Hi everyone!
I rewrote the lyrics to an orchestral song a while back, and I would like some advice on how to move forward. The song is about Luna's role as a dream mentor and is inspired by the episode Sleepless in Ponyville.
Here's the original song (please skip to 0:37). It's from an old Pokemon movie, but the song itself has nothing to do with Pokemon. It's quite different from most songs these days, although maybe that's a good thing? The part that I'll be using lasts from 0:37 to 2:16.
And here's a nice instrumental version of the song. I'll probably use this as a baseline and rework it to better suit the rewritten lyrics.
Here are the original lyrics, followed by the rewritten ones. (The melodies are more or less the same.)
--- Original ---
When daytime turns to night
When the moon shines bright
When you're tucked in tight
And everything's alright
Slip softly to that place
Where secret thoughts run free
There come face to face
With who you want to be, so
Swim across the ocean blue
Fly a rocket to the moon
You can change your life
Or you can change the world
Take a chance, don't be afraid
Life is yours to live
Take a chance
And then the best is yet to come~
Make a wish! It's up to you
Find the strength inside, and watch your dreams come true
You don't need a shooting star
The magic's right there in your heart
Close your eyes, believe, and make a wish...
--- Rewritten, sung by Luna ---
When darkness takes the light
When the day turns to night
When your fears take flight
And nothing is alright
Slip softly to that place
Where secret thoughts run free
There come face to face
With your greatest fear and misery
And take a stand, don't hide away
For if you do it's here to stay
Learn to face your fears
But don't you be afraid
For I'll be there, to guide the way
For you to see the light of day
Face your fears
Until the darkness disappears~
Dream away! I'll be there soon
Find the calm inside, and gaze up to the moon
I'll come down to guide the way
For you to see the light of day
So close your eyes, and sleep, and dream away...
Unfortunately, I'm new to audio editing and music production in general, so I would like some advice on what steps I should take next, like what software would be ideal for composing and editing an orchestral song. Oh, and I'll also need a singer for Luna. The community here seems really friendly, so I look forward to getting to know more about the music side of the fandom, and also about how music production works here.
If everything works out, this will be my first song ever released, so I'm willing to put as much effort into it as possible. (I'll also have the time for that.)
Also, here's a tentative introduction to the song. Is it too verbose? Feel free to comment on it.
As the reformed Luna adjusts back to her role in Equestria, the struggles of the past return to haunt her present. For while the ponies of Equestria thrive under her sister's guiding light, still nopony seeks her help in the lonely night. How can she live up to her role as the ruler of the night, if nopony is there to seek her guidance?
But fortunately, there is a way: for while the ponies might sleep at night, they remain troubled in another world, another place. And it shall be her duty, as ruler of the night, to guide them through...
Thanks for reading!