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critique wanted I made a new OC. Critique wanted please


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I recently created a new OC and I really like it. I really want this to be a good one, so I am here to ask for critique. What do you like about him? Anything I should change or get rid of?

 

https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/carabiner-cb-r8948

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This was a well designed character. Honestly I view him as more middle aged than mid-20s. I feel like that setting up and running a climbing shop takes a few years to really establish. Him wanting to go into the unexplored west to climb a new mountain would make a great mid-life crisis. Otherwise, I wouldn't change a thing.

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This was a well designed character. Honestly I view him as more middle aged than mid-20s. I feel like that setting up and running a climbing shop takes a few years to really establish. Him wanting to go into the unexplored west to climb a new mountain would make a great mid-life crisis. Otherwise, I wouldn't change a thing.

I think you are right. I'll change that. Maybe add 10-15 years. Thanks.

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