ggg-2 3,553 May 14, 2014 Share May 14, 2014 (edited) Applebloom gets her cutie mark. yes, finally! but it isn't anything apple related like the rest of her kin. While everypony else is happy for her, Applebloom surprisingly isn't happy about it. She hides and locks herself in her room, ashamed of having a non apple related cutie mark, and thinking it has caused her to betray the family name. Can her friends and family help her through her personal struggle? thoughts on my idea? title ideas? I need all the feedback/ideas I can get. Edited May 14, 2014 by ggg-2 Don't be a nerd. Join the herd! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeric 46,854 May 15, 2014 Share May 15, 2014 Just some thoughts off the top of my head Should have a natural transition. AB Gets Cutie mark and is beside herself with joy, her family shares her joy, but AB notices that AJ's seems forced ... and a bit sad. AB jumps to the conclusion that it is because her mark is not Apple related. Maybe she tries to ignore/hide/go against her cutie mark. Maybe even begging Zecora to change it, and gets a wise lecture. Add some CMC conflict as a B story. AJ actually is depressed because their parents weren't there to share in this moment. DO NOT THINK OF A TITLE UNTIL STORY IS DONE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dashicorn 74 May 15, 2014 Share May 15, 2014 I can see this as cannon. I mean with all the bizarre shit going on why not? “No one is more qualified than you are to decide how you live; no one should be able to vote on what you do with your time and your potential unless you invite them to. ” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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