private The Abandoned

[Mephala 2,633]

Greenery looked at all the gore, sufficiently grossed out.

"This is so wrong," he muttered, looking around at the others. "Why would anypony want to do this?"

[Croaks 251]

The Creator viewed the subjects disappointingly.

*Sigh* So uncoordinated, he thought, I'll give them their first mental test once they're done with this.

[I used to be a stranger 7,994]

Celestia above, what my eyes have seen!

He glanced around at the remnant of the room, several other ponies standing in various locations and in various others, what had been lizards.

"Right." began Peaceable in a louder voice, drawing upon his former experience of rallying. "We must all be the subjects that "The Creator" had mentioned." he said, earning the attention of a few others.

[Mephala 2,633]

Greenery nodded. "I'm not sure what he plans on doing with us, but it's obviously not good if that was our welcoming."

He tried to hide his shakiness by boldly stepping forwards. 'We need to think about our next move."

[biloh 33]

"To live or die, which option do you want?" Revolver asked Greenery as he took his knife out of one of the lizards' head. "If you want I can end your life as well; if you want to live here you better look after yourself" he said to the horrified pony.

 

Revolver searched the bodies of the lizards just to find that they had an electric device attached to their skin.This device shocks them and makes them aggressive. Revolver then ripped the device out of one of the lizards' skin. "Here, this is why they want to kill us, this pony knows what he is doing"

 

Revolver then walked towards Lovely, he used his magic to give her the metallic broom, "Here you go, you better start putting your things together or will end up dead or hurt, like that Alicorn" he said to the disgusted unicorn. "If you want to stay alive stay with me, we unicorns should stay together, I don't trust any of those pegasi."

[MrMinimii 0]

"We must all be the subjects that "The Creator" had mentioned." A pony spoke up, letting his leader side surface as he calmed down the ponies.

Night ignored the ponies as they conversed, in favor of checking on his ammo. 10 bullets left He slid the magazine and put the gun away.

"If you want to stay alive stay with me, we unicorns should stay together, I don't trust any of those pegasi."

Funny, he scoffed to himself, We don't trust you either.

He swiped his eyes across the room to find ponies talking to each other to try to come to some sort of solution to the problem at hoof.

Edited April 7, 2012 by MrMinimii

[Shankveld 4,950]

Lovely listened to Peaceable's voice boom through the room, he really knew how to control chaos.

"But why...?" Lovely asked hopelessly, she knew her question had no answering partner.

Lovely began to stroke her golden mane.

Lovely watched the light grey unicorn frighten and threaten Greenery.

How uncalled for, it's like he enjoys tormenting him. Not all of us are 'rough-tough' ponies like him.

Lovely watched the grey pony (Revolver) explain the shock-caller attached to the lizards.

Where could this 'Creator' character get such advanced technology?

"Here you go, you better start putting your things together or will end up dead or hurt, like that Alicorn," The grey unicorn said as he returned Lovely's weapon.

Lovely smiled, how thoughtful.

"If you want to stay alive stay with me, we unicorns should stay together, I don't trust any of those pegasi," the grey unicorn continued.

Lovely's jaw-dropped, "don't you think it'd just be better if we all work together? We need to be civilized here."

 

 

OCC

(I already released Dj)

Edited April 6, 2012 by Shankveld

[biloh 33]

"If I've ever learned something in life is to trust no pegasi, don't think these are your friends, they might be accomplices of the tan pony. if you want to be alright listen to what I say" the gray tall pony said, looking at the unicorn's light blue eyes. "My name is Sgt. Revolver from the unicorn army. These ponies can be your friends now, but once in a situation like this they can be your worst enemy, you can follow my advice or suffer the consequences" he advised.

Revolver wanted to help Lovely, he saw in her what his uncle used to tell him about his mother. He had not helped any other pony in years.

[Croaks 251]

The Creator heard Revolver talking, and laughed!

He spoke into the microphone and said, "HAH! Trust me, Seargent Revolver, the pegasi are NOT informants or spies, or whatever nonsense you assume."

He turned off the microphone.

He then said to the computer, "Computer, give them the elevators."

Two tubes landed from the subjects' ceiling down to the floor. They were clear. The creator sent them another projection saying, "These two pipes are elevators. If you take the one on the right, you'll go straight to the top floor where you'll confront me. If you take the one on the left, you continue to the next level."

Edited April 7, 2012 by Croaks

[Guest]

DJ Fell through the door

Thanks for that, He said with a smile

He looked around and say lots of ponys and bodys

Most of them had weaponry, Alot better than his flare gun and knife. He thanked the pony that help him once again before trying to find out what was going on

[Aureity 3,055]

Ampyrion gave an awkward cough as he turned to the rest of the ponies. "Well of course we're going to try to get out of this mess as quickly as possible, correct? I say we take the one on the right. Although..." he glanced at the group. Most of them seemed to be carrying knives or other useless equipment. "We might have a problem if he has a group of minions with him."

[Guest]

DJ Listened to the plan

He had no idea what was going on, But he knew these ponys had an plan

So he just nodded and looked for weapons

[Coconeru 355]

"Introductions later" said coconeru to the wincing alicorn.

