Marathon

I am, not really doing anything so I guess I have time to talk.

Hello, it's been a while since I've last joined an RP and this one looks pretty interesting. I'd like to use my character Lila Fireheart (her link is in the sig). Any problems with her character you don't like I'm willing to change for the RP (though note that her being a Queen and or princess is more for conflict rps like "Equestria Divided" because that adds to her character in those types of RPs).

I do, but if I'm going to have brass sounds I want the to sound and feel real. Those don't really cut close to what I'm looking for. But I am planning on buying the FL orchestral pack either way.

Thank you both commenting, really appreciate it! Though I'd tried adding some to this, the basic "brass" sound that FL studio has sounds very synth-y and not like a real brass instrument so I cut it.

Hey guys, as the title says I'm looking for positive feedback on a small segment I wrote for my OC Lila (thought it would suit her character at bit). Anyway, thanks for any and all feedback Link to the song here: https://pony.fm/tracks/2056-lilas-orchestra Just press the play button~

Lila sighed before nodding in agreement as she went over to an un-burnt couch and laid ontop of it. "Soooo.... Light... sorry for being kind of rude?" she tried to say without it sounding like a question, but failed at. It gave away her uncertainty with them and only made her more nervous.

@, @, @@Gloomfury, @@super2379, Lila's words caught in her throat as one of the new ponies yelled back at her from down stairs. "Whoops....." she whispered before letting out a sigh. Lila turned and exited the room and down the stairs, avoiding looking at the others as she went over to Bayonets side. "I don't trust them, Bay. Something feels off about them." she whispered to Bayonet before she gave her best fake smile to the others.

@, @@super2379, @, Lila waited a few moments before poking her head out and saw Muddle before dragging her, literally, the rest of the way into her room. She shut the door and turned to Muddle. "Why are you bringing a bunch of insane ponies over here!? At least Bay's other half is nice, but them! I don't even know why I'm still here!" Lila yelled, loud enough for the others downstairs to hear a muffled version of it. "For all I know, they're about as murder happy as Torn!" Lila then paused realizing she left Bayonet alone in the kitchen. "Crap, I forgot about Bay...."

@, @@super2379, @, Lila quickly nodded her head so not to anger any of the ponies, and she prayed that Torn wouldn't attempt to take over anytime soon. "O-Okay... um... M-Muddle, could we talk? Privately?" she said before quickly going upstairs to her room. She left the door open for Muddle, but was prepared to block anyone else out.

@@super2379, @, Again Lila took a step back. "B-Baaay!" she called to Bayonet, looking at Light while continuing to backup. The fact that only half of them wouldn't try to hurt her was enough to scare Lila knowing that she wasn't at her full strength and wouldn't be able to attempt to fight them off without passing out again.

@, @@super2379, Lila had heard Muddles voice and rushed out of the kitchen to go meet her. She saw Muddle... and then the others. Something about them felt off to Lila. "M-Muddle... who are they?" she asked as she took a step back. "And why are they here? They're not going to do anything right?"

@@Gloomfury, (Night) Lila stopped Bayonet by placing a hoof over her mouth gently and smiled. "Bay, you don't have to be sorry. I know you mean well. Just, be more careful, please." she then moved her hoof away. "I think i can finally beat Torn thanks to you." Lila searched for words to say but none came so she settled for kissing Bay's forehead.

@@Gloomfury, Lila licked her lips, eying the food before she dug in. Just a few minutes in she had already downed most the meal to satisfy her starving stomach. Lila had forgotten about the orange juice she poured for herself as she finished the last of it followed by a loud burp. "Excuse me, heh." she said with a small laugh. "That was realllly good." Lila then nuzzled Bayonet's cheek before sipping at her juice.

@@Gloomfury, Lila smiled, happy with Bayonets choice for breakfast. "Thanks, Bay." She then kissed her cheek before making her way over to the fridge and took the strawberry jelly out along with the orange juice, pouring herself and Bay a glass. She carried the items over to the table where she waited patiently for the food to be finished.

@@Gloomfury, Lila smiles as Bay kisses her cheek before making herself comfortable. Only after a few minutes she became restless and got out from the bed, almost falling but caught herself. She then exited the room and down the stairs before she found Bay in the kitchen. "So whatcha making?" she asked as she came up next to Bay.

@@Gloomfury, (Haha, I guess everyone was waiting on you then, already got some life back into this!) Lila, after a few minutes, gave up on trying to sleep again and looked up at Bayonet. "Bay," she said as her stomach gave a low growl, "Could you make me something to eat?" Lila's voice didn't show any signs of anger but it was leveled at semi-happy tone instead. For once, she had defeated Torn, although it probably wasn't the best for her life expectancy, she did it. And that made her happy.

