Write Worthy (my OC)

[Write-Worthy 7]

This is my OC Write Worthy I have both a humanized and pony version of her, like usual, taken in multiple shots. Tell me what cha think. Oh, and I would like to apologize in advance for the poor quality, I had to take these from my phone

 

Pony:

 

 

 

Human:

 

[Dipper 42]

That's great! Keep up the work

[Write-Worthy 7]

That's great! Keep up the work

Thank you very much, I appreciate it

[Foxx 258]

Alright, since I like to critique(be pessimistic)I will.

 

So first thing's first, the pony version.

 

Overall, Write Worthy's general anatomy is fairly well done. There a few minor hiccups, though which I will now elaborate on. Firstly her stomach and back aren't very curved, giving the belly a flat, mechanical look, almost like that of a robot The neck seems a little short and fat to me(Wow, I just described Mario ). The muzzle seems a little bit droopy and the eyes are somewhat derped, as in looking off in different directions. The shading is accurately placed, which is great, but although I know that it hurts your hand, I think you could've blended it just scooch more.

 

Human Version

 

Okey dokey lokey, first up, it seems that the eyes are way to far up on the head. I don't think I've met anyone who can make their mouths into that small of a perfect circle. The hand anatomy is near perfect, so kudos on that. The right arn seems a little bent to me and the arms in general are verg thin. Also the breasts(stop laughing) look larger than the waist. She looks like she may topple over if she got ou of that chair.

 

Thank you for taking the time to read my terrible, poorly written critique and remember to never lose that creative spark. Excuse the typos, this was written on my phone.

Edited July 5, 2014 by Foxx