Mr. Critical

Tia chuckled at that statement. "Oh Draco you flatterer, you." She gave a sigh as she sat on a bench. "This is nice. I haven't been sought after this much since the first gryphon king met me. Oh the things he said. You remind me a lot like him. Young, brash, a real charmer, and a gentlemen through and through. Oh the things he would say to me, they would make my face turn redder than a cherry."

She heard the last quip and her eyes dialated a bit and a small shiver goes up her spine. "No!... I-I mean, no. just be at my side and... be faithful to me. That is all I ask of you Draco." She gives him a loving kiss. "Just be my courier and love me for me and I shall do the same for you."

Twilight looked up to John and took one more bite. "Our next target is Rainbow Dash. When Tirek Took power, she brought together her own underground resistence until it became the biggest opposing force in the land. However, Tirek captured her and sent her to where all war criminals go. The Apploosan Gem Mines. I haven't heard much of her or the resistence until after today. Not since... The Crystal Empire." Twilight became silent and gulped down her soup and went to bed. "Good night Gentlemen. I'll see you tomorrow." Twilight picked up Fluttershy and took her into the "Girls Tent" and went to go to sleep.

Aaron had the food ready for them to eat. It was a common potato soup with cabbage and carrots. He gave a bowl to John and Twilight and placed one in front of Fluttershy in case she wanted food. Even though she hasn't moved an inch from her bed. It was quiet, except for the sounds of the forest itself.

Tia was taken aback and hugged him as well. "Well, if we're going to a swing club, lets wait until it gets darker. It will give us more time to explore the city a little more. Plus, I have a dress Luna gave me a few hundred years back. It was played as a joke, but it was quite a sexy number."

Aaron sat Fluttershy on the ground, creating a bed for her with a blanket and another blanket for her naked body. Once he had a fire going he would make some soup for them, even though his ingredients were low. But he could get something good out regardless. twilight had gotten the tents that she and Aaron stole back in Manehattan suburbia. Twilight stood up and went over to the campfire. Once down she removed her prosthetic leg and began cleaning it.

(Its fine. I have to do that after this post.) Twilight stopped in the middle of a clearing. Sighing as she sat down. "We'll make camp here. Aaron, can you make us some dinner. I think we all could use it. Even her." Aaron looks down at Flutterhsy and nods in agreement. Setting her down, he begins to set up a fire as Twilight beings something of her own. She was looking over the clearing and saw that the trees were too narrow for anypony to slip through. The only ways through was the road itself. "Alright, the place is secure. John, can you help me set up tents for us?"

They arrived in the everfree a day or so later. Fluttershy had yet spoken a word or moved even an inch. Once inside, Twilight and John took a fighting stance as they entered. It would be another day before they reached Applejack and it would be a treacherous trek. And upon entering the everfree, Aaron began hearing the voices once again. "I missed you" They would say to him as he shook their head. Twilight led the way, using a torch she had fashioned.

My apologies. I won't spoil anything more. My apologies. I won't spoil anything more.

Transformers for is an awful movie.

The team of four began walking along the path back to the everfree with the rescued Fluttershy. In the distance Aaron could see female mares running out of the city into various directions. The guards chasing after them but it was all in vain. One fourth of his journey was now complete and they would go on to rescue the one called Rainbow Dash next. Where ever she is.

Tia gave Draco a kiss when he gave him half of his bits. "That was very noble of you. I'll be sure to reward you for your deeds." She got up from the table as the stallions left the table. Heading for the door with Draco. "So, where is this Coco Bucko. Sounds like a strip club."

Twilight nodded as she placed the map away. "Aaron. You okay with carrying her?" "Of course. She's light as a feather. Even with her child." She nodded and looked at John. "We should get going. The sooner we get to the everfree, the better off we are. Hell, maybe we could get some rest. Maybe get her some food."

She took his hand gratefully. "Thanks John." SHe pulled herself up, slightly wobbling and brought out the map. "Okay, we have Fluttershy, How is she doing by the way?" Aaron was wiping the sex juices from his arm with a rag. "Shes fine. Just sleepy and... leaking a bit." She nodded and began looking over the map. "Alright, we should take her to somewhere safe of some sort."

Now that they were safe and sound, Twilight fell to her knees as blood began to trickle down her nose. Aaron could see that they were in the fields and away from the city. "Come on. We need to get out of here before they find us." Twilight nodded. "Y-Yeah. Just... just give me a minute. That spell took a bit out of me."

