Comet Starflash

Sven pulled back the bolt system on his rifle, and an unfired bullet popped out of the side. He caught this bullet, spinning in a few times before placing it back in the side and closing the mechanism. "I can pretty much guarantee that at least one of us isn't coming back from this..." he said, taking the cigarette offered by his fellow soldier and lighting it with one of his storm matches. Sven finished his cigarette as they began to move, putting it out and throwing it to the ground. He got himself in a somewhat redied stance and prepped his rifle. "Just like the Fallschirmjäger... Drop in ready for combat, or die getting ready during..."

@@Alicorn Fluttershy, Sun simply grunted from the corner of the table. "Eat our food and hope this Anala gal has a bad time in prison. She can dish out a prank, but she certainly can't take one... I suppose I had better get down to the station, I'll need to fill out a report on what happened..." He smirked at the thought of seeing her behind bars. She was a spoilt brat who took advantage of people whilst expecting them to worship her like a goddess.

Sun sat up and held up his coffee. "I'm ok for now, take everypony's order at this table and put it on my tab. I'm buyin'." And with that he looked around with a raised an eyebrow. "Go ahead everypony. Order what you like." Then he sat back down again and took another casual sip of coffee.

Sun just sat there sipping his coffee. He didn't stand up, he didn't look, he didn't even change a bit. All the commotion and everypony else was standing, looking or helping. Helping was ok, but not too many ponies otherwise you got in their way. Standing and staring in silence just made the matter worse, you made them feel even more embarrassed to know that everypony saw you fall. So if somepony was helping, just continue about your business.

@, Sun saw the mare take out all of the money and show it to him. He thought everything would be alright after that and she would have to pay for herself. However she laughed, an obvious fake laugh, and to Sun's surprise the colt started laughing with her! Sun rolled his eyes and stood up, finally heading towards the counter to grab a coffee and a sandwich. "Some ponies are so gullible. Either that or he is just incredibly blinded by love. Which, by the way, she is stringing you along." He said to himself. He sat back down at the window table, and beckoned the others over, mouthing "lunch is on me" through the window.

@, Sun continued to walk on, but heard everything that Anala said. He turned his head ever so slightly and shouted back to them. "She's lying, I can hear it in her voice. Also I saw you put the cash in the door pocket of the car, the window in front of me is very reflective yknow?" And with that he continued to walk on, entering the cafe on the other side of the road and settling down at the window table, just to see how it played out.

@, As Sun began to walk away, he noticed the mare take advantage of the obviously lovestruck pony. As he walked past he leaned over and whispered in the pony's ear. "Hey 'Rye', just to let you know, yer payin' for a mare that has more bits than the whole group, and that's just in her pocket." Sun pats him on the back and continues his walk to the nearest cafe. In truth he was rather hungry himself, but he dare not show any weakness or needs.

@, "I wanted to be an artist... then I realised the only art I was good at was the "art of war" as they call it. I suppose we all need a hobby just to stay sane in this world... I suppose I need a hobby really. I have inspiration, just nothing to express it: neither the skills or the tools..." Sun looked up at his apartment above the clouds. "All the inspiration, and nothing to express it..." he repeated to himself quietly. He turned back to the mare. "Well g'luck on your project miss, stay safe, tell him to slow down ev'y once in a while." He said in his strong, deep but somewhat heartwarming voice.

@, "True... However when I was in charge the guard was a symbol of protection, peacekeepers if you will. Now? The force seems as flawed as this kid's gas pedal..." Sun had noticed that she had continuously drawn in her notepad and had paints in her bag. "Are you an artist by any chance, miss?"

@@C. Thunder Dash, @, "Almost makes me ashamed to have ever been a part of it, let alone the commander for ten years..." He put away his badge after staring at it for some time. "Every aspect of everything is corrupt, even the most innocent of ponies souls. The police force is no exception"

@@C. Thunder Dash, "Sounds like you've been through hell so far kid. But you've got to understand that all the police force do is protect the innocent, at any cost. Much as it may seem like a betrayal I'm sure the guard had a perfectly good reason. To protect and serve, that's what we did." @, Sun whispered to himself about the fateful day in which he failed his oath to protect and serve. "I tried my best, but it just wasn't enough. You thought I turned my back on you, but I saw your murder case to the bitter end..." He whispered not very quietly. "Miss, you must know that we try our best, no matter what. There are limits to what even an alicorn can do you know, and after all, we are only ponies..."

@@C. Thunder Dash, "Relax, kid. I'm retired. Just wanted to smell the sports leather in this thing. Where'd you get the funds for this? I can just about afford the penthouse suite for the tallest apartment building in Manehattan. This must have cost a fortune! Not to mention fuel." @, Sun also noticed rain walking back to the car. "Good afternoon, miss. Hold on to your seat and wear your belt tight with this one. I saw you leave the ground from here!"

