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Prelude

Act 1
The Cruise

Act 2
The fellowship

Act 3
The nightmare

Act 4
The mysterious Island

Act 5
The connection of friends

Act 6
The Scouting of the Island

Act 7
The Poison

Act 8
The Flower of pure white

Act 9
The mysterious pony

Act 10
"Can we be friends?"

Act 11
Final : The rescue


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Link to OOC: https://mlpforums.com/topic/140643-ship-wreck/

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It was a perfect day , not quite sunny and Not quite cloudy , you could define perfect , many ponies are having the best day for the start of there fun, and spend there in the Cruise of dreams, The cruise was gigantic and is one of the biggest anf beautiful cruses in equestria , many ponies stared in awe and others went into there respective lunes to enter the cruise.

ACT 1
THE CRUISE

A pony started galloping to the cruise looking for his entrance, he has a flesh colored body and a dark brown mane and tail, and below eyes , he has 2 dots for the right and one for the left.

and he is born a unicorn.

Dusk- Man , this cruise has so many ponies , -_-""
I just want to have a great time, but seriously?!! , I cant even get in the cruise!!!

Guard pony- ALL ABOARD!!

Dusk- O.O !!!!??
ey wait , I'm still out here!!!
then he ran towards the rntrance and finally gets in now he is looking for his room

Room 134
occupied by Dusk night and....

"Oh im her, room 134"

then he entered and quickly went to sleep.
It was a perfect day , not quite sunny and Not quite cloudy , you could define perfect , many ponies are having the best day for the start of there fun, and spend there in the Cruise of dreams, The cruise was gigantic and is one of the biggest anf beautiful cruses in equestria , many ponies stared in awe and others went into there respective lunes to enter the cruise.

ACT 1
THE CRUISE

A pony started galloping to the cruise looking for his entrance, he has a flesh colored body and a dark brown mane and tail, and below eyes , he has 2 dots for the right and one for the left.

and he is born a unicorn.

Dusk- Man , this cruise has so many ponies , -_-""
I just want to have a great time, but seriously?!! , I cant even get in the cruise!!!

Guard pony- ALL ABOARD!!

Dusk- O.O !!!!??
ey wait , I'm still out here!!!
then he ran towards the rntrance and finally gets in now he is looking for his room

Room 134
occupied by Dusk night and....

"Oh im her, room 134"

then he entered and quickly went to sleep.

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Trivy trotted around the ship, looking for her room while dragging her heavy suitcase behind her. Lucky for her, her magic did the heavy lifting. She had put on her usual sweater and comfy socks, not caring how she looked even though it was a boat full of exquisite ponies. She would dress up later that night, but for now, it was all about comfort and relaxing.

 

"Room 131.. 132... Room 133..." She mumbled as searched for the number that would match the ones on the reservation she was holding in front of her eyes.

 

Panic Moon was strumming around the ship, slowly, avoiding any interaction except for the occasional shy smile towards the staff. She had mumbled into many ponies on her way... apologizing for it even though most of the times it was not her fault. She looked at her hoofs in shame before she started carefully again, repeating the process many times before she final- >OOF<

 

''Oh I uh... I'm so sorry I didn't mean to bump into you.'' Moon said shyly as she looked at the pony in front of her.

 

''Oh don't worry about it. Totally my fault. I wasn't looking where I was going.'' Trivy smiled kindly to the introverted stranger.

 

''It's still my fault though, it's not the first time I bumped into somepony today." And not even a second later, Moon had already passed her in her usual panic of social interaction.

 

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''Strange pony... Anyway.. where was I? Oh yes right. Room 134! Here it is." Trivy knocked on the door before opening it with her card she received with her reservation bill. She dragged the suitcase inside the room before meeting the dark maned stallion with a smile. "Hi there! My name is Trivy.''