 

"Do you know what's happen-" His question was cut off by the piercing sound of projectile hitting a wall.

"Did you hear that?" His ears pricked up as he scanned the room, "I thank it came from over there"

 

Coconeru nodded and followed the crippled black alicorn to the source of the sound.

 

When they arrived at the door, coconeru saw a gorgeous slender pink unicorn with a blonde mane, not so graciously buck down a steel door. To reveal a white pony inside.

 

Coconeru had been a bit shaken up by the fight not able to focus on the conversation of the other ponies. It was like conducting a horridly skilled orchestra with no sense of rhythm. The thought left a bad taste in his mouth. The conversaion continued when amongst the phased out speaking he suddenly heard.

 

"Computer, give them the elevators."

Two tubes landed from the subjects' ceiling down to the floor. They were clear. The creator sent them another projection saying, "These two pipes are elevators. If you take the one on the right, you'll go straight to the top floor where you'll confront me. If you take the one on the left, you continue to the next level.

 

Coconeru had gathered himself into cognitive thought again.

 

"Well everypony I suppose since we are all in this together, I suppose formal introductions are in order. The names Coconeru friends call me Neru." waving his hoof through his unkempt white mane. "Last I remember I was scheduled to play at the Grand Galloping Gala." He sighed to himself. "What would this lunatic want with a Musician?..."

 

he turned to the black Alicorns attention, "you need medical attention", looking back to the rest of the crowd he asked "are any of you familiar with triage?"

Edited April 7, 2012 by Coconeru

[Shankveld 4,950]

"If I've ever learned something in life is to trust no pegasi, don't think these are your friends, they might be accomplices of the tan pony. if you want to be alright listen to what I say. My name is Sgt. Revolver from the unicorn army. These ponies can be your friends now, but once in a situation like this they can be your worst enemy, you can follow my advice or suffer the consequences." Lovely blushed, "I appreciate the effort you're taking to look after me, I suppose I could use a friend. I'm not very good at defending myself, as you've probably noticed," Lovely laughed feeling a little embarrassed.

 

Another message from the Creator was broadcasted to the ponies as two tubes fell to the floor. Lovely felt fear in the pit of her stomach start to bubble up. Clearly the right tube was desirable, she wanted to be done with this as soon as possible but. Lovely glanced down towards her weapon. There is something to be said for the power of patience, anyway how could she even trust the sick colt that was putting them through all this to keep his word.

 

"Just a little problem," Lovely held up her metal broom, using her magic, to show Ampyrion.

 

Lovely heard a regal tan pony begin to talk, he had been pretty quiet so far, but Lovely remembered seeing him help the injured Alicorn.

"My name is Lovely," Lovely held out her hoof to Coconeru as a sign of friendship, "What would this lunatic want with any of us? He's clearly very disturbed in the head."

Lovely turned to the tubes, "now. It seems we have a decision on our hooves." She gulped.

[MrMinimii 0]

"you need medical attention" The tan pony pointed out to Night.

"Oh, okay," he bowed to the tan pony, then turned to his own shoulder, "I suppose you're right. Thank you for your assistance so far Neru."

Two glass tubes had appeared in the middle of the room, one on the left, one on the right. The former offered a chance to explore the ship further, the latter presented an opportunity to face the leader of the entire situation himself.

"I believe we should look at this logically," Night offered to the group, "We are under-prepared, under-trained, and still not familiar with each other enough to properly form a plan of action and carry it out efficiently."

Night walked between the two tubes. He pointed to the one that took them down a floor, "This offers more supplies, a chance to better understand each other, and a chance to build an effective strategy." He pointed to the one on the right, "This offers a chance to get out of here quickly and never have to talk about this, or to each other, again. Although we could spend all day training in this room, we would never truly form a plan, and we still don't have enough supplies to be a threat to any pony."

He walked in front of the left tube that lead to the second level, "I'm going in here, whether you all decide to join me or not."

Edited April 7, 2012 by MrMinimii

[Croaks 251]

"Not so fast," The Creator said through the mic, "If you're going somewhere you have to go all together."

[I used to be a stranger 7,994]

*If you're going somewhere you have to go all together.*

"A city that stands divided will never stand at all. We must work together." stated Peaceable. He took a few steps towards the tubes.

"Since," he looked up at the darkened ceiling, assuming the forboding source of the Creator's voice was somewhere in that direction. "this appears to be some sort of challenge course, obviously if recent past was a combative test, this must be some kind of logic puzzle. Taking what we've- well, I've been through in the past few minutes, I seriously doubt either of these tubes actually leads to any directly true objective. For all we know, the one on the left actually goes sideways into an incinerator and the one on the right goes downwards- which again, for all we know, might actually be the correct direction."

[Coconeru 355]

"My name is Lovely,"

 

"Pleased to make your acquaintance miss Lovely" he took Lovely's hoof bowing down kissing it.

 

The black unicorn began to explain his views on the tubes.

