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Aaron and Twilight Walked off from John, the two talking among themselves and trying not to look suspicious. The two discussed various things such as their cultures, personal and worldly history, and any other random topic that came through their heads. John, however, was alone at the moment, with the exception of some ponies and minotaurs walking the streets. All of which had a pleasant demeanor about them. The houses stretched far, until he came across the shopping district. And the first thing that could be seen was a diner.

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Looking around I noticed now and earlier that there were a lack of guards besides the ones at the entrance. I made sure to remember to mention that to Aaron and Twilight. Continuing on, I decided to visit the diner that I saw in the front of my vision. I walked towards it and opened the door, a bell chimed marking my entrance. I looked around to see just ponies and Minotaur's talking. I took a seat and looked around.


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"Just a glass of water and a grilled cheese" I reply after looking at the menu also noticing how tired he was. He nods and tiredly walks away to give the order, and i continue look around and listen for anything useful although I would be better off going to a bar to find information.

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As he listened he could hear a very informative conversation. "Heh. I tell ya man. The things I did to her was amazing. I filled that whore to the brim in both holes." Normally talking of such things in public was rather rude. But they were talking about a female, a rarity in this town. The other pony rolled his eyes. "Oh come on dude. They're slaves but for fuck's sake, show some respect." The other one scoffed. "bah. They're all whores man. Hell, I knew a stallion who loved shave their heads and strangle them with their own hair. He was a sick bastard, agreed but its not like anypony cares."

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I felt my stomach do flips, and every instinct inside me said to tear this stallion limb to limb for using a sex slave for his own desires, and the city for allowing it  and not even caring. But I listened carefully to see where I could find Fluttershy and get her out of this hell hole and maybe just maybe I could help the other slaves get free as well.


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The pony sighed heavily as he listened to his friend. "Dude, I know they're sexual slaves, but I still treat them with respect. Even that one mare. The butter yellow one-" "Fluttershy. Yeah I know her. Oh, I've done some kinky shit with her." The other pony looked at him with distain. "Regardless, When I have my way with her, I try to make her comfortable. I know she doesn't have a choice but she's so sweet. Hell, sometimes I just pet her." The other guy laughed loudly. "Ah, you pansy. Well, you have fun with that while I wreck my mares. I'm headin' to the bathroom. order the salad special." he walked off, leaving the other stallion.

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I get up now knowing how I can get my information and walk towards the lone stallion, making sure to do my best to hide my emotion, once I am at his table I just sit down and look at him for a moment before simply saying, "Where is Fluttershy located?" It was less of a question and more of a demand but mostly emotionless all the same.


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The stallion looked at the human in confusion. "Oh, you mean the pits? Its located near town hall. Big building, cant miss it really. You must be new here. My name's Wind Dancer." He held his hand out to shake. "I'm sorry about my friend. His respect towards women is deplorable, but you can't really pick your friends really. IF you want, I can take you there after I'm done eating."

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I look at him disgusted at any use of slaves defiantly using them for sex, but tolerate him because he is not as bad as his friend and I needed him to get to my goal. "Okay once your done eating, you'll lead me there, thanks for the information Wind Dancer, but make sure that your friend is not alone around me, okay."

 

I go back to my previous seat and noticed my water and grilled cheese was served. I ate as I waited for Wind Dancer.


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"No problem. To be honest, I think he's mooching off of my membership to the pits." an hour had passed as the two ate. Once Wind Dancer and his friend were done, they left the diner and waited for John to join them, much to his friend's displeasure. He wanted to get to the pits again and "Make some mares feel lucky" as he put it.

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I finished eating got up and met them outside. "Lets get this over with." I stated ready to follow Wind Dancer and waiting for an excuse to kill his friend the second which surprised me as I never was one to want to kill someone else much less wait for an excuse to do so. Hell I believe that every time I looked at Wind Dancers friend my gaze made it clear.


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The three start walking, the one called Dive Bomb starts telling a story of his sexual escapades to Wind Dancer. His face turning into one that looked similar to John. Though, Wind Dancer was not a violent stallion and would not turn on a friend. After some walking, they had made it "...And so half way through blowin' me, the hooker OD's on me." "I really don't want to discuss my ex-marefriend right now." "I mean I still finished, but what kind of shit is that?" "For Tirek's sake, think of mother." It got a bit quiet before he made a retort. "I ain't jerkin off right now." wind growled in anger and sighed in relief at the sight of the building. "Finally, we're here. Dive please go inside while I... talk with our friend." "Sweet. Promise to save you a whore or two." He ran off like a kid in a candy store. "So... how do you plan on rescuing Fluttershy?"

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"I have a simi risky plan that involves buying her services" I felt sick as I said that "and from there helping her out of this hell hole." the problem is getting her out of the city. For now I want you to search for two of my friends, Twilight, and Aaron." I whisper their names in his ear. "Aaron looks similar to me, once you found him you found the other. Once you see them, tell them to meet me at the fountain and prepare for all hell to break loose"

 

"One last thing, are you sure you want to get involved with this? Because there is a chance that you may become a outlaw by affiliation."