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Emerald lay on the top deck of the ship it had been ages since her last break. Intact she had never had one being a pirate was hard especially when you're an Earthpony practically running her own ship alone. She looked out at the dock the golden retriever sat majestically in port it was a true sight to behold. The flag four emeralds surrounding a map flapping gently in the wind as the boat bobbed up and down as the waves gently lapped against it. With a hearty "arr she be a fine lookin' ship an' 'ats no mistake"

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dusk was still sleepy , He did not mind the door moving,

while he's eyes were still closed , "Hmm? , must be my roommate.

 

then dusk heard her introducing herself.

"she said trivy?, must be her name"

 

then he sat while eyes are like this -_- , and said

"Good to have you , I'm dusk , great to be your acquaintance.

then he went back to sleep.

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"Nice to meet you too Du-'' Trivy was interrupted by his snore as he went back to sleep. "Well... that's rather rude." She mumbled to herself. She lifted her shoulders and started unpacking her things for the trip. Not 10 minutes later, she was done and bored so she decided to take a look around. She closed the door behind her, softly, without waking up Dusk before she trotted off exploring the ship.

 


 

Moon had finally found the room she was directed to. Even if did take her almost an hour to find it. She open the door softly, gave a put when she noticed two beds inside the room. ''I thought I would finally be alone here... Seems they didn't listen to my request for a private room." She threw her saddle bag angry onto her bed. She opened up her bag, got out her drawing paper and pencils, laid onto the ground and started drawing, not ready to leave her room yet now everypony was getting aboard.

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"I guess just riding on is all I have to do", Assassin thought to herself while walking towards the ship. She totally forgot about finding her own room. Instead finding her notes, she stood still, trying to find the others. 

 

"Alone, every single time", Assassin looked down, walking, and eventually made a huge noise of bumping on a door. "What..", she looked up, and read "Room 134". She entered without thinking, and saw two ponies. All Assassin did was staying still, waiting for their reaction. 

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Hmm?

another room mate?

 

opens left eye

 

0__- then right

-__0 then both

0__0 ............

shocked the appearance of another pony,

"I dod not expect to have another room mate , but there are only 2 beds here.

but that was only the the thought of dusk , then out of nowhere dusk just instictively ask her

 

"what are you?" said dusk to the stranger.

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"I'm not staying here, don't worry, I just got lost, that's all. And that is my question, who are you?", asked Assassin. She glared his appearance and spoke once more, "Are you harmless? I don't where to go.. are you able to help me with finding my room?". She made a worrying face. 


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"ohh  forgive my rudeness",

trying to act like a gentle pony.

''I dusk night , nice to meet you and to answer you other question",

"you will be able to find your room at your slip , given to you by the guard outside who is still shouting"

opens the window

"ALL ABOARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" yelled by the guard

 

looked at her 

"you still haven't answered my question yet though, but i'll make my question more decent"

"who are you?"

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Assassin sighed when she heard the repeated question. "Who am I? Is that really important, in this situation? I'm just a wanderer, it's nothing serious. I'm pretty lazy to get the slip, I'll just stand.. right.. here.. I guess..". Assassin looked around and spoke again, "I'll just.. stay outside". After she finished her speaking, Assassin left the room and stood in front of the door. 

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-__-

 

"She entered my room without permission and still went out of m room without answering my question , what a nice gal."

dusk got up and opened the door , surprisingly he bumped into some pony.

"who the heck would block my way?"

 

his eyes widened when he saw the same pony a while ago.

 (gasp!!!!)

YOU!!!!!!!!!

YOu!!!

You!!

you!

you?

"who are you again?"

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-__-

 

"She entered my room without permission and still went out of m room without answering my question , what a nice gal."

dusk got up and opened the door , surprisingly he bumped into some pony.

"who the heck would block my way?"

 

his eyes widened when he saw the same pony a while ago.

 (gasp!!!!)

YOU!!!!!!!!!

YOu!!!

You!!

you!

you?

"who are you again?"

