Odyssey 5,719 July 27, 2015 Share July 27, 2015 A quick little drawing of Rainbow Dash in a Wonderbolts uniform because Dash is best pone.And since I'm always looking for different ways to improve, I'm looking for opinions. Please, feel free to give out as much constructive criticism as you can! I love critiques, whether they be positive or negative! 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P-Jay 1,987 July 27, 2015 Share July 27, 2015 (edited) well, i think that her mane/tail should be a little more pointed on the ends, and that her muzzle could be tad more mare-like. i dunno, it just seems like her muzzle is a little too pointed. but only a little. and maybe add eye-lashes? besides that, i think this is a wonderful piece of art, and i look forward to your next drawing. stay awesome. Edited July 27, 2015 by PeytonJay 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProjectRKA 2,848 July 27, 2015 Share July 27, 2015 This is looking great, Ody. A thing I think you need to focus on is her hind legs. The left one looks out of perspective, otherwise it's pretty good. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Odyssey 5,719 July 28, 2015 Author Share July 28, 2015 Thanks, you two! It means a lot to be when I receive some genuine feedback. Also, I've edited the background. Does it make the image better or worse? You decide. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProjectRKA 2,848 July 28, 2015 Share July 28, 2015 Thanks, you two! It means a lot to be when I receive some genuine feedback. Also, I've edited the background. Does it make the image better or worse? You decide. Background definitely makes it look more interesting. And hind leg still need to be improved, or are you trying to make it stretched ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Treble Sketch 360 July 28, 2015 Share July 28, 2015 Oh! wow! The first look really blew me away. All the colours, style and the idea. The idea of RD being a Wonderbolt isn't new, but I find it interesting in how each individual artist take it in their own style. (Then I used some magic and found the original, http://octavla.deviantart.com/art/Rising-Star-549263611) The brush stroke used in this really was a good choice, with the outline in black and the other inner strokes done in colour. As for the strokes, did you want a constant curves throughout the artwork? The hind legs seems a bit off, it makes me feel like her back is curved to the right from where she is standing. The shadows feel very consistent and the lighting looks good Drawing on a tablet isn't easy, I've been only able to draw with a pencil ever since I started drawing. Since you're experimenting with a tablet, I'd say just keep on working on the style until you find something that you'll be happy with I've been trying to find a style that I like to draw with, but currently this is my favourite sketch. Trying to replicate it isn't easy ^^" Writing reviews or critiques isn't my forte, but I hope this helps a bit Thanks, you two! It means a lot to be when I receive some genuine feedback. Also, I've edited the background. Does it make the image better or worse? You decide. Woah! Background of any artwork is very important, it needs to kinda, promote the artwork a bit more. Make it catchy, this background sure did it's job 1 Twitter | (Art) Blog | Steam | GitLab/GitHub Ask for my Telegram, Discord, or Riot if you want them to contact me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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