I made another OC! Thoughts?

[Midnight Starfall 179]

Hello everypony!

 

Before I make a character sheet for my second OC, I'd like your thoughts on her!

 

 

Name: Destiny Fighter

 

Age: 19/Mare

 

Gender: Female

 

Species: Earth Pony

 

Cutie Mark: A book with a sword in it. It symbolizes her fighting spirit and her special ability to see her friend's destinies when the time comes.

 

Personality: Destiny is an introvert who doesn't talk to anypony unless they talk to her first and they're not in a large crowd. She dislikes talking to ponies in a large crowd. She is a hardy pony who won't cry for anything and won't sugarcoat what she says. She exerts confidence and tries to stay positive despite her hardy manner. She's a solemn pony and often takes things too seriously.

 

Backstory: Destiny has a special ability to dream about the destinies of people close to her when the time comes. She still doesn't know and realize why she gets sudden feelings of deja vu when something happens to her or her friends.

 

Destiny was born in Appaloosa but her family moved to Ponyville for a change of scenery and to work different jobs. Her two Earth pony parents, Freedom Fighter and Harmony Fighter, were caring parents but they were always busy running a small store in in the outskirts of Ponyville, selling weapons to travelers. It didn't matter to Destiny though, since she was a pretty independent pony.
Destiny never cared about her schoolwork or her grades. The only thing she cared about was her self-defense classes she took after school. She trained hard, learning defensive and offensive moves in case she got into any trouble.

 

 Destiny was a popular pony in school but never even wanted to be. Everypony always said hi to her and always wanted to talk. She always walked in the shadows of the halls and sat in the back, hoping nopony would notice. The only pony she would talk to was Skyla Starfall, her best pony friend. She wasn't as hardy as Destiny, but Destiny loved her to pieces. Skyla was always so nice to her, despite Destiny being a hardy, solemn pony.

 

Destiny earned her cutie mark one day in self-defense class. She was battling one of her classmates, for practice and for fun. She didn't realize she dreamt she was going to kick him in the face last night. She kicked him in the face and he fell over. She got the sudden feeling of deja vu and quit the practice match. She wondered why she got the feeling, since she had never kicked him in the face before. She quickly grabbed a notebook from her saddlebag nearby and scribbled down the feeling. She decided to write down the feeling whenever she experienced deja vu again. She has been experiencing it all her life, she had to figure out what it was. Her cutie mark appeared as she was writing, and she didn't notice until after class. She didn't really care it was there when she found out, it didn't concern her.

 

Today, she carries around her notebook in her saddlebag everywhere she goes. She still records the deja vu feelings and wonders why they come and go, not realizing she dreams about events to come.

 

 

Thanks in advance!

Anypony have any thoughts on her?

Edited July 13, 2014 by Midnight Starfall