"Well.. that kinda hurt.. I just thought it would be pretty nice if I just stand still until we get to our destination. And.. the pain and this.. standing up is really affecting me.. right.. now..", Right after Assassin finished her speech, she collapsed and fainted.

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A thirty-something couple, Refund Check and Ruby Shears, walked together down the hall of cabins on the cruise ship, Refund pulled a cart carrying their belongings while his wife looked at their room key, aiming to match its number to one on the door.

 

"I hope you don't plan on drinking on this cruise," Refund told Ruby. "I don't want to have to usher you into the bathroom again if you get sick."

 

"If that's the case," Ruby said, "I hope you don't plan helping yourself to all the heavy cruise food. You may not fit into your best suit by the time we get back!"

 

Refund blushed and let out a light chuckle before saying, "Well, at least nice to be away from the foals for once. Nothing but peace and quiet."

 

The two stopped when they heard a commotion down the hall with two ponies bumping right into each other. One of them collapsed in front of a doorway and fainted right in front of them.

 

"I wouldn't exactly say peace and quiet," Ruby said.

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Trivy had found herself at the bar, ordered a Triple sec with apple juice, raspberry liqueur, Dr. Pepper, some ice and a straw. After that had made its way into her blood, she decided it would be time for a double Ginger Scotch that would definitely misguide the way to her room. She stumbled across the ship, feeling a slight headache arise and a nagging feeling inside her stomach. The smell of the sea was certainly not helping. She walked towards the railing, leaning over, looking down at the sea. She gave a yawn before falling a sleep for two minutes, her face planted onto the railing.

 

Luckily one of the staff members was nice enough to tap her shoulder and show her the right way. She thanked him with a sweet smile before she headed of, in search of her room, the numbers still dancing in her head. 1...2.. no wait 3 and then a 4

 


 

Moon was snapped out of her drawing trance at the sound of weird commotion outside. She opened the door slightly, peeking through it's creak. ''one, two, three f-'' She looked at the pony laying on the ground... ''Three creatures who are able to start a conversation. Best stay away.'' She mumbled to herself, she closed the door, maybe a little too loud, not her intention, hoping no pony had noticed her. She even jumped a little at the sound of the door falling shut. "Stupid door." She mumbled angry underneath her breath.  

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"what the? , seriously?, what is wrong with this day? ,can't a pony get a normal day for once? , man .

Dusk wanted to pick her up and put in his room , but he saw a couple in front of him."

 

@ the couple

please would you mind watching her for me?

And can I ask for where your rooms are?

, I have a feeling that you did not get your slip from the guard outside.

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"Of course we have our slip," Ruby said. "We couldn't have gotten on without one."

 

"We're staying in Room 136," Refund told Dusk, taking a moment to glance at the numbers across the doors down the hall. "And by the looks of it, I think you're our neighbors."

 

"I guess I can stay if my husband can unload our belongings," Ruby suggested. "At least until she wakes up."

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"Of course we have our slip," Ruby said. "We couldn't have gotten on without one."

 

"We're staying in Room 136," Refund told Dusk, taking a moment to glance at the numbers across the doors down the hall. "And by the looks of it, I think you're our neighbors."

 

"I guess I can stay if my husband can unload our belongings," Ruby suggested. "At least until she wakes up."

After a short conversation, Assassin woke up from her faint. She saw a pony standing beside, she immediately stood up, pushed the pony against the wall and glared. "I don't want this to get worse, who are you? Why are you here? What are you doing to me?", Assassin asked fiercely. 


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Dusk ignores her , anyways thanks , and please look after ms pony who I still dont know her name.

 

then he went on to get the slip of the pony.

 

outside the cruis.

 

dusk - Hi mr. !!!!!!!___ dusk was interrupted because of the___

guard- all aboard!!!!

dusk- "man , he never gets tired"

 

excuse me mr. guard but I would like to get a slip from my friend.

guard- ok sir , what is his name?

dusk- you mean her?

guard - oh sorry , what's her name?

dusk- ................uhm........

