Script Dangles 231 October 29, 2015 Share October 29, 2015 Heya, Everypony! I just created a new OC that I'm quite proud of. Please let me know what you think about Smoking Mirror! SD 1 Avatar created by the incredibly talented Pucksterv!!! My OC, Script Dangles! My OC, Smoking Mirror! Ask Script Dangles! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Script Dangles 231 October 30, 2015 Author Share October 30, 2015 Venomous, First, thank you for your thoughts. Second...I'm not really sure, honestly. Probably because I, myself, have unnatually long, dark eyelashes for a guy. I'm guessing I see myself in the mirror so much, I never even notice that detail. You're right, though: Maybe I should adjust that. SD 1 Avatar created by the incredibly talented Pucksterv!!! My OC, Script Dangles! My OC, Smoking Mirror! Ask Script Dangles! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonPop 3,350 October 30, 2015 Share October 30, 2015 I really like him. Especially his inner conflict. I find that very interesting. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tao 7,802 October 30, 2015 Share October 30, 2015 I love a good backstory with a changling! Colors good and Keep the eye lashes, adds something a bit difference in him being a male which also the name is lovely: Smoking Mirror! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Script Dangles 231 November 6, 2015 Author Share November 6, 2015 Thanks so much, Cinnamon Pop & Tao! I'm considering asking one of the Moderators if they would mind me playing him in one of the various role-playing games on the Forum. Do you think he would be a good addition? Would you change anything to make him better suited to any of those games? 1 Avatar created by the incredibly talented Pucksterv!!! My OC, Script Dangles! My OC, Smoking Mirror! Ask Script Dangles! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenshiro 13,493 November 6, 2015 Share November 6, 2015 I really like your non-pony OC. your mane color unveils your eyes Smoking Mirror. Awsome design =) ''' 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyoshi Frost Wolf 41,570 November 6, 2015 Share November 6, 2015 Oh wow, the descriptions for him are very well done with excellent choices for words and the color scheme fits him well. Very interesting story for a changeling. I like the aspect of him being able to harness magic, that is an interesting touch to it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hazy Skies 1,010 November 6, 2015 Share November 6, 2015 (edited) I like it Though one thing to add to the design, is the holes in the legs and stuff.. as that is a major feature changelings posses.. It'd look cool to just have those holes on the bottom half of the legs.. (as depicted by the image, showing that the legs are the parts that he cannot change) One thing I kinda am not too keep on is the name "Smoking" ... I think "Smokey" would fit better.. Smokey Mirror.. Also changelings don't have cutie marks.. Specific changelings are made unique by certain features to them like color or differences in appearance.. Changelings would also be differentiated by voice.. Remember, having a lack of a cutie mark doesn't make your character any less unique or special.. Edited November 6, 2015 by AURAequine 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnArtisticPontato 91 November 6, 2015 Share November 6, 2015 I'm not really one for pony creator, so I suggest you have an artist draw your OC while still keeping the elements. I also think it should look a little less pony-like. I liked the story, but it can always be improved upon. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ze Ubermage 226 November 6, 2015 Share November 6, 2015 Nice color combo I like it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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