"W-Wait.... what.... A-Amber wait! I-I didn't mean...... it........." Amber had already gone up the stairs leaving Flash crushed even more now that he saw her leave him for good that night. He looked around frantically for anything he could do but his over thinking mind came up short and left him sitting where he had been sitting. This was never how it happened in movies. Amber was supposed to feel bad and... his mind froze. That was one less thing in the world he could trust, all those movies were wrong. "How could I be so stupid...." 'Perhaps you should go apologize, and then what? Have her get mad at you more? Make her think you're a bipolar freak? Then you can sit here depressed if that's what you want to do Flash...' he thought to himself as he curled up on the ground.

@@The-Master, Flash continued to glare at Amber as he came closer to her. He then spoke in a low and harsh voice that showed his strain to keep himself from bursting into tears. "You get one chance to make it up. You better make it bucking worth it." he hated that word, buck. It always had a sour taste to it, but it felt appropriate for this situation. "And to think I had a shot at a relationship..." the words left his mouth with the intention to hurt Amber. He hated doing that too, but again it felt appropriate. He then waited to see what Amber would do, or if she needed time to come up with something worth his while.

Flash sat on the couch alone, crushed, confused, worried, heartbroken and mad, all at once. He knew he shouldn't have came back down those stairs. He should have known they would just hurt him again, and he mentally kicked himself for being so stupid. He should have just turtled like he always did, but he decided to get himself hurt instead. The longer he sat there the more angry he felt. Not at Amber, but himself. Why, of all times was he so careless today. Still, that didn't alleviate the fact Amber had screwed with him when he honestly thought he may have found a nice mare. @@The-Master, Flash got up from the couch, making sure to put his stuff away this time and hide it before he marched up the stairs, making it very clear that he wasn't happy. He soon found Amber and glared daggers at her. Though, he didn't say anything. THat was the whole point of going to find her was to give her a piece of his mind. But again, nothing came, so he settled with waiting for her to notice him in his rage.

@@The-Master, Flash listened carefully to Amber's words, his self confidnece going down as she attempted to put him down gently. He only nodded, not making eye contact with her as he processed everything she said. By the time she had trailed off Flash wasn't really paying attention anyway and was caught off guard from the kiss. His eyes were wide with surprise as he was trying to figure out what was happening. When Amber pulled away he still sat there for a few seconds still not sure what had happened. After a few seconds Flash recollected himself as he now looked at Amber confused. "W-What was that for.....?"

Flash had been too busy writing music that he didn't even notice Amber kiss Rhythm. He looked up apon hearing her voice and offered her a bright smile, but it faded as he looked passed her and saw the amount of food Rhythm had collected on her plate before exchanging a worried look at Amber. Flash opened his mouth to say something but figured it would be best to not say anything. Instead he again had pressed himself close to Amber, setting his laptop at his side. Flash played with the idea of nibbling on her ear again as he thought of something to say. "I think I can handdle it." He then leaned up toward her ear, aiming on nibbling the tip of it. He reached it and froze. She had said to leave her ears a lone so he quickly had to settle on something else. "You're really pretty... I..... I kind of like you...." *...what did I just say...?* Flash thought as he backed up a few inches, worried about the kind of reaction he was going to get from Amber. *Take it back! What are you doing!?* Flash retreated back more as he yelled at himself for being upfront with Amber.

Flash had blushed while Amber trotted over to Rhythm to see what was up, smiling like an idiot. He looked around to see if anyone else had noticed but he let out a sigh when he thought no one had. Flash watched the two mares talk, focusing on Amber most the time. He also really wanted more punch.... but they were there, he was here and he didn't want to make it seem like he was eves dropping on them. so he sat there with his laptop and created a blank song and began to mess around with it a bit.

@@The-Master, @, Flash nodded and hid his self pity as Amber went to sit with Rhythm, who had blurted out she wanted to do a collab before running off to get punch. It seemed odd to him though he didn't get much off it because of his lack of social skills. He simply put it off as her being nervous all of the sudden simply because that's what he would do occasionally if he got nervous. He looked at Amber with a confused expression. "That was...... odd. She doesn't seem like the type to get nervous like that..." he said quietly, watching Rhythm. "Do you think she'll be okay? She didn't even take our cups...." Flash looked some-what disappointingly at his empty cup now longing for more punch... and Amber....

Flash continued to occasionly sip his punch until he had emptied the glass and set down on the coffee table. He then made himself more comfortable as Amber relaxed and pressed even closer to her, his head practically resting on her shoulder as he listened to the song. Again he lightly nodded along with the beat and really smiling for the first time that day. "That was really good." Flash whispered to Amber as the song ended, toying with the dangerous thought of nibbling on her ear, but restrained himself for the time being.

@, @@The-Master, Flash smiled as the song started and he slowly got into the rhythm of it, lightly nodding his head along with the beats. At first it had sounded off to him before it grew and became something he was actually enjoying. Once the song had finished did he notice that Amber had leaned forward. "Yeah, I liked that one a lot. Perhaps you could play it again some time?" he said as he got comfortable against Amber again. (Bleh, morning post)