-_- , "dang it"

 

this will be a while.

 

 

after defining all her physical attributes.

 

guard - ohh is this her?

dusk- 0__0 finally -__-.

 

then he went back to them

"so its assasin huh"

awesome name hahaha ,

better give this to her.

 

name:assasin

room: 134

bed: 2

here you go ms. assasin

then dusk quickly gave the slip to her and went back to his room and fell asleep at the bed.

"man , what a day"..

"I do hope the foods here will take all the bad luck away , because of the deliciousness and sweet taste of sea foods, but ill take a cat nap for now."

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Ruby Shears couldn't answer Dusk, grunting as Assassin pushed her against the wall with no time to defend herself. She didn't expect this kind of welcome from a pony she was trying to help. "Unhoof me! What's the meaning of this?" Ruby yelped. She then took a few deep breaths before figuring how she should answer Assassin's rapid-fire questions while hoping to avoid a scene. "I'm Ruby Shears and I'm a mane-dresser from Bucklyn. I'm just here to enjoy a nice cruise with my husband. We're in the next cabin over."

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Trivy was whistling happy as she walked around the corner as she finally found her room. To her surprise, however, several ponies were standing outside the door, with one pony even pinning somepony to the wall. "Hey, what the hay is this?" She said with confusion and a slight anger. "Put that poor pony down! Pick a fight in front of someone else's door." Trivy said as she grabbed Assassin with her levitation magic to pull her away.

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-_________- "" zzZZZX

 

"dusk could not take a nap because of the commotion outside"

dusk- seriously, cant a pony have a nice nap?"

then dusk went out of bed , opened the door and saw a pony levitating , the pony named assassin in face of bloodlust, and the nice pony who has a partner whom I still dont know the name with a face of "getting ready to brawl" posture and saw Trivy , his roommate applying magic to assassin.

 

but dusk just said

"guys would you keep your commotion down a bit?, you ponies aren't the only tourists here"

 

that said , dusk went out of the hall then up the cruise to liok at the view.

He was in awe at the view.

 

"man , I wish you were here with me right now"

looks at his pendant.

 

"mary" :-)

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After Assassin was pulled away, she immediately snapped out and shouted, "What the hay am I doing? When I woke up from my faint, there was this weird pony standing right in front of me! Obviously she was trying to do something to me..". She then glared at Ruby. 

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After Assassin was pulled away, she immediately snapped out and shouted, "What the hay am I doing? When I woke up from my faint, there was this weird pony standing right in front of me! Obviously she was trying to do something to me..". She then glared at Ruby. 

 

''Well, for starters, you're attacking a fellow passenger who, in my eyes, has done nothing wrong.'' Trivy said as she let Assasin dangle in the air with her magic. ''She wasn't trying to do anything, If you pay close enough attention, you could see these two are here on holiday, taking a break from their childer. How do I know this? I observe.'' she said as she pointed to the mare and her husband. ''Now, I'll let you down easy if you promise to leave this pooor couple alone. You can hit me as many times as you want, just don't be a jerk alright?''

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Assassin tried to move and had no luck. After some wailing, she stopped with exhaustion and spoke to the pony, "Alright, fine.. fine! I didn't even plan on attacking and ruining their vacation! Just let me down.. good thing I don't use magic because of my culture, you would've been taken down right now..". Assassin glared. 

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Having calmed down from her encounter, Ruby stepped away from the wall and turned to Trivy. "Thank you," she said. "You see, I was only trying to help her because she had fainted. I was about to take her pulse when she shoved me against the wall." She then turned to Assassin whom Trivy still held in her aura. "Now, you see what happens when you jump to conclusions."

 

Meanwhile Refund Check poked his head outside the cabin door, having finished unpacking his belongings and his wife's. "What happened?" he asked.

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