@@C. Thunder Dash, "Oh so this is your vehicle..." Sun said flashing his police badge. "Tell me more about these rather illegal street races." He said sarcastically. Hr tapped on the door and beckoned Nitro. "Sir I'm going to need to ask you to step out of the car." He said loudly over the turned up music.

@@C. Thunder Dash, Sun walked up to the car, making sure that his badge was showing (the guard let him keep a few things when he left) and tapped on the window. He moved his hoof in a circular motion to signal him to wind down the window. "This your car sir?" He asked in a formal manner.

Sun Stream was on the train, about a few minutes from the next stop. He wasn't doing anything in particular, nor going anywhere in particular. Just trying out the fairly new transport system he guessed... Sure it got him places fast, but other than that he wasn't all that impressed with it. Everything went by so fast, and even then there wasn't anything to look at apart from lighs that went by so fast it looked like one light flashing in the window. He liked Manehattan, but there wasn't much to do that seemed interesting to him. When he went back to his apartment it was so high up you could just about see a dot of a pony walking past. He had inspiration, but not the tools necessary to capture the image the way he saw it. He could never find (nor have the ability to) paint, draw or sketch. Cameras were too expensive, considering his big splash out on the penthouse apartment. The train finally came to a stop and the doors opened with the all new rrecordings of 'doors opening, mind the gap'. He got up and, without paying any attention to his surroundings, walked out of the subway and straight past the crafts shop. Even if he had noticed it, he didn't have enough bits to buy anything AND get home without walking or grabbing a lift with somepony else, which he would rather not. He stood around on the corner, his back to the arts shop and looked at the scenery. Hussle and bussle everywhere. Controlled chaos in the form of overcrowded roads. He could, however, see and hear a rather flash car roaring down the road. It even left the ground at one point! As an ex guard, he would have reported them, however when he saw the ponies inside he chuckled. "Reminds me of myself when I was younger..."

I am officially and most indefinitely confuzzled... But if it makes sense to you they hey.

(I am sorry friend, but I fear I cannot wait any longer @Jump Cut) Sven followed sergeant Clear Waters, listening as hard as he could. He liked to know everything he could, and created a map of the battlefield with key points in his mind. He had been like that ever since the event that put him in his current squad in the first place. Sent into battle too fast, not enough planning, plus all support wasn't ready, as they needed more time. "Twenty minutes... Jesus, they don't give us time to settle in huh?" Sven said under his breath. "They're giving us less and less time each deployment. This is gonna be a mess..." Sven hauled himself and his heavy equipment next to the sergeant and placed his rifle pointing down between his feet. He leaned over to Clear's ear and spoke quietly. "All due respect, sir, but us Fallschirmjäger are only as good as you say when command takes time and consideration to plan our assaults. Had they planned my previous drop better my old squad would still be alive and kicking." Sven took out his cigarette case and matches, taking one out of the case. Before he could light it he realised it was very short, and apon inspection of the case he saw a bullet lodged within it, ruining all of his cigarette rations. He threw the case with all the cigarettes to the side of the vehicle and looked rather irritated. "Scheiße! Proof of the hell I've been in..." He put the quarter cigarette that he held onto in his mouth and lit it, taking a few puffs before it was worthless. He took it out of his mouth and pressed it against the side of the vehicle, melting a small circle of paint right down to the metal. He flicked it onto the floor, a small trail of smoke coming from the remains.

Sven was in the back of a truck. Even with the armoured vehicles covering them, and they were deep in axis territory, he was still uneasy. His whole body shook uncontrollably to the bumps in the dirt track. The whole truck was silent, apart from the sound of the engine and the squeeky suspension. Sven sat there just looking out the back at the vehicle behind them, until someone spoke. He turned his attention to the pony who had spoken, and saw what looked to be a battle-hardened pony reassuring the unicorn next to him that everything would be alright. "The sooner you accept the fact that you are already dead, the sooner you can be the soldier Luna needs you to be." And after this, he carried on staring out the back until he saw the gates of the base. Realising he was at the destination he readied his equipment and prepared to jump out the back. By this time gunshots and the occasional explosion could be heard in the distance. After he heard the click of the hand break he jumped out the back, slinging his rifle over his shoulder and heading in the same general direction as Blitz. He noticed the sergeant badge with the name Waters above it. That was his new squad leader. He headed towards him and stood to attention in front of him, saluting him in the process. "Sven Schäfer, reassigned to your command from the Fallschirmjäger paratroopers. I've been feet first into hell and back again, and now I'm ready to fight on the ground... Sir..."

Disney have already taken my beloved Star Wars (which, by the way, if they screw up I will hate them forever) now if they took mlp and made it bad... Now thats crossing a line and im gonna be mad... Like this mad. (I made a gesture with my hands while I typed that so just imagine that)

Greetings to you, friend! Nice to see another animal enthusiast and Fluttershy fan on the forums. "Never too old for free candy" well said.