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Tom Snyder

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I've been wondering if this looks good for Benevolent Heart:

 

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This is the design i used in the pony maker, The heart i found while searching for a fitting image was what is on her flank. But what i need to know is, do you guys think

this style fits her?

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The cutie mark is a slightly different shade from her mane. Dunno if this is intentional, but it's something I'd change.

 

Also, the horn and legs are long, like she's really supposed to be an alicorn. Again, I have no idea if this is intentional.

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I agree with the colour choices. Her legs seem a little long though, not sure how you wanted that!


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I was trying to to remember the ponies height, but i guess i goofed. Thanks for letting me know.


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Okay, i've lessened her height and made her horn shorter. i faded the cutie mark to make it match(i hope), i lost the generator code, so i had to guess at the hues i used. Came out brighter, but still the same colors used. so, is this better?

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I like her better! She's really cute.

Thank you, that means a lot.

Her cutie mark represents her affinity with the lower class that the Aristocratic ponies look down upon, this feels like an injustice to her, so benevolent gives what ever help she can. She wasn't always like this, she felt the same way her parents did, but after observing them, she felt bad for them, and after meeting Star Shine, improves on her views.

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//// My DA: (OC requests available) ////

 

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