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Lightning stood, and thought for himself The murder was committed with a knife... Not just a standard knife, a knife used by unicorns, in the unicorn platoon... Lightnings eyes widened ​Could we have a traitor among our ranks? Thought Lightning with a frown. He looked up, and saw Colonel Sky knight landing next to him. Lightning smiled "Ah, my must trusted comrade. Glad that you showed up!" Exclaimed Lightning with a confident grin

"Hello sir, I see you have discovered the killing today." I walk along side Lightning. "I believe the weapon used to kill this pony was of the Unicorn Military branch. Should we tell the local guard about this or do we contact the Unicorn Royal Guard?" This seems fishy almost like it was staged to get a reaction out of us. I soundly await General Lightnings orders along with the other Soldiers with him.

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Cake?... I don't have time for cake!? There's a freaking murder and I'm wanting cake?! Whats wrong with me?... He shook his head and groaned "Alright something isn't right here and I need to find out what." Determined now he headed for the main square. Going to get to the bottom of either the murder or the strange thoughts that entered his head 

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"Hello sir, I see you have discovered the killing today." I walk along side Lightning. "I believe the weapon used to kill this pony was of the Unicorn Military branch. Should we tell the local guard about this or do we contact the Unicorn Royal Guard?" This seems fishy almost like it was staged to get a reaction out of us. I soundly await General Lightnings orders along with the other Soldiers with him.

 

 

Cake?... I don't have time for cake!? There's a freaking murder and I'm wanting cake?! Whats wrong with me?... He shook his head and groaned "Alright something isn't right here and I need to find out what." Determined now he headed for the main square. Going to get to the bottom of either the murder or the strange thoughts that entered his head 

 

Lightning thought about this mess It's either a traitor, or a thief who is trying to frame the unicorn guard for murder Thought lightning. He then saw Crimson quill walking towards the scene Could it be him? Nah he couldn't have gotten the knife to kill her... I probably need to apologize to him too Lightning opened his eyes "We need to secure this area were the murder was committed". Shouted Lightning with authority in his voice "Sky knight, you will report this crime along with the evidence, to the general of the unicorn legion. If they don't let you in, show them this" Said Lightning while giving her his signature seal, that resembled a spear with a lightning bolt through it "This seal shows them, that you are sent by me" Said Lightning. He then walked towards Crimson quill. "Excuse me sir, may i have a word with you?" Asked Lightning as politely as he could

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"Excuse me sir, may i have a word with you?" Asked Lightning as politely as he could

 

"Oh um yes..." ​Look who it is, my rude solider friend, wonder what he has to do with this...

"But what is it you need, hasn't a murder transpired? Wouldn't that concern your time rather then some random unknown pony?" Well if nothing else maybe he knows about the strange thoughts... doubt it but maybe.  

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Lightning thought about this mess It's either a traitor, or a thief who is trying to frame the unicorn guard for murder Thought lightning. He then saw Crimson quill walking towards the scene Could it be him? Nah he couldn't have gotten the knife to kill her... I probably need to apologize to him too Lightning opened his eyes "We need to secure this area were the murder was committed". Shouted Lightning with authority in his voice "Sky knight, you will report this crime along with the evidence, to the general of the unicorn legion. If they don't let you in, show them this" Said Lightning while giving her his signature seal, that resembled a spear with a lightning bolt through it "This seal shows them, that you are sent by me" Said Lightning. He then walked towards Crimson quill. "Excuse me sir, may i have a word with you?" Asked Lightning as politely as he could

"Yes sir." I salute to General Lightning and begin my solo journey to the Unicorn Barracks. So I am looking for a General Kivil of the Unicorn Guard. I arrive at the Unicorn Guard Camp and begin scouting around for General Kivil. I start asking Unicorn Guards for Kivils where a bouts and they tell me she went on a mission the last they saw of her. I wounder what "mission" she's on and if it has relation to the recent public killings. I wait at Kivil's Office in hopes she might return soon but minutes turned into hours as I wait.

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"Oh um yes..." ​Look who it is, my rude solider friend, wonder what he has to do with this...

"But what is it you need, hasn't a murder transpired? Wouldn't that concern your time rather then some random unknown pony?" Well if nothing else maybe he knows about the strange thoughts... doubt it but maybe. 

