Loyal Defender

(alright. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

“Hide all you want. This world is nothing now..” (Well shit. No happy ending? ;-;) Meanwhile, Layol continued to sing - All those years I’ve wrassled and wressled, Trying to escape this pathetic vessel This world seems too good at first glance Glad I could change it when I had the cha-a-a-ance Darkness, Chrysalis, it’s so much cooler Equestria will change with its two new rulers Face it Loyal, give in, you’re now a lost cause Now take your final bow, and enjoy your last appla-a-a-a-use! Chrysalis and I will take over from here, Filling this world with darkness and fear This way this world looks just isn’t right We’ll snuff it all out, every single hopeful li-i-i-i-ght! Equestria and all of its towns, We’ll rise up while they crumble down! We’ll make an empire with this land forsaken Wasting no time, letting no chance be taken Free at last, yes, it’s about time (All those years I’ve wrassled and wressled,) Layol Offender’s time to shine (Trying to escape this pathetic vessel) Free at last from my eternal prison (Darkness, Chrysalis, it’s so much cooler) My Queen you’ve made a wise decision (Equestria will change with its two new rulers) Now we can make Equestria ours (Face it Loyal, give in, you’re now a lost cause) We’ll cover the sun, the sky, the moon and stars (Now take your final bow, and enjoy your last applause) Now we’ll make it our very own land, Others will fall while we shall sta-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-nd!

(As long as you have a good ending and apologies planned, he’ll listen. He’s not going to not listen – he just wants revenge.) “I want you and your pathetic little friends to know just how jerkish you all are! Disrespecting a poor innocent Alicorn who wanted to make friends. You don’t DESERVE to be a Princess of Friendship if you treat me this way. You KNEW of my impending doom. You helped me hide. You gave me a place to stay. Now, because you threw me out like everyone else, they shall all pay for their crimes...STARTING WITH YOU!” I felt darkness wanting to consume me….so I let it. I felt sharper wings protruding out my back, my horn growing to a sharper point, teeth sharpening, and body growing...soon I felt all powerful...almighty, even. “Now you AND the world shall feel my pain….the wrath…..OF ROYAL OFFENDER!”

Managing to push free, I got my muzzle out. “LAYOL!” I called out, gaining his attention before he could begin singing again. “….I kindly request that you let me destroy Ponyville.” “Well, aren’t you just a naughty little thing! Very well, if you so choose.” And just like that I was back in town. I flew up high, and felt darkness swirling inside. “CITIZENS OF PONYVILLE,” I roared, causing everyone to look at me as I flew up. “AS OF TODAY, MOST OF YOU ARE BEING ENSLAVED, MOST OF YOU BEING DESTROYED….AND SOME OF YOU, I SHALL MAKE AS IF YOU NEVER EXISTED!” Gaining large amounts of dark magic, I began firing huge beams at everything, destroying houses, neighborhoods, and then aimed at the castle, flying into a window, and slamming my hooves into the ground. “Lost cause, am I, Princess?! “ I sneered. “Well, we’ll see about that when your world’s devoured by darkness...AND BY ME!”

“I can’t do much from here….but I can make them pay attention….” I had to do SOMETHING. I conjured up a giant boulder, and focused on wherever Twilight was. “This is ALSO for being a jerk to me.” And let it fall. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Stahp I'm gonna die of cuteness! x3

Pointing at the ground, a shadowed throne rose up from the ground, covered in dark shadowy magic. “Heh….now...for one other order of business….” He looked at me momentarily, and, I kid you not, began FLOATING up into the air. Free at last, yes, it’s about time Layol Offender’s time to shine Free at last from my eternal prison My Queen you’ve made a wise decisio-o-o-n Now we can make Equestria ours We’ll cover the sun, the moon and stars Now we’ll make it our very own land, Others will fall while we shall sta-a-a-a-nd! Darkness began spewing out, quickly covering the sky in pure blackness, spreading across Ponyville, Canterlot, and many other towns. (Song’s not over yet, just a li’l chance if you wanna say something. Just...make them panic or something, or Twilight notices and wonders what the heck is happening)

(I'll let ya know if I have a specific idea to fit in the role.) “Heh, you have made a wise choice. Now this pathetic land can truly know the wrath of two vengeance seeking rulers!” _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

'proud of her'? You make it sound like you're suddenly acknowledging her work after NOT doing that for years. This is kinda why she turned into Nightmare Moon.

Until the next time, legendary lord of lunar royalty.

(Thank you.) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Finally...it was getting boring in there! Who has freed me from my tomb?!”

(Just a quick note - you just let me handle some of the detailed action, a'ight? Just saying he frees himself from Loyal adds no tension to it) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

(not yet! geez XD) “I trusted them….I believed them….and what did they give me in return? They gave--” “---you lies and deception, treating you innocently one minute, and then backstabbing you the next. It was the--” “--most disrespectful thing they’d ever done. Even after all I did for them, they--” “still thought of you the same way anypony else originally would. Even Celestia mistreated you. Let’s face it--” “with friends like them--” “and allies like you, Chrysalis--” “WHO NEEDS ENEMIES?!” This was it. The final moment. I built up my rage, and let it out with a massive roar of anger, sadness, vengance, and above all else….hatred. I could feel the pain throbbing in my chest, as I screamed and roared in massive pain, as a dark entity began flowing from my body. Dark aura surrounded me, the ground began to shake, the room dimmed...and a pair of white glowing eyes emerged from my chest. "FREEE.....AT.....LAAAAAAAST!" Layol roared, as he pushed himself free, ground cast into small patches of darkness where his hooves perched.

“My family loves me. They never lied, they never cheated...not like my…..friends….they….they all lieed to me….betrayed me….acted like I was….nothing...” No...it was happening...I could feel it... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

“Gifts are one thing….family love’s another.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

(Nuuuuu it doesn't work like that XD) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

“Uh...first off, that was an impulse blast..second, we needed him, remember? To extract his negative energy?” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________