^"

 

I like the camera design you put on there. ^^

 

It kinda looks like she's doing the news, is that intended? ^^"

 

Overall...it looks good! ^^ Just do a little touching up on it, I would recommend for a cleaner look to it. ^^

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It looks a little flat to me.

Personally I like sketchiness over the overly refined stuff.

The anatomy also needs some work.

I think if you practice then you will have a nice style.