 

"excellent!" Answered Lightning, he cleared his throat "I must apologize for ditching you back at the bar, i got a mission from the king. Which turned into a false alarm.". 'he looked Crimson in the eye "I also didn't trust you one bit, i bet you noticed that as well, but i have realized my mistake, so is there anything i can do for you to make up my mistake?" Asked Lightning

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"excellent!" Answered Lightning, he cleared his throat "I must apologize for ditching you back at the bar, i got a mission from the king. Which turned into a false alarm.". 'he looked Crimson in the eye "I also didn't trust you one bit, i bet you noticed that as well, but i have realized my mistake, so is there anything i can do for you to make up my mistake?" Asked Lightning

"Make up for it?... Well no harm no foul really. But I must ask you. Do your citizens find that they get strange a bizarre thoughts out of no where? I for one am getting thoughts about a certain purple unicorn and how he's a murderer... but it just doesn't make sense." 

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"Make up for it?... Well no harm no foul really. But I must ask you. Do your citizens find that they get strange a bizarre thoughts out of no where? I for one am getting thoughts about a certain purple unicorn and how he's a murderer... but it just doesn't make sense." 

 

Lightning was relieved, that the guy was a good sport. Wait a second... Random thoughts out of no were? Oh god, please no Lightning looked at Crimson "Have you talked to a princess called Ruby Rose? If so, then i might have an answer for your problem" Said Lightning

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"Have you talked to a princess called Ruby Rose? If so, then i might have an answer for your problem" Said Lightning

 

"She took me in for the night, I was going to ask her some questions but well she just sorta threw me out. But yes I have met her... she tied to the strange thoughts I assume?" So, we have an somewhat evil magic user... great this should be fun actually. "If so, then what can be done?"

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"She took me in for the night, I was going to ask her some questions but well she just sorta threw me out. But yes I have met her... she tied to the strange thoughts I assume?" So, we have an somewhat evil magic user... great this should be fun actually. "If so, then what can be done?"

 

"Well, my friend. She can implant thoughts in to people. Which is why you probably think about something random." Lightning looked thoughtful for a bit "As for how to stop it... I really don't know. She usually toys with some random ponies, and then stops, when she has had enough." Explained Lightning "But if you get random thoughts don't listen to them, i think she will eventually stop." Said Lightning with a smile "Oh and i'll answer some questions for you now if you like" 

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But if you get random thoughts don't listen to them, i think she will eventually stop." Said Lightning with a smile "Oh and i'll answer some questions for you now if you like" 

 

"Your telling me that you should just let someone manipulate the minds of random ponies. Citizens of this kingdom no less?... Why?! Thats criminal! The thoughts she planted in my head if listened to would hae caused chaos and heart brake. How can you just let her do it?" 

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"Your telling me that you should just let someone manipulate the minds of random ponies. Citizens of this kingdom no less?... Why?! Thats criminal! The thoughts she planted in my head if listened to would hae caused chaos and heart brake. How can you just let her do it?" 

 

Lightning was getting irritated "Well, if it would have been me who was king, she would have been executed" Said Lightning "I don't have the authority to arrest her" Said Lightning with a sad frown "Everyday i watch ponies fall victim to her stupid enternainment" spat Lightning

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"Everyday i watch ponies fall victim to her stupid enternainment" spat Lightning

 

"Well confront her about it then! You can do that, its not against the law, challenge her and her messed up ethics! Heck if you won't I will, this is ridiculous! Take a step outside your jurisdiction and just act as a concerned citizen" he said with almost an air of command 

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Ticktock could hear the conversation from a little away and decided to join in starting by quickly saluting Lightning then speaking to the mysterious pony "Well there are times when we have all wanted to do that but she pretty much makes the rules around here she would have us kicked out and leave us as another one of her play things, that is a good thing about being a guard she knows she cant do anything deadly to you... most of the time."  

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Princess ruby Rose overheard the converstation via her maid's reports. "Ma'am, there have been rumours about you."

"Whatever, lets drive out of here." She got in a limo with her chauffeur. Some ponies were following her on the highway. She got her chauffeur to go faster. She then struggled to power her magic to implant a long vision into many ponies. As the limo was about to make a turn left on the highway, she released the vision. For ten minute, all ponies around but not in the limo, saw the limo as if it were turning right and moving quickly.

