critique wanted The Prince of all Ponies! (DBZ reference XD)

[sleepypony 180]

hello every pony sorry it's been so long sense I've posted something haha. let me know what I can do to help make this better

 

 

[Xeltor23 704]

hello every pony sorry it's been so long sense I've posted something haha. let me know what I can do to help make this better

 

 

the pony prince.jpg

Vegeta? Is that you? What happened?

 

By the way, good job on this

[sleepypony 180]

haha thank you took me a little bit to do this been a bit busy haha

[Hazy Skies 1,010]

It looks awesome I can't stop saying that in Vegeta's voice though "PRINCE OF ALL PONIES!" hahaha xD

 

PROS:

- Omg, that shading of the hair is AMAZING!   So freaking awesome! Especially with the tail..

- Good job with the body and legs, well proportioned

- Good expressions, matched Vegeta's proud warrior look very well..

 

CONS:

- His right eye seems a little extruded..

- His ear is kinda small..

- The back leg joints at the back seem a little sharp :/

- I think it'd look better without wings.. Humans don't have wings, but can use Ki to fly..

  Same is true with Saiyans, Nameks.. or pretty much every race ever with Ki control xD

- And come to think of it, Maybe it'd be better without a horn too.. it'd be better so see him

  looking awesome in a standing upright pose, with the correct posture in charging his

  Galick Gun rather than just shooting it from his horn.. but again that's my opinion

 

Hope this helped and keep up the awesome work..

Especially with that epic hair

Can't wait to see more, like.. What would pony Piccolo look like?

Edited October 2, 2015 by AURAequine

[Minty Beam 46]

I think you art looks amazing, and it has so much potential!

something you could do is make the mane larger, and draw the hair to be more flowing

[sleepypony 180]

Thanks for the tips the reason why I did the wings and horn was for more of the alicorn look seeings how they were princesses haha. I was thinking on doing a bit of a ki blast for his next one. When I find the time to do it haha and I did kinda notice his eye was off I couldn't quite figure out how to fix that at first but I think I'll go ahead and redraw him. I still plan on his ki blasts shooting from his hooves though the wings and horn are more of an aesthetic to show he is a prince. Because I totally agree with him not really using magic haha

[Sporemane 546]

I wonder what Vegeta would say if he saw this XD

[Minty Beam 46]

http://ct.fra.bz/ol/fz/sw/i56/5/9/7/frabz-youd-be-insayan-not-to-share-my-page-1ee200.jpg

 

 something along the lines of this I assume

Edited October 23, 2015 by Minty357

[Light Diamond 950]

This looks good especially his hair

[sleepypony 180]

thanks every pony here is another I'm working on currently. let me know if there is anything else I can fix with this one =)