The guard circled around and with a great opportunity, Wind Dancer jumped and attached himself to the guards back, he began to try and get him off, but before he could, he swiped his neck and severing his spine. the minotaur fell to the ground lifeless. Before a victory could be muttered, Dive Bomb charged forward and lifted Wind Dancer into the air. "D-Dive? You... You can fly?" He gave a smirk as his eyes suddenly glowed purple for a moment. "Yeah... I can." Dive bomb drove his sword into Wind Dancers gut and dropped him from a great height, Wind Dancer's skull made a cracking sound upon impact with the concrete. "So, that was fun. Now, who wants to take me on next?" twilight grabbed a vile of green liquid and drank it. With that, her horn glowed purple. "Not on your life." She grabbed hold of Aaron and John as in a flash they had vanished from sight, reappearing just outside the city walls.

The two ponies and human took point in front of them. Aaron was in no meaning of the word, a fighter, so he would put his strength to use and carry Fluttershy out of this horrid place. The other mares were running for the trash chute, some carrying new born foals or minotaurs out with them. Once there, they saw a sight they did not want to see. It was Dive Bomb with two guards. "Well well. I always knew you were going to pull this shit someday." "Dive this isn't right. you know it full well." "Oh, I know its wrong, that why I love doing it. In fact, my master is promising me so much if I bring in the supposed resistance in the town. Never expected to see that it would be you, bro." Fluttershy was starting to cower at the sight of Dive Bomb, in which Aaron immediately comforted her. "Oh, is the little whore scared? Well, don't worry. I only plan on killing the guys. When we're done, I'll be sure to fuck you again and again and agai- UGH!" He was cut off by the sound of Wind Dancer's leg embedding itself in his crotch and Dive Bomb backing up. "Kill them... Kill them now." The minotaurs did as ordered and brandished their spears.

Fluttershy was left in her cell. Her marehood was leaking semen onto the filthy floor covered in her own bodily fluids. Her face was stained with tears dirt as she breathed heavily. But what would catch anyone's attention was that she was pregnant. Aaron and twilight soon came after as Twilight gasped in shock to see the sweetest of her friends in such a degrading position. Aaron runs over to the girl and starts looking her over. "She's fine. Just traumatized is all." Aaron scoops her up with great strength, making his way to Twilight and John, trailing semen as he walked. "We need to get out of here. Twilight, John, uh... new guy. can you clear the way of any opposition?" Twilight and Wind Dancer nodded. "Aye, you can count on us mate. Their is an old waste shoot at the end of the hall, it leads to out of the city. Just uh... don't have your mouth open when you get to the end."

Once he heard the word, twilight he leaned in so he could whisper the rest. He heard every word and nodded. "Aye. I've been waiting my whole life to put this place out of business. You got the resistance's aid, but you don't buy their services. You just walk through rows of dungeons and when you find the room with the mare you like, you just open the door and do your thing." He said the last part as if he had suddenly thrown up in his mouth. "Fluttershy is in room 4-26 B. She's a nervous wreck and I did all I could to comfort her. There is a master release control in the monitoring room. Through the fire alarm first, that should clear the place of guards, then throw the switch to release them all. You should be able to sneak out from there."

The three start walking, the one called Dive Bomb starts telling a story of his sexual escapades to Wind Dancer. His face turning into one that looked similar to John. Though, Wind Dancer was not a violent stallion and would not turn on a friend. After some walking, they had made it "...And so half way through blowin' me, the hooker OD's on me." "I really don't want to discuss my ex-marefriend right now." "I mean I still finished, but what kind of shit is that?" "For Tirek's sake, think of mother." It got a bit quiet before he made a retort. "I ain't jerkin off right now." wind growled in anger and sighed in relief at the sight of the building. "Finally, we're here. Dive please go inside while I... talk with our friend." "Sweet. Promise to save you a whore or two." He ran off like a kid in a candy store. "So... how do you plan on rescuing Fluttershy?"

"No problem. To be honest, I think he's mooching off of my membership to the pits." an hour had passed as the two ate. Once Wind Dancer and his friend were done, they left the diner and waited for John to join them, much to his friend's displeasure. He wanted to get to the pits again and "Make some mares feel lucky" as he put it.

The stallion looked at the human in confusion. "Oh, you mean the pits? Its located near town hall. Big building, cant miss it really. You must be new here. My name's Wind Dancer." He held his hand out to shake. "I'm sorry about my friend. His respect towards women is deplorable, but you can't really pick your friends really. IF you want, I can take you there after I'm done eating."