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  1. Mr. Critical
    Celestia gave a chuckle as she saw a bit of red cross his face. Without warning, she brought him in for a kiss that was beyond comprehension. Her lips seemed to have grown softer and her tongue burned with a passion, sending shock waves of pleasure through Draco. She soon let go and gave a wink to him. "How was that for a kiss, lover."
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    Celestia did one better. She took a seductive pose on the piano. She may have been big, but she was much lighter than she appeared. She began to move in a sultry manner as she sang her parts, matching perfectly with Draco. She was just having the time of her life, spending it with her lover.
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    (I wasn't asking for the lyrics, but whatever.) Once the song had concluded, she and Draco recieved applause from the crowd. She gave them a bow for their gratitude as she shot a wink to draco on the piano. Bringing the mic up to her lips. "Fillies and gentlecolts, I would like you all to give another round of applause to my good friend Draco for his outstanding skills with the piano." And they did just that. The applause echoed through the room.
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    Celestia had ordered another Trottingham Blitz when Draco took center stage and got onto the piano. Her resistance to alchohol was taking effect and took the stage with him, knowing fool well of her actions. SHe grabbed the mic and began to sing with him. (IT wont let me watch the video, so I'm taking a shot in the dark here)
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    Celestia took a seat at the bar while she let her new lover reconnect with his friends. She tapped her hoof on the bar. "Oi, bar keep. I'll take a Trottingham blitz on the rocks. Hold the rum." Within seconds, a large glass of alchohol came her way and she lifted it, and began gulping it down. A foam mustache forming on her muzzle. When Draco introduced her she looked over to them with a smile. "Pleased to meet yo- *Hik*... excuse me. Pleasure to meet you all."
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    She rolled her eyes at his comment. "Yes, everypony is flocking to see you. Not the famous princess in a revealing outfit in your arms." She chuckled as they walked in, the bouncer frantically grabbing the rope to let them in at the sight of Draco and the princess. She saw all the slot machines, tables with ponies at them, the bar, and the singer mare on stage singing a calm and slow tune.
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    "So be it then. But don't think I won't be asking for something." She returned the kiss he had given her. "Now, lets be off to this club." Thw tow began their walking and ponies were already staring. Their beloved princess in such a revealing outfit with some strange stallion in the city of sin. She already knew that there would be explanations needed when she gets back, but for now, she didn't care.
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    She gave a sigh. "Very well. But... only for you Draco." He gave her a kiss as she soon transformed back to her regal self. But instead of her normal jewelry, it was a dark red cocktail dress that shines in the moonlight. Her hair was tied in a ponytail(no pun intended) and her lips seemed to glow with the same shade of red as her dress. "Well, shall we go out handsome?" She shot him a wink as her hoof came out for him to take it and escort her to the club.
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    Rolling her eyes playfully, Celestia walked up to him and kissed his cheek. "To be honest, I'm in no mood for singing. I'm more of a dancing pony. Luna however, just loves stallion singing to her. I used to lose sleep some nights when some courters stand outside her window and try to win her heart. Then it would go quiet and... then I'd hear a... different kind of singing. One where they start calling my name constantly."
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    Giving an approving nod, Nightmare snapped her fingers as John was brought out of his dream to the waking world. Outside, he could hear some rustling from the sacks, but it wasn't a wild animal. It was only Twilight going through her things, looking for something.
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    I think we already saw what hollow shades looks like so I'll say Griffin Kingdom. Or any where new to be honest, I love me some world building.
  12. Mr. Critical
    No. Everything comes to an end and its only satisfying once it does. If it keeps going on forever, we'll get bored and so will the creators. We'll always have the older episodes, but I don't want this to go on forever. Plus, we can always hope that gen. 5 MLP will be good, or(if its physically possible) even better.
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    Hero. I like to be the good guy.
  14. Mr. Critical
    Paranoia agent, DBZ, Paprika(its a movie actually but its my personal favorite), FLCL, and my favorite anime thus far, Monster. Seriously, if you like a suspenseful psychological thriller, I highly recommend Monster. Plus, if you want to see what would happen if someone made a character more terrifying than The Joker.
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    So the brony/4chan wars arise anew.
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    I am looking for someone to help me proofread my dark adventure fanfic, The World They Once Knew. It may not be original, but that doesn't mean I can't make it good. But I need someone to help me out and to show me where the problems are with the chapters. So, can anyone help me, if so, please PM me.
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    Nightmare joins him in raising her glass. "To better times, indeed." She downs her drink and sets the empty glass on the table. "I may not know how many male ponies or minotaurs had their way with the poor dear, but what's done is done. All you can do is fix the damage and... tell the other human to keep doing what he's doing, whatever that is."
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    "Ah thats good. I've tried assisting in getting her to come out of her state of mind. But to no avail. I was hoping that other human could help with her state of mind. But, her eating and motor skills still work so one of us is getting through to her." She takes another sip of her drink. "I remember her back when I was known as Luna. She was so shy. Literally afraid of her own shadow. But when the chips were down, she would stare a dragon in the eyes and make him cry. But even then, she was always so kind and sweet."
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    Nightmare's eyes opened in surprise and sat her drink down with a sigh. "The Crystal Empire. I'm going to guess telling you not to go there is futile, so I have nothing to say really.' She waved her hands as his desired glass of water was now sitting on the table before him. "So, what about the newest member of your group. Miss Fluttershy if I remember correctly."
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    The two danced to the sound of the music for what seemed like hours. Nightmare pulling him over to a booth where she let out a sigh. "I must say, your kind's music is much more fun than that of what I know. So, how goes your quest?" She snapped her fingers as an appletini appeared in her hand, sipping the contents.
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    "Yeah. I'm counting on it actually. Some failure would do that stallion well. But I'm not worrying. Luna is there to make sure his rule doesn't get too out of hand. Blueblood may be an narcissistic fool, but he's my narcissistic fool. I still love the little guy but hey, a younger sibling can still be a nuisance. Some responsibility would probably give that pony some form of sense of respect. If not, I'm sure the politicians will scare the sense into him."
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    (I don't...I-I don't think you used that clip correctly?) Tia looked up to the skies and leaned against Draco. She looked at Luna's canvas and beautiful work. She didn't want to ruin the silence of the moment. She liked being with Draco and he liked being with her. Not the princess or the alicorn. Just the mare and only the mare.
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    "Bitaly? That's all the way across the ocean in the Gryphon Empire. Flying there would take days... but... I have always wanted to go." She began running the idea through her head, weighing the pros and cons. "You know what... I'm game. After we're done in Los Pegasus, we'll head on over to Bitaly."
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    As soon as he found himself in the void, he soon felt the sensation of gravity. He was falling in empty space in an utter weightlessness. With a hard thump, he soon found himself in a peculiar area. It was not some medical meeting area, or a hellish wasteland, but a nightclub. The place was playing seventies disco music as silhouettes of human's danced to the beat. And there in the middle of it all was Nightmare Moon. A smile on her face. "Ah, John. So good to see you. Come, let us dance. Your kind's music is most fascinating."
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    Giggling, Tia gave him another kiss. "I will. As soon as we left, business Celestia has taken leave and now Tia; explorer of Equestria and lover of fun." She took a confident pose and looked to Draco. "And you, shall be my guide for such things. Show me what today's day and age does for fun."
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