 

"Your plan seems reasonably logical in the chance that this crazy pony is even telling the truth about the tubes. All in all I'll agree with idea of the left tube, If he really IS telling the truth he won't be alone that's for sure. Now then what do I call you?" Coconeru gestured back toward the black Alicorn.

 

suddenly everypony heard a message from the intercoms hanging on the side of the walls.

"Not so fast," The Creator said through the mic, "If you're going somewhere you have to go all together."

 

"Shall we take a vote then? Staying here won't help us at all." Coconeru said.

 

 

"A city that stands divided will never stand at all. We must work together."

 

Coconeru turned to the attention of a seasoned Unicorn with a white coat, agreeing with the statement.

Edited April 7, 2012 by Coconeru

[Guest]

"Not so fast," The Creator said through the mic, "If you're going somewhere you have to go all together."

DJ still had no idea what was happining, But he noticed 2 tubes. He decided that he would follow the pony that helped him out

Hey Im DJ, I heard you name was lovely? Thanks for helping me out of that room

Edited April 7, 2012 by Guest

[MrMinimii 0]

"My name is Nighttime Bliss, but you can call me Night," he answered the tan pony.

"Now, Peaceable, is it?" He turned to the white unicorn, "We have no other choice but to trust him. He could be lying about every single part of this, and we'll never know. However, he does control the game board, and we are nothing but players to his sick twisted game. It is an equal chance that the other tube could send us to an incinerator. For the time being though, we must trust his word and believe what he says."

[biloh 33]

"I appreciate the effort you're taking to look after me, I suppose I could use a friend. I'm not very good at defending myself, as you've probably noticed," Revolver nodded, he knew he could help the young unicorn since he believed she would not able to defend herself.

 

"HAH! Trust me, Sargent Revolver, the pegasi are NOT informants or spies, or whatever nonsense you assume."

 

How did he hear me talk to this unicorn? I wasn't talking loud enough, he must have some kind of microphones on our uniforms. No informants inside? This 'creator' thinks I was born yesterday, he is not going to put himself in a risky situation.

 

Revolver looked for a microphone around his collar, there it was. He took his chef uniform off, revealing his chest, hardened by life. "He is listening to us, he has wired our clothing" he yelled.

 

Revolver saw the ponies speak as he planned what to do. He knew that the best thing for the group was to become stronger as the creator wouldn't allow the ponies to kill him with no effort whatsoever.

 

"My name is Sgt. Revolver from the unicorn army, and agree with the stuck up pony here. We should not face the freak right away, lets kill all of his stupid creatures first, and teach him a lesson, if he is the stupid pony he claims to be." he told the ponies.

[Shankveld 4,950]

Lovely listened openly to what Night had to say, he had brought-up a good point. We were extremely under prepared. Going up the tube that lead to the Creator was like running blindly into a cave, anything could be waiting for us, most likely death.

 

Lovely's ears perked-up as Peaceable spoke. "Now, I don't think he'd go and kill us off too quickly," Lovely replied, "that wouldn't be any fun. And anyone who is demented enough to go through all this, obviously wants something fun to play with. Like a dog that chases a rabbit." Lovely paused for a second and flipped her blond mane back, "but you do have a point, what reason does he have to tell us the truth, or help us in anyway? We're just his toys. The rabbits."

 

Lovely's face turned bright red as Coconeru kissed her hoof. Such a gentlecolt.

Lovely nodded her head in agreement with Coconeru and Peaceable, "wherever we go. We need to stick together. Turning on each other is probably what he wants. I vote for the left tube."

 

Lovely turned to DJ, "well I couldn't just leave you trapped in there," Lovely covered her mouth with her hoof as she giggled cutely. "What's your name?" Lovely held out her hoof to make the white pegasus' acquittance. "I know this is probably confusing, you woke up a little later in the game than the rest of us, but don't worry, we've got some pretty strong leaders here."

 

Lovely turned her attention to Sgt. Revolver, "microphones?" Lovely began to tug at her uniform, the same uniform that had her name embroider on it. It was fairly tight to her body and difficult to get off, Lovely yanked repetitively at the collars and end of her jumpsuit. It was futile. It would need to be cut off.

[Guest]

"Game...? " Replyed DJ, "Its DJ by the way"

DJ confusedly looked around, And just nodded.

"So whaats up with all the tubes?

[Croaks 251]

The Creator decided that the survivors were going at a steady pace.

He heard Sgt. Revolver's paranoid rants and said through the mic one more time, "Revolver, let me assure you. There is nopony else helping me. If there was, you wouldn't be here in the first place. And, there is no microphone on your uniform. Every single room in the facility has microphones in it. Hidden microphones. I recommend you don't take your uniform off either. It's reinforced, and doubles as armor."

He then turned his attention to the pink unicorn and said, "Lovely, is it? Well, this isn't a sick, twisted game. It's a sophisticated, test. That's all I have to say."

[biloh 33]

"I don't need your bucking armour, I know what I saw." Revolver said while looking at the image of the tan pony. He then used his hind legs to throw the uniform against the wall. He then ran up to Lovely and broke her collar, freeing the pink unicorn from the 'wired' uniform.