critique wanted Here's what I have so far on my OC (help appreciated)

[Silver Stream. 708]

Please bear with me, since I've only been into MLP for a year.....but since I have experience in making original characters and they ended up quite popular, I didn't struggle too much. I'll also like to give credit to @Pandoraxe for listening to me ramble about my raw idea. And he also assisted in helping me with some cutiemark ideas. 

 

Basically, my OC will be a unicorn named Silver Stream (and yes it is familiar to the Silver Stream in the Warriors series but not the same character). What I have so far is basically a guideline for me. I'll develop more on her throughout possible roleplay or simply might come up with new ideas the longer I carry her as my persona

 

Back Story:

She was born in Canterlot and forced to live in high society. She was yet to receive her cutiemark even when she reached the adult stage....and lived in a world of Depression up until she finally left on her own to discover other stuff that was out there. She first visited Griffonstone where she learned about self-worth and gained a feisty attitude though it doesn't really define her personality as a whole. She then went to Yakyakastan finding inner strength. After her longs travels of being away from home, she finally returned but remained a Blank Flank. After making amends with the little friends she had in Canterlot, she settled in Ponyville and discovered Friendship (DUH). After meeting with Zecora, she took an interest in healing and helping the unfortunate and supporting people who needs it. It was then she received her cutiemark: a whirlpool with violet water lillies: representing her strong personality clashing with her beautiful perspective on the world and it's inhabitants. It also implies her talent of healing others on an emotional level (water being the element of healing) but she also has a little bit of knowledge for herbs as well thanks to Zecora.

 

 

Personality:

As I stated, she does have a strong personality. Silver is usually very protective of her friends and doesn't hesitate to stand up to anyone when they are stepping out of line. However, she easily keeps herself contained when it comes to losing her temper, and enjoys being around other friends. If she isn't busy hanging out with her friends, she's alone in the basking in the beautiful scenery of Equestria's wildlife or swimming in the river. She has a natural talent of healing ponies and other creatures on an emotional level...sometimes she does not need magic to help with this since she's good with talking to others thanks to the experience of encountering other creatures after she left Canterlot. At times, close friends will harmlessly call her "Silver Tongue" instead because she speaks so eloquently. Silver Stream can sometimes be a flirt, though she never flirts to get something in return. Other characteristics: a good sense of humor, compassionate, loyal, kind, and intuitive

 

 

Appearance:

Silver Stream will have a snow white flank with an endomorph body type (medium). Her mane is shoulder length while her tail is fairly longer than normal. At times she will tie up her tail in a decent style to avoid it dragging behind her on the ground. She possesses a blended colored mane and tail of blues and violets that matches the water lily on her whirlpool cutiemark. 

 

Edited November 4, 2015 by Princess Sunset

[PROJECT: Simon 3,954]

Traveling to find something they want.. it's a really good story ^^ You have to admit that your oc is great so far ^^

 

And the appearance.. did you put that character's image to show us how it would look like? ^^;;

[Silver Stream. 708]

Thank you.

 

And I only posted that image to give an example on the colors I'm imagining for her. She isn't actually that character or anything.

 

I've yet to find an artist to actually bring my Of to life yet so that was all I could use

[Silver Stream. 708]

A very talented friend of mine managed to create my pony persona for me in the matter of 30minutes. SILVER STREAM IS NOW ALIVE:

 

Edited November 4, 2015 by Princess Sunset

[Silver Stream. 708]

Dumping another Silver Stream art piece