NyxTheShield - Night Stars [Original][Instrumenta]

[NyxTheShield 91]

I wrote a poem inspired by Luna, about how i think she felt after being freed from her banishment. Alone at her night, but not feeling alone, because the immensity of the beauty that laid above her is enough comfort. The cold warm of her night suffices. Under her, everypony is safe. This instrumental piece came after this thoughts, i hope you like it.

 

Night Stars

 

Gazing at the immensity

of the night sky

and the beauty of the stars 

that lies above me

is enough gratification

and reward for my soul

after one thousand years

of solitude

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L2B5uWDPZxI

[NyxTheShield 91]

 Ehm  thank? meeeeeeh i guess 

[Rainbow-Crash 101]

ohh man, so relaxing. This is what i needed 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ahhhhh....soooo relaxing. 

 

You did an excellent job portraying this piece. 

 

The chorus you put on that acoustic guitar just really sets that mysterious and relaxing tone. Digging it! 

 

Although I do have to say...you could've lowered the volume of that vocalizing voice, and maybe add some reverb to it to give it a little bit more space. Also, the volume of the pads could've been a little higher. 

 

As far as the chord progression itself, it fit perfectly with the mood!

 

All in all, it was a really enjoyable piece!

 

9.5/10