First interior any advice?

[Cast 238]

Well I just got finished with a very big request, but I was hoping for some feed back on the interior design of the drawing.

 

I have not done but a interiors in any form, this is my first in a vector image and digital. Is the perspective ok? Does everything seem to fix right? are the colors ok?

 

Personally I had a lot of trouble with the ceiling I still think it looks funny but I'm my own worst crit lol.

 

Any advice would be of help for the next time I do a drawing like this.

 

( I added a few designs that are in the drawing, so you can see what they are lol)

 

Thanks every pony.

[Paradox 1]

In my honest opinion its amazing !!! if you wanted to change it a little though...the guy serving coffee's legs could be lowered a little bit... ....otherwise its perfection itself!!1!!! xx

[Swordfishtrombone 384]

Nothing wrong with it that I can see. Looks great.

[Java Jive 440]

I want to give a shoutout to Cast for some amazing work he did, we went over the idea back and forth and exchanging ideas, had a lot of fun with it. And Cast likes the place enough to use it in his fanfiction.

 

Basically the back story of this pic is that my OC has a bar/cafe in Ponyville called the "Blue Mare", which is a place of good music, relaxation and best drinks you'll find. So, having heard of Twilight from one of his regulars, he decided to invite Twilight over, since she's always so stressed out after study and finishing everything in time. After hesitating, she agreed, and has become one of Java's best daily regulars/visitors yet. This takes place in the late night hours, where Java is just "closing up shop" and Twilight deciding to stay for some good natured and humoristic conversation. My OC is bit of a joker, and a relaxed/coolheaded type.

 

Love the setting, color scheme, and everythings very smooth. I went to Cast with a challenge of coming up with the inside of my cafe and making it a bit "Jazz like". Like i said, it's basically a cafe with a stage somewhere, so there's live music being played there aswell. I wanted that atmosphere having something of that. He captured that perfectly.

 

Thank you Cast.

[Cast 238]

Thank you very much I didn't even realize he was to high lol fixed!

 

In my honest opinion its amazing !!! if you wanted to change it a little though...the guy serving coffee's legs could be lowered a little bit... ....otherwise its perfection itself!!1!!! xx

 

[Robojot 152]

looks good but the outline on the characters looks a bit wired.

[Daring Do 195]

I never would have guessed at first that JavaJive owned a bar... Until he told me while I was drawing the bar picture... Great to see someone else drawing bars and stuff though, I am sure people will visit there... and drink... Like Zoop!