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Once he heard the word, twilight he leaned in so he could whisper the rest. He heard every word and nodded. "Aye. I've been waiting my whole life to put this place out of business. You got the resistance's aid, but you don't buy their services. You just walk through rows of dungeons and when you find the room with the mare you like, you just open the door and do your thing." He said the last part as if he had suddenly thrown up in his mouth. "Fluttershy is in room 4-26 B. She's a nervous wreck and I did all I could to comfort her. There is a master release control in the monitoring room. Through the fire alarm first, that should clear the place of guards, then throw the switch to release them all. You should be able to sneak out from there."

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"Thanks for the help, now that we have a better plan lets do this." With a nod I made my way to the monitoring room and once I found a fire alarm I pulled it, while no one was watching, as the guards ran out of the monitoring room I slipped in and looked for the master release switch and fliped it watching as most of the mares ran out. I then made my way to Fluttershy's cell and saw her in a fetal position.


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Fluttershy was left in her cell. Her marehood was leaking semen onto the filthy floor covered in her own bodily fluids. Her face was stained with tears dirt as she breathed heavily. But what would catch anyone's attention was that she was pregnant. Aaron and twilight soon came after as Twilight gasped in shock to see the sweetest of her friends in such a degrading position. Aaron runs over to the girl and starts looking her over. "She's fine. Just traumatized is all." Aaron scoops her up with great strength, making his way to Twilight and John, trailing semen as he walked. "We need to get out of here. Twilight, John, uh... new guy. can you clear the way of any opposition?" Twilight and Wind Dancer nodded. "Aye, you can count on us mate. Their is an old waste shoot at the end of the hall, it leads to out of the city. Just uh... don't have your mouth open when you get to the end."

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I pulled my knife out, sick and angry at the same time as we made our way to the exit I eagerly awaited a guard, employee, or patron to give me an excuse to kill them for what happened to Fluttershy and many other Mares that were enslaved here. Some where inside of me a small piece of who I was before died at that moment, consumed in an inferno of anger and rage. 


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The two ponies and human took point in front of them. Aaron was in no meaning of the word, a fighter, so he would put his strength to use and carry Fluttershy out of this horrid place. The other mares were running for the trash chute, some carrying new born foals or minotaurs out with them. Once there, they saw a sight they did not want to see. It was Dive Bomb with two guards. "Well well. I always knew you were going to pull this shit someday." "Dive this isn't right. you know it full well." "Oh, I know its wrong, that why I love doing it. In fact, my master is promising me so much if I bring in the supposed resistance in the town. Never expected to see that it would be you, bro." Fluttershy was starting to cower at the sight of Dive Bomb, in which Aaron immediately comforted her. "Oh, is the little whore scared? Well, don't worry. I only plan on killing the guys. When we're done, I'll be sure to fuck you again and again and agai- UGH!" He was cut off by the sound of Wind Dancer's leg embedding itself in his crotch and Dive Bomb backing up. "Kill them... Kill them now."  The minotaurs did as ordered and brandished their spears.

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I smiled and got in a fighting stance that was embedded in my head from practice, one Minotaur lunged at me, I simply side stepped to his left and lunged forward while he was still off balance, and stabbed his exposed neck, and pulled the combat knife out the serrated edge furthering the damage. Another swiped this one seeming older and more experienced, I jumped back to dodge, the Minotaur dropped the spear and drew a short sword, I just muttered a curse and circled him occasionally testing his guard, knowing this was not like a game or a spar. I could not respawn and the enemy wanted me dead.


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The guard circled around and with a great opportunity, Wind Dancer jumped and attached himself to the guards back, he began to try and get him off, but before he could, he swiped his neck and severing his spine. the minotaur fell to the ground lifeless. Before a victory could be muttered, Dive Bomb charged forward and lifted Wind Dancer into the air. "D-Dive? You... You can fly?" He gave a smirk as his eyes suddenly glowed purple for a moment. "Yeah... I can." Dive bomb drove his sword into Wind Dancers gut and dropped him from a great height, Wind Dancer's skull made a cracking sound upon impact with the concrete. "So, that was fun. Now, who wants to take me on next?" twilight grabbed a vile of green liquid and drank it. With that, her horn glowed purple. "Not on your life." She grabbed hold of Aaron and John as in a flash they had vanished from sight, reappearing just outside the city walls.

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One minute I watched as Wind Dancer was killed, and Twilight confronted Dive Bomb and just before she confronted him teleported us away to the outskirts of the city. I shook my head and looked to see Aaron carrying and comforting a scared Fluttershy. I could not even feel angry, disgusted or anything, I was emotionally and physically drained. I just hoped the Mares that escaped and Twilight would be okay.


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Now that they were safe and sound, Twilight fell to her knees as blood began to trickle down her nose. Aaron could see that they were in the fields and away from the city. "Come on. We need to get out of here before they find us." Twilight nodded. "Y-Yeah. Just... just give me a minute. That spell took a bit out of me."

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I looked at Twilight glad she was fine if very tired and with a bloody nose. I offered her a hand a few minutes later and asked concerned, "Will you be able to walk?" I decided to withhold my other question about the potion she drank before teleporting us out here.  


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She took his hand gratefully. "Thanks John." SHe pulled herself up, slightly wobbling and brought out the map. "Okay, we have Fluttershy, How is she doing by the way?" Aaron was wiping the sex juices from his arm with a rag. "Shes fine. Just sleepy and... leaking a bit." She nodded and began looking over the map. "Alright, we should take her to somewhere safe of some sort."

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