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"Well there are times when we have all wanted to do that but she pretty much makes the rules around here she would have us kicked out and leave us as another one of her play things, that is a good thing about being a guard she knows she cant do anything deadly to you... most of the time."  

 

"Then your not only a coward but you shy away from your responsibility as a guard! If enough of you banned together to she couldn't do diddly squat!... But I can see that none of you are going to be any help, looks like I may need to take matters into my own hoofs" 

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Ticktock used his magic to lift the earth pony by his neck "Don't you dare question my responsibility as a royal guard my job is to protect royalty and that includes the princess I spend everyday within 50 feet of her I am probably one of the easiest targets for her but I still do my job everyday without failure!"

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Ticktock used his magic to lift the earth pony by his neck "Don't you dare question my responsibility as a royal guard my job is to protect royalty and that includes the princess I spend everyday within 50 feet of her I am probably one of the easiest targets for her but I still do my job everyday without failure!"

Laughing through the strangling sensation "Oh and poor commoners just have to fend for themselves? Your no guard you a lap dog! Go ahead and kill me, is that what you want to do?" he looked into the unicorns eyes with challenge and daring "Come on... what you waiting for?" 

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Ticktock stood there sweating a little "Don't think I wont.. I will do it just try me I will kill you just like that and you will regret messing with a decorated colonel of the unicorn legion you mess with me I will end you." Ticktock didn't really want to hurt the earth pony but he had to show he wasn't a coward.  

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Ticktock stood there sweating a little "Don't think I wont.. I will do it just try me I will kill you just like that and you will regret messing with a decorated colonel of the unicorn legion you mess with me I will end you." Ticktock didn't really want to hurt the earth pony but he had to show he wasn't a coward.  

he laughed a bit more " Put me down you oaf. This was a test and I'm sad to say you've failed." he chuckled some more "You threaten an innocent, you ignore the common pony... what do you superiors have to say about this?" he nodded towards Lighting "would he approve of cold blooded murder?" 

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he laughed a bit more " Put me down you oaf. This was a test and I'm sad to say you've failed." he chuckled some more "You threaten an innocent, you ignore the common pony... what do you superiors have to say about this?" he nodded towards Lighting "would he approve of cold blooded murder?"

Lightning shook his head "The guy is right, while i appreciate you trying to defend the guards honor, and such"."I don't tolerate threats from the guards to the innocents" Lightning sighed "I can't punish since you aren't in my legion" He then looked at Crimson "I'm sorry on the guards behalf, this will not happen in the future"

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Lightning shook his head "The guy is right, while i appreciate you trying to defend the guards honor, and such"."I don't tolerate threats from the guards to the innocents" Lightning sighed "I can't punish since you aren't in my legion" He then looked at Crimson "I'm sorry on the guards behalf, this will not happen in the future"

"Right. But is something going to be done about that mind manipulating royal? Or are you just going to let her get away with it. sir I am of the mind that no one is above the law. Aren't you?" This is place is fraught with corruption... something must be done and if they don't act I will. He waited for a response 

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"Right. But is something going to be done about that mind manipulating royal? Or are you just going to let her get away with it. sir I am of the mind that no one is above the law. Aren't you?" This is place is fraught with corruption... something must be done and if they don't act I will. He waited for a response 

 

Lightning thought about it. He then with a steel glace looked at Crimson. "If you can create a distraction, or something along the lines of that, then i'll be able to sneak in, and assasinate her." Lightning shook his head "Can't believe that i'm going to assasinate a princess, but it has to be done"

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Lightning thought about it. He then with a steel glace looked at Crimson. "If you can create a distraction, or something along the lines of that, then i'll be able to sneak in, and assasinate her." Lightning shook his head "Can't believe that i'm going to assasinate a princess, but it has to be done"

He laughed " Oh you soldier types are sure funny. Tell me have you ever heard of the word reform? We can't just kill her like a bunch of vigilantes. Where's the justice in that. We must confront her and give her a chance to repent of her ways. And perhaps some jail time would be good for her as well" 

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With no sight of the Unicorn General showing up I decide to return to my barracks. I get to my Barracks and lay on a cloud and think to myself. I wonder why the General didn't show up, I wonder if something happened to him. I should probably tell General Lightning but he seems to have a lot on his plate right now. I look into the blue sky and continue to think of something I could say to Lightning.

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