Plume 922 October 30, 2014 Share October 30, 2014 Hey! So, a while back, I made a post featuring Riptide (I have settled on that name, but thanks to all who suggested!) and I now am looking for some feedback about his design before I properly make him an OC (which I will probably do). Here he is! Thanks! 4 Jazz Sonata ○ Remix Blitz ○ Treble Whistler ○ Pastel Lullaby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 30, 2014 Share October 30, 2014 @@MiniKirby123, Well, I presume that this OC is connected to the sea/ocean, so I love the colour scheme you picked out. The mane and tail style vaguely resemble waves, so there's another perk. Maybe we could chat each other up sometime and figure out explanations for the cutie mark, the markings around his rear leg, and the shell necklace. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plume 922 October 30, 2014 Author Share October 30, 2014 @@Rainbow Eclipse, Sounds good! His cutie mark I was supposed to represent surfing, but I don't think that came across very well I'M SORRY WHAT HAVE I DONE Jazz Sonata ○ Remix Blitz ○ Treble Whistler ○ Pastel Lullaby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 30, 2014 Share October 30, 2014 @@MiniKirby123, Maybe he has a special connection with the waters? ...Yeah, got nothing better. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castle_Cross 331 October 30, 2014 Share October 30, 2014 Love it!! I wish I could draw that awesome!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonsponies 101 October 31, 2014 Share October 31, 2014 well personally i always feel like accesories should be kept to a minimum, the necklace is alright but the sell tied to it could go a tad smaller because that's the first thing that cught my eye. usually the face should be the first thing the viewer looks at. then i do enjoy the small change in color on his back leg but jus the same i would make it less in sight, perhaps make the colors a bit more pale/light in order to make it look more on the pony. the hair and tail both look good, love the way the hair moves over the eye, not to mention the color scheme one him ^^ all in all i'd say great job! i've been drawing for 3 years now practicing dragons and poniesi'd love it if you could check out my Deviantart or Tumblr. i also sell commissions right here on MLPForums, check it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plume 922 October 31, 2014 Author Share October 31, 2014 @, Cool! Will do :L I just didn't want to include too many colours in his colour scheme, so I ripped em straight out of his hair. but now I see that that may not have been wise ^^ Jazz Sonata ○ Remix Blitz ○ Treble Whistler ○ Pastel Lullaby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IJoinedForPonies 126 October 31, 2014 Share October 31, 2014 At least you can draw your OC, I can't draw if my life depended on it! ^^ He looks pretty good though, only error in his design is his cutie mark. The sun in the wave could be shaped better. :-) I made an OC! I'm always looking for feedback on her, please have a look and tell me what you think! ^^ http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/essence-r7367 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DormantAccount 308 October 31, 2014 Share October 31, 2014 The overall style is pretty nice, but the mane colors are just slightly too bright, but I tend to think a lot of them are a bit bright. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plume 922 November 1, 2014 Author Share November 1, 2014 @@IJoinedForPonies, Yep! Will round out sun @@DexterousWings, Maybe, but when I tried to desaturate, his entire design looked super washed out Jazz Sonata ○ Remix Blitz ○ Treble Whistler ○ Pastel Lullaby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverwisp the Bard 2,354 November 1, 2014 Share November 1, 2014 Very cool design and excelent colourscheme. Most of the changes I'd consider have already been mentioned (make the shell a bit smaller, desaturate the mane & tail just a little bit). Also, I'd change the colour of the thong to brown of maybe blue. Maybe get rid of the sunbeams on the cutiemark. -Take care that allthe strands in the Mane & tail actually rech the body -the tail should attach to the body at a slightly higher angle -is the mouth supposed to be coloured black? Hope some of it helped. My Art Thread, updated (almost) daily Tomorrow will take us away, far from home No one will ever know our names But the bard songs will remain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plume 922 November 1, 2014 Author Share November 1, 2014 @@Silverwisp the Bard, Oh yep! The mouth was just black cause I wanted it to stand out while I was drawing him. WILL FIX NOW! Also, thanks for the colour suggestion for the necklace thing. I couldn't find a good one ^^ I reckon the brown rocks it and makes it less obvious and jarring. THANKS MAN! I think it looks a little better now with all your help! Thanks muchly! 2 Jazz Sonata ○ Remix Blitz ○ Treble Whistler ○ Pastel Lullaby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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