GreyScale

I am writing a fanfic about a roleplay...so I think I'll just edit this... Shoot, I can't edit it....Shame....

Ohh, okies, should I remove this then?

Its not my character, its one of the ones for this story One of my friends asked that I make a story, so I am doing that

Thanks! I have needed some advise in the matters of the legs...

Here is the first of the mane characters in this story Name: Checkmate Gender: Male Race: Unicorn Body Color: Black Mane Color: White Cutie Mark: A White Knight from Chess Talent: Strategy and Tactics Occupation: Tactician For The Royal Guards, Technical Rank Being Lieutenant Personality: Very curt and can come off as standoffish to those whom he is not familiar with. To any friends he makes, he is more light, but still tends take things seriously. Not one for pranks or jokes Checkmate prefers intelligent conversation any day. To those who don't know him, he may come off as emotionless. Backstory: Born and raised in Manehatten, Checkmate is certainly no stranger to strife. His parents, although certainly not abusive, were negligent, and Checkmate quickly learned to only trust himself. Although intelligent from a young age, he didn't get his cutie mark until he was about half-way through schooling, defeating his teacher flawlessly in a game of chess. After his schooling, Checkmate moved out on his own, and, without any options, found himself joining the Royal Guards. Although physically weak, he managed to continually show his talent for strategy to his superiors, such as managing to contain a rampaging dragon with minimal damage to the area, and capturing a famed bandit leader, and as such found himself rising through the ranks fairly quickly. Unfortunately, during the changeling invasion of Canterlot, he was framed by a changeling for horrible orders, which led to his superiors transferring him to Ponyville, in a move that angered the once proud pony. According to them, he was transferred so that "He might make a friend or two to help him through his problems." Likes: Quiet time, chess, victory. Dislikes: Loss, those he considers "annoying" (Loud, obnoxious, pranksters, etc.), emotional people.

How would you recommend that I fix the leg/body issue, because to me it does not look right when the bodies are shorter, and I have been drawing ponies for about 2 1/2 months.

You can view all of my drawings here:http://rotgismyotp.deviantart.com (please note that I am not taking requests at the moment)

I tend to lean towards AppleJack or Rarity, but there is no denying that Sobra is most likely the best pony.

Hi! As you can see my name is Grey Scale, I am a female (just in case you get confused) I have several drawings that I've done before, you can view them here: http://rotgismyotp.deviantart.com I am a newbie so I am just going to be finding my way along this site for a while.