Mr. Jaguar

Well lets see, I've nearly drowned at least one time, nearly been hit by a car on multiple occassions I think, my bipolar brother attempted to strangle me to death a couple months ago, and I probably many other situations I'm forgetting. I guess all those times I've slipped and hit my head on ice could've killed me but fortunately didn't (not even seriously injured me).

Maybe it's only me, I doubt it however, but either way, this seriously needs to be worked on, as I don't think it's a good thing when someone with an account on this forum cannot contact the administrator. I don't think that provides any benefit to the healthiness of this forum, if anything, it has the opposite effect. So, for the forums sake, I ask that this be worked on. I hope it just me though.

Alright, I hope you really are open to criticism, because here goes: Basically you're problem is proportions, lines, just the way it all looks in general. It looks as if you're using paint program to do art, I personally wouldn't do that, I'm not saying good art can't be done through paint program, but I just wouldn't personally. I have no advice if you want to learn how to do real painting art, but if you want to draw, I do. let's start with easy art, basically like MLP:FIM's artstyle: Use a normal HB pencil, and have a reference to try and replicate as best you can, you don't need to do 100% accuracy, but what you want is to AT LEAST have a hard time seeing the difference between your version and the original. Try this: Draw it over and over until you manage to borderline 100% replicate this reference, till you can barely tell the difference between yours and the original, do that and then post your result, then I guess we'll move on to something harder. And when I say replicate, I mean ever last little insignificant detail, in this case since there's not really any minor details that could be left out and not make too much of a difference.