Anypony willing to give me some advice?

[Rene 41]

Uh, so, hi! Well, what I wanted to ask is if anypony would be willing to read my crossover, Ponies Will Save the Clans, on wattpad and give me some advice. Ony part one is up, though I'm done with part two and working on part three. I write on my iphone so I have to retype everything onto the computer before updating. Helps with spelling mistakes though! Anyway, Just want some feedback from any helpful ponies out there. Thanks!

[mars 4,862]

Ponies will Save the Clans... That sounds like a crossover between ponies and the book series Warriors. I hope you can find someone to give you feedback.

[Standard User 2,127]

What is the crossover? MLPxWhat? I ask because I love reviewing, but crossovers (for me, anyway) require a bit of knowledge of both universes used in the story.

[Rene 41]

It is MLPxWarriors, Destiny. I hope that I can too.

[Wind Song 24]

I like both ponies and Warriors, and a I'm a writer. I'd be happy to read it and give you some advice.

[Rene 41]

Thanks! Umm... How should I direct you to it?

[Wind Song 24]

No problem. ^-^

I searched the title on Wattpad and I think I found it.

[Rene 41]

Thanks a lot!!! I'm gonna start putting the second part on the computer too.

[Wind Song 24]

Okay! I'll get started on it.

Edited July 8, 2014 by Wind Song