Want to read another poem I wrote? ...Too bad, I'm posting it anyway. (Criticism highly encouraged!)

Choices choices choices

Whizzing by now gone

Chances chances chances

Hope there's more than one

An on-rails adventure

Going faster than

You'd like

Growing pains abound

Maturing quicker than

Is right

Choices choices choices

Whizzing by now gone

Chances chances chances

Hope there's more than one