Supremussy

Thanks for the listen and feedback! Hope to maybe collab later on Thank you very much! Glad you liked it Thanks always for the critique! I still know that I'm pretty bad at writing lyrics and this piece was rushed so that made it even worse haha. I really need some more practice and I'm sure I'll get it soon.

Hey guys! As soon as I saw the announcement on EqD about Rarity Day, I got right down to business, as she is my favorite pony of the mane 6. However, this song was sort of rushed and the mixing, sound, lyrics and vocals aren’t too great, in my opinion. I think I might've even gotten some static in the recording as well. However, I still hope you guys enjoy the song, and Happy Rarity Day! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oxpG_DD335c Lyrics

Beat is Break Ya Neck by Busta Rhymes, like MicTheMicrophones Sonic Rhymeboom

Thanks a lot for the feedback! Glad you liked it

Thank you! Glad you liked it

Thanks a lot man! It's good to know that people think I can rap well, but it's just too bad I can't write the really good stuff like this song. D:

I'm not sure if covers are supposed to be posted on here buutt... This cover goes out to my all time favorite brony rapper! I'm still pretty amateurish at this whole rap thing, so it's not really that great haha, but I hope you guys like it. Always open to constructive criticism, whether it's about my rapping, the sound, or anything you can think of! Lyrics:

Thanks for the feedback! Now that you mention it, my voice does seem a little too loud. That's something I should look out for next time. The timing was a paaain when I first wrote the lyrics haha, but I got it down once I started recording. Yeah, extra reverb would have made it connect with the song's "atmosphere" a little better. Thanks again for the review! /)

When I heard this song on Luna Jax's channel, I just knew I had to write a short rap for it. It's such a beautiful song, and my personal favorite from him. All credit of this song goes to him, I'm just adding a rap for fun. As always, I'm open to constructive criticism! Art is by VividVapor Rap Lyrics (at 2:13) Tell me what you guys think! /)

Thanks a lot for your critique! I'm glad you were straightforward and clear with your advice. The rapping and lyric structure part has really got me thinking. I took a look back on all of the lyrics, and realized that you were absolutely right. I talked in just a simple path and I talked more about the day than Celestia herself. However, the part where you said my voice was stellar and perfect for rap, that just made my entire week. To be honest, I really don't know much about melodies and basslines. I usually just play around on FL Studio and my piano until I find something that sounds cool. But I will probably take a closer look into music structure later on so I can improve. Thanks again for your critique, have a good day!

Hey everypony! So if you keep up with Equestria Daily a lot, you would know that on the 20th, which was the Summer Solstice, was Princess Celestia Day. I decided this sounded like a fun way for me to debut my first official rap. Now being my usual worst critic, I can say this was probably not the best I could do. The lyrics are preetty generic and my recording sounds a bit bad. So, I would appreciate it if you guys here could check it out! I am prepared for the worst reviews and comments, haha. Leave a like, or a dislike, whatever floats your boat! Lyrics: